In this society everypony can express themselves, speak there mind, and everypony is the same.
Thank God for helping me make this.
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Anonymous15
Big MLP: FIM Fan and tries to write fanfiction of mlp. I am a Christian. I prefer she/her pronouns.
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I'm reading this as satire, because the alternative is horrifying.
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What does satire mean. Also what do you mean the alternative is horrifying?
This is either an amazing piece of satire parodying bad fanfic or a horrendously bad story.
I'm gonna headcanon this is the world that led to the collapse of Imperial Equestria and the events of G5.
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The society.
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I initially wondered the title was intended as a reference to Lyndon Johnson's Great Society project, a series of social programs designed to try and fix issues with American society (it didn't work for reasons too complex to get into here).
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From the Collins English Dictionary:
Well, it was inspired by God, I guess, for whatever relevance that holds.
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This user keeps putting that in their stories. Trying to deflect criticism, perhaps? There was one dA user who did a pony OC in the Stars and Bars and stated it was done for 'the glory of God'. Erm, OK then...
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A good satire should be funny, though.
So if your deity helped you to write this story, then clearly downvoting it would be an act of purest evil.
And I'm perfectly okay with that.
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If God created the entire world, and a writer's work is inspired by the world around them...then I guess ALL the stories are inspired by God. Even the diaperfics.
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I never said it was good.
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Hey, who created Satan, anyway? Would it be ok to downvote or dislike Satan?
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Well, yes.
Strange, I don't remember helping anyone.
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I'm not going to pass up the feed line. (Especially in a comments section about Great Societies.)
Lol, this kind of reminds me of my computer teacher who gave nearly everyone 20/20.
Good story, I'm interested! Keep up the good work!
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I'm pretty sure I first heard this anecdote with Ronny James Dio. Or maybe it was the one where he said "bitch, get out of my throne!" to Satan.
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Good point. Satan was originally one of God's closest mates anyway.
A society such as this would quickly become unequal. Give four people the same amount of money and pretty quickly there'd be economic inequality.
If God is (A) all-knowing and all-seeing, and (B) your co-author for this project (I hesitate to use the word "story"), why can't you spell Cheerilee's name correctly? And that's not even touching on all of the other writing errors that you and Jehovah made...
No wonder this is so bad. You rely on help from something that doesn't exist., and therefore. It's a steaming pile of 💩.
. Explain so much actually.
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Same.
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Hey, Mystic. A writer is SUPPOSED to use their imagination.
Tell them to imagine a better God.
"This one isn't working." 
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Stop. I ask God to help me write this and yeah. Leave God alone.
I want to give him credit for helping me. Like if you friend helps you with a school project you give them credit, right? so I am doing the same here!
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I was giving him credit for helping me make the story.
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Thanks! I made that fic on my alt account so here is my main account.
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A. I took those thirty pieces of silver in an honorable contract and I am going to live up to my end of the bargain.
B. I'm pantheistic. Which one?
C. After I already destroyed Britney? I don't think so.
D. Hi, troll.
Bye, troll.
Blocked troll.
Twice.
Ya, which God we talkin' about here? There's lots, gotta be specific.
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I suspect it's the Christian God for some reason.
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Aw. I was hoping for Anansi.
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Just googled them. Interesting stuff.
Personally I'd be interested to see what would happen if somebody called upon the Chaos Gods for help writing a story.
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It is. I am Christan.
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Are you the author, perchance?
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Yeah, this was made on my alt account!
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. There's a response to this. But I'd probably get banned for attacking another user (in this case, the author) if I did.
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This comment section is the gift that just keeps on giving.
Much like the "great Society," I suppose.
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What do you recommend happen next in the story/manifesto?
this story is kinda like utopia and manifesto book.
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nuclear war?
I mean, if your characters and society had more problems to deal with, maybe the story would become more high stakes
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I see.
I know this story is E-rated but I don't have many E-rated things to say about it.
I don't think you know what either of those first two items are and how they work.
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Good point. The author is trying to squish together political and economic systems that don't function well together. Economically it appears to be Marxist, but has social liberalism on top of that. These two systems do not function together as Marxist ideology requires a centralised power structure in order to get its economy functioning.
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By Utopia, are you referring to the book by Sir Thomas More or the ideological concept?
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the ideological concept
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I see.
Presumably the 40 hour work week is not a concept in Equestria.
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Just be glad they don't have 95-hour work weeks like I do
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Oh, I'm so sorry to hear that
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Ouch!