Bradley Sengood has always wanted to be a hero, but the world he lived in didn't have much use for the heroes he always wanted to be. But one day, he lives his dream and saves three lives from an accident. However, saving those lives cost him his own.
Heroism acknowledge, he is given the chance to live again in a world where his idols fit perfectly. Reborn as Flash Sentry, he begins his quest to become the greatest hero of all time. Along the way, he'll meet friends, enemies and a whole lot of obstacles. Can he overcome them? Only time will tell.
Chapters (14)
Great start to the chapters can’t wait for more to come.
Love the relic so far can’t wait to find out what’s the relic is really called and it mysterious past.
This is a separate story from your Flash Sentry Chronicles, right?
11527444 Yes.
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Okay.
I am not realy a fan of "Anthro", but is a interesting world. Good mix of original "MLP" und fantasy world. Twilight is still a unicorn/magi in this world timeline?
I remember this from your One-Shots. I have learned a lot more about Isekai since then and have a better appreciation for it. It looks like Flash at least started out a lot better than someone like Kazuma, since he at least managed to save someone before his death.
Well this is certainly an interesting continuation. I guess that even though Flash's grades were apparently going to keep him from achieving his dream, bonding with this relic might get him into the academy anyway. Some might call that luck, but it works for Flash.
Sadly the Royal Guard really were portrayed as useless like 95% of the time. Kinda funny how it is laid on so thick here, but it is still cool that apparently the events from the main series still happened here.
Make Optimus Prime proud, Flash.
awesome start to a adventure!!!!
He talks about the Matrix of Leadership from that robot show when he was a kid… he died at sixteen, that IS a kid. Also, that was about forty years ago. :)
i like this can't wait to see more
Very good, Banshee.
I notices you change some part of this chapter (including Flash's parents tried to comfort him when he failed his grade which got cut from the finished draft) from your initial draft.
I wished someone made a TV Trope for this story.
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Wow! Royal Guards are treated as a joke more than Flash Sentry Chronicles.
Doesn't help the one who saved the princess but also free her sister are teenagers which embarrassed the Royal Guards even more.
Ha!
The last one is pretty much Isekai anime in a nutshell since most of Isekai hero is always surrounded by beautiful girls and no doubt, Flash is no exception to Harem situation.
Transformers reference!
A Kamen Rider reference?
Through, Flash can summoned weapons (so far) while Decade can summoned all past Heisei Riders.
Were you 16 when you originally wrote this?
11528977 No, why?
This looks very promising, normally stories with anthropomorphic characters are very rare if we're talking about being suitable for all ages, they usually fall into the T or M category on this site.
You convinced me when you said that the device was Decade's dirver, Kamen Rider Decade is my favourite, I hope we can see other classic characters, and what would the dragon race be called in this story? Wyverian?
That's why I'll be willing to read it, I'm surprised you started it right after writing your Bakugan story, how do you stay consistent updating your stories while writing and still maintain quality? I sent you a private message asking something similar.
Truck-kun strikes again, now disguising himself as a car!
What a great way for Flash getting in the academy! Not only that but he also got his own party already!
I'm not sure if this is coincidence but the whole getting point by destroying the monsters reminds me of My Hero Academia where the potential heroes have to destroys robots in order to gain points.
Todays? Don't you means towards?
GRAND?!?!
I honestly didn't expect him to appear since I thought you would only using MLP canon characters (beside Flash's parents and Faust) but I am not intrigued which roles your OCs will play in the future.
Very ironically and a bit of hypocrisy that his Chronicles counterpart start off as an arrogant who was full of himself.
Grand did warned you to not being full of yourself, Trixie, you deserves that.
Cue Flash rescuing them
Oh… I forgot this! It's no surprise her father is none other than that jackass, Regal Burst.
This was awesome! The exam reminded me a lot of the entrance exam from My Hero Academia. It was also cool to see Flash meet, befriend, and form a team with others already. Him with Soarin, Trixie, and Wallflower is going to be an interesting combo for the main group.
It was also neat to see Grand Hoof is the principal of the academy. I saw a bit of his "drill sergeant nasty" attitude in his opening speech to the participants, but he wasn't wrong in anything he said. I wonder if Flash and the others will see a bit of his kinder side over time?
Well she did get back only recently. Luna seemed cold and a bit distant at times, though that was usually when she was trying to take things seriously.
I'm a bit surprised Luna used hers already too since she has only been back for about a month.
awesome team, keep up the story!!!
I think it's pretty obvious, but reading the other comments, we all thought of My Hero Academia.
But that's very good, I liked how they were able to overcome everything, it's going to be great, I was afraid that Trixie would not pass the test but everything turned out well in the end.
from here you can make great episodes, I'm sure some ponies that didn't pass the test will surely become villains in the future.
Will you also make that fanfiction where you made flash sentry mega man.
11538604 Eventually.
I am honestly shocked you included basically majority of the Royal Knights (except Ruby and Iron) as teachers.
Out of my curiosity, are you going to included Ruby Scarlet and Iron Core in this story? I could see Iron Core as Flash's rival.
I love we get to know Flash's teammates and their backstories.
The biggest change from the draft you shows me was Flash was originally going to confront Trixie on her behavior and call her out but since you includes Cold Steel, it's much better since it made Trixie more sympathetic since she was laughed by her classmates and even Cold calls them out for hurting Trixie's feelings.
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Hey, you brought this on yourself, Flash.
Uh… are they supposed to be Mr. and Mrs. Cakes but in reverse?
Cold Steel's here!
Royal Knight count: 3 (including Flash)
Heather Bloom is here as well.
Royal Knight count: 4
First Aid!
Royal Knight count: 5
Skybreaker!
Royal Knight count: 6
Tidal Wave, I think.
Royal Knight count: 7
All it left is Iron Core and Ruby Scarlet.
Oh no, it's him… that asshole Jacques Schnee-wannabe.
Don't you means him?
This was a nice chapter. We get a bit more backstory on Flash's team as he bonds with them individually. Plus I like their team name. Team Relic is cool.
I also think it is cool how the professors at the academy are the Royal Knights. That is very clever. That ending with Shining showing up and declaring Team Relic is going to have their first adventure assisting him also has me excited.
Team Relic? You mean, Team R?
Flash's first quest went very well and got to help out the folks (one of them is Iron Core! One Royal Knight left!)
Look like we are at the end of this arc as we head to the next arc involving Luna.
Hey Banshee, since you are doing arc stuffs, I might gives the name for each arcs.
* Arc 1: The Beginning Arc 1-5
* Arc 2: Luna Arc
Just saying.
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They are mercenaries, Flash. They only cares about getting pay.
Scarface reference!
Could he be?
IRON CORE IS IN THE HOUSE!!!!!
Nice first quest for Flash and his team. I think that this helps show the difference between them and the average Adventurers. As Shining Armor said, most Adventurers only care about getting paid and will even demand more money for their services, essentially making them just glorified mercenaries. But Flash, his team, and Shining Armor care about helping others that can't help themselves.
The way they helped those sick Storm Hounds and how Flash helped a few people around town show that they are going above and beyond what is expected of them. Flash died a hero in his old life and now he is becoming one here too.
I thought it was nice seeing Iron adore here for a bit and that his parents are still alive here. Hopefully it will stay that way. Looks like Luna will get some focus next, and that is bound to be fun. Plus we have more references to the canon series with Twilight and her friends dealing with the dragon from "Dragonshy".
Just like defeating an enemy in a video game. I guess I shouldn't be surprised since several Isekai anime incorporate some kind of JRPG game mechanic into their world.
Flash and his team finally prove their worth to go on their big big expedition with Luna and unlike Shining's one, this one is more dangerous.
Welcome to the Luna Arc!
Since this brown magi stallion doesn't have a name, I will call him "Rare Find" cause that character is closest to the character description and yes, Rare Find is real.
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I do find it weird that this magi somehow knew Luna was Nightmare Moon while Flash and others doesn't... is that a foreshadowing?
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Well, at least Flash and his team got a better prize than gala, even through it's a dangerous expedition.
Rape?! Don't you means Rage?
Why do I have a feeling this foreshadowing the future events?
Once again Team Relic proves they shouldn't be underestimated. They showed they aren't just skilled and creative but have great team work and friendship. Iron's Magi teammate was a huge jerk though. I almost think he was just saying all that stuff about Luna still being evil because he's a sore loser.
Flash and his team joining Luna on an expedition is going to be fun. Though one thing I am wondering is if it really takes as long as she predicts then that means they are going to have a lot of make up work when they return, considering they had to do some when they helped Shining Armor.
And now an expedition with Luna, that must be fun if this is before the nightmare night episode.
Despite what Iron Core's magi teammate said about Luna, she ultimately prove him wrong when she risked of losing her magic to protect Team Relic even through they (except Flash) were doubting her and accused her of still evil. (Although, they comes to regret their behavior toward her once Luna protected them with her magic)
And look like we got a tease for Discord appearing in this fic and I wonder if he or a certain magi stallion will be first major threat for Team Relic?
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Isekai Cliche: Creating/Bringing modern vehicle to otherwise fantasy world.
Through, I am surprised that Flash was killed by a car instead of Truck-Kun. (I forgot to mention this in the first chapter)
OOOHHH!!!!!
Look like we might see our beloved God of Chaos in this story (either being first major threat to Team Relic or ends up meeting them later after being defeated by Elements of Harmony)
Flash, you pervert! You should be lucky Luna didn't punch you in the face for that… most male lead usually get punched by a girl before being called a pervert.
OOOOOHHHHH!!!!!
I can't wait for that!
This was a fun chapter since we not only started the new adventure with Luna, we got a look into her past history a bit and how her mistakes still affect her now. From the way she talked about Celestia it almost seemed like she was still a little bitter towards her. Plus we got our first mention of Discord. Can't wait to see him in this story.
I was a bit upset with Flash's friends for thinking the worst of Luna at first, but I am glad they came around. Even Luna wasn't mad at them since she says being overly trusting can be dangerous too. If this series continues to follow parallel to the events of the canon series though, then Luna will eventually earn everyone's trust in time. Seeing Luna in action was also pretty cool, and this is without her full power. It makes me wonder what Celestia is like herself.
Flash creating a van with his belt came as a surprise, but the action scenes towards the end with them trying to drive away to safety got really intense.
I get it. A pun on the four horsemen of the apocalypse.
That part was hilarious. At least Luna was understanding enough to realize it wasn't Flash's fault, unlike other Isekai protagonists in similar situations. It's also interesting since Flash hasn't met Twilight yet, so is he showing interest in Princess Luna first?
Flash finally got his own Espirt in form of none other than Springer himself!
I felt bad for Springer since his previous owner treat him more of a tool than a friend… glad he found new owner in Flash who no doubt treat him way better than that asshole avian.
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Ha! I did find it funny when Trixie and Wallflower fell.
Indeed, Flash.
Karma, bitch! That's what you get for being a lazy bum, you asshole avian!
And that's the birth of bromance between Flash and Springer!
Spike?!!
twilight sparkle!!
11564264 What language is that in?
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oops, I'm Brazilian man. I don't know how to read in English, so I use a Brazilian translator
11564290 Ah, makes sense.
Oh man, Springer is in this story too?! It feels like this story just keeps getting better and better!
I felt really bad for Springer, the way that selfish avian treated him. There are bad people in any world, but that doesn't mean everyone is bad. He doesn't need to worry about being used anymore, because he hit the jackpot meeting Flash.
I feel like something is being built up for Soarin. He seems to be lacking basic knowledge that everyone else knows. First he didn't know what a magical layline was, now it's Esprits. It almost seems like he didn't go to school, but I'm not sure how that could be the case if he made it into the academy. Questions for later.
so you basicly gave him a lucario
Of course, anime always love the Beach Episode!
Glad Wallflower overcome her fear of deep water and that's ultimately pay off with a nice set of upgrade.
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Uh… which one? There are so many anime that have a girl dressed in gray suit… I better watch anime to see which one have gray suit.
Ha! Even Trixie lampshade this cliches!
It is true, most anime love beach episodes. It is usually a fun way to relax and get in some fan service seeing beautiful girls in swimsuits and/or bikinis, but this one had some big development for Wallflower.
Not only did she face her fear to save her friends, she was rewarded by finding out she can feed her weapon different material and have it change into various other forms. So now while she still has her gauntlets she also has a few other forms for when the situation calls for it. She will probably unlock more as the story goes on too.
Wow, two embarrassing moments between Flash and Luna now. My thought of something happening between them is looking more likely.
Very good chapter, Banshee and you can't have an Isekai anime without Dungeon crawling.
The heroes must stop Golem from corrupting Luna into Nightmare Moon before it's too late.
We are almost at the end since most of Isekai Anime are 12 episodes, that means we are heading toward the end of the first season.
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YOU JINX THEM, SOARIN!!!!!!
Him? Don't you means her?
Wow, things just took a turn for the worst. Ordinary this golem would be seem heroic for wanting to save its master from corruption, but since in this case its master is Nightmare Moon, it is unknowingly doing the opposite of purification. It’s as sad as it is frightening. Now Team Relic needs to save Luna before it’s too late and she becomes Nightmare Moon again.
I liked the various parts of the dungeon each group found themselves in. Especially Flash's. It is a very clever and I have seen that old riddle used in a few other shows, like Yugioh, Powerpuff Girls, and Samurai Jack. Though it looks like this scene is primarily based on one from Labyrinth.
Just like Spider-Man and Nick Fury! Good one.
So, apparently Flash screams like a little girl. It’s especially funny since is team is basically roasting him without realizing it.
The Luna Arc has come to the end! Not only Team Relic saved Luna from Golem but they also got the book as well an espirt that Luna thought she lost.
It's great to see Team Relic standing up for Luna against Iron Core's jackass Magi teammate who been talking bad about her. (Even his own teams can't stand him)
I am wondering when will Team Relic fight an actual villain and not another monster? My bet would be Discord.
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Oh, Flash! You sly dog! You always find a way to do those things accidentally!
Cadence has arrived!
This was a fun adventure. Team Relic has come out stronger than ever and things went even better than expected for Luna, since she not only got the book she was after but she was reunited with Dreamwalker. I wasn't expecting that to happen.
This little expedition was filled with fun and heartwarming moments, and it was nice to see how close Team Relic and Luna became with each other, especially since they seem to be the first new friends she has made since her return.
Pretty funny how the Grand Galloping Gala happened while Luna was away, and that she specially scheduled it like that to avoid the Gala. That explains her absence in canon. It was also nice to see Cadence appear at the end. Also, it looks like the book Luna and Team Relic retrieved is the equivalent the book that had Starswirl's spell in canon. It will defiantly be interesting once we get to the part where Twilight ascends.
What a great way to end this story with festival, maid cafe and takoyaki!
After intense fight in last chapter, Team Relic deserves a break.
Look like Flash may meet Twilight…
The one that I enjoys the most is how characters are aware of anime cliches like accidental pervert, beach episode, maid cafe and so on.
I am surprised that this story lacks proper villains since most of enemies Team Relic fight are monsters and golem being the closest of main villain of this story (a rogue was more of a minor threat)
I don't mind you doing the sequel, Banshee.
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Considered how his previous master refuses to let him do anything, it is understandable for Springer.
Even in different universe, Springer still have Flash's back.
Gender Equality!
Don't you means three?
Wow! Flash is still horny.
Be careful what you wish for!
I'm glad I am able to help you out with the story.
This was a fun story, and a lot better than I expected it to be when it was first announced. It was really fun seeing the characters develop and seeing the adventures they went on, and seeing how you were able to effectively incorporate multiple iconic Isekai staples into this.
I definitely loved their expedition with Luna the most, seeing them bond with her, meeting Springer, and traversing the labyrinth. It seemed like she and Flash especially bonded well together during the journey.
I am really looking forward to whenever you do the sequel. It will be fun to see other characters from the series eventually appear.
Careful Flash, you already had plenty of accidental perverted moment with Luna, and Cadance is already taken. Plus he hasn't even met Twilight yet and we all know he's going to fall in love with her.
I smell a tournament arc in the future!
very amazing story, from the beginning to the end.
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I hope there is a sequel, this story has a great future,
It could be a VERY big book, for new ideas and adventures 10/10
LOVED THIS STORY FROM BEGINNING TO END! I liked every detail of the plot in the story. I look forward to a second story to continue this one!