• Published 19th Dec 2022
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A Second Chance For A Raven - Zatoichi Vokunkiin



MLP:FIM/Wizarding World crossover. A wizard regrets his life, despite being a succcessful business man and top notch Auror, He never got to live his own life. Even as a child.But this second chance in a new world will allow him to do just that.

Comments ( 6 )

Thanks for the chapter 😊

Thanks for the chapter! I'm really enjoying the way you're writing Havran's relationship with Celestia and Luna, the reunion moments with Rarity, Twilight and Barb brought a smile to my face, I like moments like that.
I can already imagine the development of some future situations, the funniest and if in the events of "A Canterlot Wedding" Havran just sends a "Revelio" to Chrysalis, in that scene when they are practicing at the end of the first part.

Magic of course.

I know this is Equestria and there is magic, but even then it feels like a slap to the face when that's the answer. It's like when they put a Deus Ex Machina or something like that. :rainbowlaugh:

Other than that, a good cozy chapter :)

Havran became a Father Figure for Barb and Twilight became her mother figure.

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While I actually do like the idea of Havran becoming Twi's tutor, his magic and hers are two totally different types. But maybe I could make it works somehow o:

Huh? Didn't realize that this is canceled?

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