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Fluttershy happens upon everything she's ever wished for. Beatiful foals, the stallion of her dreams, she's happy. But in a turn of events, is everything she has be too good to be true?

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Awww... :yay:

That was really cute ^^

G>>1444280 Glad you think so. :coolphoto:awesome glasses on to you.

That was sad for a moment:fluttercry:, then YAY! :yay:

Is it okay for me to put it in a group?

This was really sweet and adorable. I loved it. Fluttershy would be so cute with foals of her own. :eeyup::yay:

A little more spacing I think, and some indents would help with the ease of reading, other then that I enjoyed it a lot :flutterrage::::heart::eeyup:

1452408 Sorry about the spacing and stuff then. Thanks for reading.:derpytongue2:

Thanks everypony. Your comments and views are appreciated!:twilightsmile:

This was my first Fluttermac and I still LOVE it!:yay:

I liked that, maybe a little bit too fast, but a nice little story :)

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