Twilight at the reception to the wedding she wasn't the only one suspicous of Cadence's behaviour!
She gets to spend some time with the colt who not only shared her suspicions but actually tried to go and looked for her!
What revelations will be made?
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This needs some serious editing. And you should try to slow down the pace. It feels way too rushed.
That being said, i do enjoy any bluelight ships I come across. They're quite rare.
While I agree a bit of editing wouldn't be bad I rather liked the story and found it charming. Are you sure you are just going to do this one chapter?
okay anyone who would like to edit this feel free to do so and then send it to me on a link
Errors aside, this was a really nice story. Too bad it's only going to be this chapter, but I can understand.
if you want this continued I can write a sequel
I agree with Frankie in that its a shame its only one chapter which is what I was trying to say earlier but I'm afraid it came across wrong. ((I shouldn't comment with only 3 hours of sleep.)) I am left wondering what happens next since I always find Twilight Blueblood ships interesting.
1363667 YES YES YES! WRITE A SEQUEL!
This part is missing a word... most likely "pay"
As to my personal thoughts on this story... I'll be honest, I don't like the pairing but the retake on Blueblood's character is one I do like.
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thanks
oh jeez why him why that arrogant self-centered good for jack shit ass hole of all people like blueblood had to be involved in this story no offense but i just hate him with all that i am
haha! I don't know why I'm so obsessed with Twi X BlueBlood shippings!
Twiblood is best ship
I liked the idea behind it, but it felt like it could have been written better.
This is my favorite Twilight ship! there aren't enough of these!.
Interesting idea, but give it time to develop.
Needs revision, and possibly editing for integration into a cohesive timeline with your other stories with Blueblood and Twilight. Or just revision, if it's meant to stand alone.
Thumbs up either way.
although I had a little trouble reading because of the writing errors, I actually love this story
sequel please?!
Quite a nice little romantic story