The Forever Tree

Scootaloo and her friends used to hang out near an impossibly tall tree, one that maybe stretched out forever.

Scootaloo had never seen the top.

Until now.

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Hillbe

Hillbe #1 · Jul 8th, 2023 · · ·

Shake your fist?
Yea like you do

Spikey darling lend me a hoof please
??? Oh a claw...

NaviNautical

NaviNautical #2 · Jul 8th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Wow, this was good! I hate to sound like a basic English teacher, but I can really appreciate the hidden themes in the story, even if it was unintentional. Of being a child, full of wonder and stories and imagination. Growing up, seeing the world as it is and remembering a simpler, more ignorant time in our lives. Or maybe, it was just a tall fucking tree!

Regardless, this was nice! Very simple, nothing too deep, but an overall good read with a story you can’t help but visualize! 10/10

ThatOneWriter

ThatOneWriter #3 · Jul 8th, 2023 · 1 · ·

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No, you're right on the money. It was kind of a reflection of how we lose that wonder and that sort of exaggerated way of looking at the world. I read a comment somewhere about how when you're a kid, the world literally seems bigger, and that just sparked something in me.

It can also just be a story of the view from a big friggin' tree not being as impressive as imagined to people who think that's too pretentious.

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