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TheAlmightySage


Hello there, I'm a slightly original writer trying his best to improve and meet unreasonable deadlines, that are already due.

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Pinkie Pie has four cousins she used to spend a lot of time with when she was younger. Pinkie decides to have a reunion with her three favorite cousins. So what happens when number four isn't invited?
Will Ponyville survive the invasion from Tumblerville?
Will Pinkie Pie be able to keep her cousins from fighting?
Will my mind be able to handle this level of pony?

Heck if I know.

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Archivist Note: I blame tumbler.
Will add character tags and etc as needed, because I have no idea where I'm going with this.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 23 )

Like I said: I blame tumbler. I'm doing this all via smart phone so it SUCKED, but Pinkie will not quit jumping up and down asking "Did ya publish it? Did ya publish it? Did ya? Did ya?" so here it is. Updates will be one every two weeks hopefully unless my phone breaks.....Celestia have mercy :raritycry:

Also there are several references in this chapter see if you can find them all.

oh god this is guna be awesome hot blooded pinkie ahhhhhhhhhhhh make it so she goes crazy on rainbow

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You have just fed my insane outline and scene creation process.:pinkiecrazy: Now I have to add another scene or chapter.

JOY :derpyderp1:

*reads the chapter*.... Sir, you better CONTINUE AND FINISH THIS STORY NAO!!!!

Also I prefer Ditzy Doo as a proper name and Derpy Hooves as a nickname. Not sure why, but that's me head canon. If you guys don't like it and enough of you tell me so I guess I'll change it somehow. Anywho the next two chapters or one really long chapter will be inspired by the Doctor obsessed Derpy tumbler blog thingy.

:twilightangry2: I am very unhappy with how this chapter turned out. The interactions between the Doctor and Ditzy were surprisingly hard and a pain to write out and feel unnatural, but that's my opinion. However! The interactions between Dreamy and Solution Pie turned out pretty good I think and were fun to write. :twilightsheepish: Chapter four should be ready in a week or so with any luck. :derpytongue2:



Also if you're gonna Fav the story please please please please please Like it as well. I'm not trying to be egotistical, but those Likes really do help what little optimism I have.

Nopony bothered commenting about the TF2 reference yet? :pinkiegasp:

Aw well, find it yerselves. :pinkiehappy:

Also the Tumbler reference for this chapter are as follows:
The tan pegsus is Crackpot from ask-crackpot.tumblr.com.
Along with Pinkie "Solution" Pie and Dreamy from askpinkiepiesolutions.tumblr.com Obviously

:twilightangry2: I'm still not happy with how I ended up writing out Ditzy and the Doctor, but it's passable I guess. :applejackunsure:

Dreamy and Solution Pie are surprisingly fun to write out, there might be more with them in another fic; I don't know yet.

Expect next chapter next week-ish :twilightsmile:

3 of 4 invites, who could be the fourth? perhaps Pinkamena? :pinkiecrazy:

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....you will see....you will see.....

Tumbler references for this chapter are: asksurprise.tumblr.com (obviously). Along with: askstalkerloo.tumblr.com it's Stalkerloo's birthday so go send her good wishes. The Fyrefly reference is from this post on the Fyrefly tumbler: thefyrefly.tumblr.com/post/33668998133

And finally my head cannon of Vinyl and Octavia being Scoots' parents is from the story No Longer Lost by KiroTalon, you can find it here: fimfiction.net/story/17090/No-Longer-Lost FREAKING READ IT

Also sorry it took an extra week to get this chapter finished, but I was stuck on how to characterize Stalkerloo for a bit.

Stalkerloo, I did not see that coming, who's next I wonder? Perhaps MOLESTIA? :trollestia: I'm taking my guess.

Somebody has been watching epic pie time...

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Eh Molly might make an appearance, but not till later in the story.

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Yeah I'm a bit of a reference lover :derpytongue2:

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It's one of my absolute favorites. :twilightsmile:

Yes, Dune references out the flank. I love that story. Go read my rewrite of the movie intro if you want.

Tumbler references: HOT BLOODED PINKIE PIE
Doctor Whooves and Derpy
Doctor Obsessed Derpy

The scene with the epic bro hoof was inspired by this awesome Tumbler post.

And yes the Doctor and Ditzy are one of my favorite ships. :twilightsmile:

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Yes, as soon as I get past chapter 3 for Apples and Wheat

So, just started reading this now, and since I want to actually get some sleep tonight I'm going to leave a comment here and continue tomorrow.

The concept seems interesting so far, regardless of whether or not someone has done anything like this before. I can't wait to see how you make the characters interact with each other in the next chapters.

I've noticed that some dialogue in all three of the previous chapters is missing commas or other in-sentence quotation marks, so that's important to check over. And I can't tell; are you spelling it "Tumberville" rather than "Tumbler" (or if we really want to be correct, "Tumblr") on purpose? If so, there's still a "Tumlber" near the end of chapter 2 you may want to fix.

Can't wait to read the rest! :twilightsmile:

I have no idea what I'm reading but I love it!

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Honestly the grammar is crap. I literally did not proof read any chapters. Why? Eh, I did it for fun so I wasn't being very serious.

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I prefer to call that one Diane.
Sounds way better to me.

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