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After defeating the Predators, Oleander makes it to Equestria and meets Princess Twilight Sparkle. See how this goes as she just wants to study the knowledge of this new world and has no interest in making friends.
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Finally a crossover with MLP and TFH
REALLY good start to this crossover story. Love the work that went into the exchanges, characterization and future chapter set-up in all the right places. REALLY good reflection on Oleander's part concerning your spin on the outcome of Oleander's "battle ladder" ending as well as Twilight referencing Sunset Shimmer. And, yeah, I see your point about NOT wanting to include Starlight. And, really, Twilight? Is the reminder of how YOU used to be really that nerve-racking?
Seriously though, really good work on this first chapter and I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this.
REALLY good job on the latest chapter. Yeah, love the work on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I loved Fred's recap of his first trip to Equestria/run-in with Starswirl, the bits of foreshadowing/fate tempting considering Cozy Glow, Twilight's observations on Fred being basically a mix of Spike and Discord as well as Oleander's first meetings with Pinkie and Applejack.
Very certainly going to be looking forward to more of this.
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Twilight hasn’t brought up spike or discord yet
Well I will say I am glad you're decided Oleander will get along with some ponies and not the simplistic "she just has bad reactions to everypony" plot. AJ and Fluttershy I think Oleander will get along with fine, Rarity and Rainbow ehh not so much. By the end I expect mixed feelings toward Twilight in a lot of ways they are the same (Big Shock right, the TFH Fighter that replaced Twilight is like her)
Good question Twilight.
REALLY good job on this latest chapter. ESPECIALLY LOVED the initial misunderstanding concerning the wolf and Oleander's explanation of the Key Seeker contest. And, yeah, Twilight DOES actually have a pretty good point about how they would have an easier time against the Predators if they worked together. Definitely a good showing of both the similarities AND the differences as far as Foenum and Equestria are concerned.
REALLY looking forward to the next chapter.
As I recall the Plot of Fighting is Magic, the fan game that became Them's Fighting Herds after Hasbro came down on developer, was Changelings impersonating ponies to justify the girls fighting, with Chrysalis being the end boss with a move set where she could become the other fighters ala Shang Sung in Mortal Kombat. Beta Versions of the Mane 6, their background music and stages are still floating around the MUGEN(an abadonware game development software hacked to full functionality) community though. Hasbro had no problem when it was developer on the MUGEN software but once the developer of Skullgirls let "Mane 6"(The development team) access to their engine to make a better playing game the hammer came down.
Ooh another chapter
Great job on this chapter. And, yeah, I could see Oleander being overwhelmed by Rarity even though the latter WAS just trying to be nice, and I DID like Twilight getting Rainbow to apologize to Oleander after explaining things.
Anyway, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are pretty well done once more.
There are a few oddly-worded sentences or grammar issues I noticed, but otherwise it's a good start. Would you like me to go over them? (Either here or in PMs.)
Purple fur? On Applejack? Don't you mean orange?
That was a rather abrupt ending. Couldn't you have smoothed that out?
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This is very interesting if true. Got a source? Even if it's an archived web page?
It was a little underwhelming, but there's potential.
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Mostly Equestria Daily, a lot of easy conclusions. Mane 6 was left alone till they got the Skullgirls engine, then Hasbro DMCAed them? I saw a few screen shots from an early build with the story bits. They never got to working on Chryissi so her moveset is pure speculation.
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I'd really appreciate it if you could find either the exact Equestria Daily post or an archived copy of the Mane6.com blog post where they talked about that.
I dunno about this story so far! The pacing seems too fast! I mean, Oleander just got here, and Twilight is already pestering her about meeting all her friends, and dragging her along to see all of Ponyville! That is a lot to take in!
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Yeah even though its a fighting game, i still question why they just don't work together?
Teamwork is great
Hehehehehehe😈
Just because you are a fighter, that doesn't give you power over Royalty.
Why didn't we get an answer to this?