Jake finds himself roped into a high tea with Princess Celestia and a group of snobby nobles. The lunch is boring, the tea is boring, and the nobles are boring. Jake must brave a conversation with Rarity before he can escape and get some damn coffee.
While Trixie is away performing in Baltimare, Fluttershy agrees to go with Rarity and Twilight to the new karaoke bar in Ponyville. While there, she might agree to sing one song...maybe.
Eh it's okay for a first story in nearly seven years, but I could've been a bit more descriptive; granted I am my own most ruthless critic I'm trying to find the time to write, but work is rather demanding of my time. Fortunately I can write on my phone's notepad so it's slow, but I am writing.
That was very interesting. The phrase 'short but sweet' fits rather well here, and I can see why there are no down votes. I wish I had found this 17 weeks ago!
Archivist's Notation: A short story written while listening to "Happy Little Clouds (Bob Ross)" by melodysheep.
Written in four days with as little dialogue as possible as a personal challenge.
See if you can spot all the references.
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It's a bit rough and not as descriptive as I wanted it to be, but it's passable for me.
That wasn't bad man, you should keep writing, unless you are already writing, in which case keep writing anyways.
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Eh it's okay for a first story in nearly seven years, but I could've been a bit more descriptive; granted I am my own most ruthless critic I'm trying to find the time to write, but work is rather demanding of my time. Fortunately I can write on my phone's notepad so it's slow, but I am writing.
very cute
That was very interesting. The phrase 'short but sweet' fits rather well here, and I can see why there are no down votes. I wish I had found this 17 weeks ago!
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Thank you. I'm planning on doing some mild editing to this one later.
I was wondering why the cover art brought to mind the phrase “happy little trees”…
The description of her painting is making me think of one of the recent banners added to the site.
Banner:
http://www.fimfiction-static.net/images/custom_banners/moe_canterlot.jpg
Banner art source:
http://derpibooru.org/25
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Thanks. Bob Ross was a great man.
Be sure to check the first comment for the song.
I liked it.