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A Rocky Hearth's Warming

Marble and Big Mac have been seeing each other every Hearth's Warming, but Big Mac's behaviour is strange this Hearth's Warming, especially when the Pie's are mentioned.

This story is for Blueninetales for Jinglemas 2022
They for a shipfic between Big Mac and Marble Pie and I did my best.

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Blueninetails #1 · Dec 31st, 2022 · 1 · ·

This was really well done, and I felt the interaction between Big Mac and Marble were very cute! Especially, the thing about scratching their left ear as a signal, that was actually kinda clever. The beginning actually gave me an old 90's-style show vibe (which was rather interesting) though I'm sure it mainly showed how close the Apples are as a family, and I think you got much of their personalities pretty spot on, especially Pinkie Pie who felt very spot on.

Very good job! I love a good romance fic during the holidays.