MLP:FIM/Wizarding World crossover. A wizard regrets his life, despite being a succcessful business man and top notch Auror, He never got to live his own life. Even as a child.But this second chance in a new world will allow him to do just that.
Thanks for the chapter! Seeing that this Celestia is a good person is a breath of fresh air, especially after Celestia from "Sin-Eater and Magic". Question, have you decided whether to give Havran access to ancient magic?
11558497 I will give him access to it at some point. While he already possessed it in his last life. He had to unlock it again. Most lokely through a traumatic experience. We will see though.
So... Faust waited five years to have that conversation?
I like the story, but this chapter... feels like it's just an excuse to put our dear Raven in a position where he feels he owes Celestia, and at the same time, a reason for him to be around the mane six the rest of the story.
Didn't leave a good taste in my mouth. I do like what you are doing with Princess Luna though. It can lead to some nice and interesting moments.
This new chapter gives a rather bad taste in my mouth also.
Not only that I didn't like he self-exiled himself, but for a long ass time!? FIVE years!? ( It's Avengers Endgame all over again! )
And Faust herself, or not even Celestia or Twilight themselves DIDN'T search for him earlier, and help him with his guilt immediately in that long time frame?
Sorry, this actually does seems forced ( Just for the sake of the dang plot. And I'm personally not a fan to those kind of writer's "tactics" in fan fictional stories. ).
I bet a hundred dollars that he does actually killed some criminals like the death eaters, when he was a Auror in his past life. And he didn't make a "big deal" out of it like right now? Am I right!?
Auror's do have the "license to kill" the evil wizards/witches, just like James Bond for example.
And even then, I do know that he is definitely gonna have no choice to kill once again in the future. Like the unredeemed main villains like Chrysalis, Sombra, Tirek, Storm King, or an new foe that is too dangerous to be left alive, nor wants to ever redeemed themselves.
11558598 All I can tell you is that this is only temporary. That feeling will wear away over time as he gets older. As for Twilight and the others. They had no idea where he had disappeared to. All will be clear in the later chapters.
11558623 He feels bad for what he did when he was younger, but as he gets older, he won't feel remorse for killing anyone who wrongs him or those he will grow to care for. You will see how I move things along. And no, he will not become another Aku. So don't worry aboutn that.
This chapter and the last are both contrived bovine excrement. The whole business of killing the three rapists was simply for your own self satisfaction.
Then a five year time skip. Lazy writing all around for nonsense. The fact your character has been alone for five years makes no sense. I agree with the others that he should not have been left like that. Who leaves a guilt ridden person alone for five flipping years?! Your just a horrible person!
The worst part was I really liked this story. Now I can't continue you have ruined your world, story, and characters. So thanks for that and good bye.
Thanks for the chapter 😊
Can't wait for the next
Hopefully he gets with Luna
Thanks for the chapter! Seeing that this Celestia is a good person is a breath of fresh air, especially after Celestia from "Sin-Eater and Magic".
Question, have you decided whether to give Havran access to ancient magic?
11558497
I will give him access to it at some point. While he already possessed it in his last life. He had to unlock it again. Most lokely through a traumatic experience. We will see though.
So... Faust waited five years to have that conversation?
I like the story, but this chapter... feels like it's just an excuse to put our dear Raven in a position where he feels he owes Celestia, and at the same time, a reason for him to be around the mane six the rest of the story.
Didn't leave a good taste in my mouth. I do like what you are doing with Princess Luna though. It can lead to some nice and interesting moments.
11558598
I have to agree with him.
This new chapter gives a rather bad taste in my mouth also.
Not only that I didn't like he self-exiled himself,
but for a long ass time!? FIVE years!? ( It's Avengers Endgame all over again! )
And Faust herself, or not even Celestia or Twilight themselves DIDN'T search for him earlier, and help him with his guilt immediately in that long time frame?
Sorry, this actually does seems forced ( Just for the sake of the dang plot. And I'm personally not a fan to those kind of writer's "tactics" in fan fictional stories. ).
I bet a hundred dollars that he does actually killed some criminals like the death eaters, when he was a Auror in his past life. And he didn't make a "big deal" out of it like right now? Am I right!?
Auror's do have the "license to kill" the evil wizards/witches, just like James Bond for example.
And even then, I do know that he is definitely gonna have no choice to kill once again in the future. Like the unredeemed main villains like Chrysalis, Sombra, Tirek, Storm King, or an new foe that is too dangerous to be left alive, nor wants to ever redeemed themselves.
( Like Voldemort for example. )
11558598
All I can tell you is that this is only temporary. That feeling will wear away over time as he gets older. As for Twilight and the others. They had no idea where he had disappeared to. All will be clear in the later chapters.
11558623
He feels bad for what he did when he was younger, but as he gets older, he won't feel remorse for killing anyone who wrongs him or those he will grow to care for. You will see how I move things along. And no, he will not become another Aku. So don't worry aboutn that.
This chapter and the last are both contrived bovine excrement. The whole business of killing the three rapists was simply for your own self satisfaction.
Then a five year time skip. Lazy writing all around for nonsense. The fact your character has been alone for five years makes no sense. I agree with the others that he should not have been left like that. Who leaves a guilt ridden person alone for five flipping years?! Your just a horrible person!
The worst part was I really liked this story. Now I can't continue you have ruined your world, story, and characters. So thanks for that and good bye.