It's Hearth's Warming Eve, and Marble Pie and her family are visiting the Apples in Ponyville. But Marble finds herself in for one terrible surprise. Not that she wasn't expecting it.
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As I first read the description it reminded me of "Happier" By Marshmello :')
This was really good. As a former MarbleMac shipper, I really felt bad for Marble Pie here even thought I like SugarMac a lot more.
As someone who has been through something like this, I teared up a little. Especially since I like MarbleMac. Gosh, that scene was only like 3 seconds and I was so surprised it happened. But this was written very, very well. Obviously it would have to be to get such emotions out of me. I really enjoyed it. Applejack and Pinkie are wonderful in these kinds of situations!
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Thank you very much! It's wonderful to get so much encouragement. It makes me want to keep writing more and get better.
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Funny enough, I've never been through a heart break before, or even a crush not sharing my feelings. Never even been in a relationship. But, I wrote this using experience from being the one who gets picked over for another person, even if it was unintentional. Also, thanks for saying my writing is good, usually I think it's pretty sub-par.
Yeah..I saw the episode and I was just like:
THEY Made the Fanon Canon?!?!
Aww poor marble pie yeah I know how it feels it can really hurt so much knowing that you had a crush on somebody but they fell in love with somebody else and you want to be happy for them but sometimes it really hurts but just like Applejack and Pinkie Pie said we just had to bear with it I know it won't make anything better but we just have to move on this was a pretty good story a very sad one but good keep up the good work