Equestria's Crazies

by Thorax

Episode 22.5: The Lost Chapter

Discord went to the store. Nothing happened.

The end.

Author's Note:

Ice's Note; this is the chapter that Thorax took down so I posted it again.

Thorax's Note; for anyone thinking this is the new chapter, hit back and read "Chapter 22: A Simple Treat" That's the new chapter.

Comments

[canonkiller]

See? Best chapter.

[Dirty Bit]

You magnificent bastard

[Thorax]

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Now it's the go-to place but FOR EVERYONE!
I like to believe that's where Celestia holds some royal meetings with diplomats from other races.

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It can stay, for now.

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I blame Ice, she's obviously season 4 villain.

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Give me Cookies, or give me a swift beating!

[Tyrant Molestia]

Ooo~ A twist.

[canonkiller]

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Ice: "Season 4, Episode 1 - Return of the Changelings: Queen Chrysalis has returned to try and take over Canterlot, but now she has a new weapon; an annoying and snarky Changeling named Ice."
Thorax: "She'll publish all the records Celestia never meant for the light of day to see"

[anunenka]

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Give me Cookies, or give me a swift beating!

Why not both?

[The1templar]

In my opinion this was one of the better chapters. No errors.

[SpikyHorn]

When I red the description, I imagined Nightmare Moon playing the bass

[Thorax]

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I can only assume Ice did a stealth edit. I can't even maintain a single sentence without errors.

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Close enough!

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The Elements don't work on her.

[canonkiller]

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I just made a new chapter. *shrugs*

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She beats up any opposition with her bare hooves.

[Christovski]

It's back!

[Thorax]

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The only thing that can defeat her are gratuitous spelling errors.

[canonkiller]

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The only reason she agreed to the whole plan was because she was promised a week away from Thorax and the other insane members of the Hive.

I should really write a story about Ice.

[joebob50]

Such a literacy masterpiece. I have never read any chapter to make feelings of love, jealousy, excitement, and horror coarse through my veins at the same time. You sir, are amazing.

[Toku]

2767570>>2767580

hey! both of you shut it! we can only have inside jokes if i was involved in their creation!

[canonkiller]

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Well, this 'inside joke' only started about half an hour ago or something. It's basically that my character is the Season 4 villain. Join in if you wish.

[Alondro]

To think that a chapter of fanfiction could at once be both gripping and heartrending, whilst simultaneously stirring the soul in warm laughter and bittersweet sorrow.

Oh the magnanimous perfidy of preponderance which didst sashay betwixt my jaundiced hepatocytes upon the conduction of retinal impulses into my dorsolateral prefrontal cortex!

I think that actually meant something...

[Gapeagle]

When I thought the story could not become any more crazy.....I read the outstanding chapter yet!

[kragor]

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Yep.

[Misplaced Modifier]

Glad to see this chapter made the cut.

-Mis

[canonkiller]

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I HAVEN'T EDITED YET CALM DOWN

[Thorax]

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Do eeeeeeeeeeett

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It's the whole "Going to the store" part that gets ya, isn't it.

[Thorax]

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Evil has to start small if it wants to win.

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Inside Jokes, inside jokes!

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Whoops

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DAMN YOU ICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Well when you make that much stuff, you tend to forget some of it. Like how I don't remember any of my older chapters :l

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Sometimes we need real evil

[Alondro]

2767785 The most mysterious question in the universe.

Why are hot dogs sold in packages of 10 and hot dog buns sold in packages of 8?

Except for Hebrew National, since they answer to a higher standard.

[AppleTank]

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I hate that fact with all of my being. It must be a ploy to force us to by 4 hot dog packages and 5 bun packages at once in order to get any logic.
And drain our money at the same time because some people don't eat that fast.
I don't know. Buying 40 hot dogs seem a bit overboard, but if you have several family members you could probably finish em off before they expire. Would get annoying for a while, though.

[Pretty In Pink]

Wat

[Misdirection01]

Funny shit- the previous chapter I mean. This one got a chuckle out of me as well though. Keep em coming!

[alexanderhunt88]

Best. Chapter. EVER!!

[Corona Blaze]

Genius, Pure genius.

[Mokkori Hunter]

9 words.
Still reading it

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[Alondro]

2768855 *secret* You can freeze hotdogs in a non-thawing chest freezer and they'll last for YEARS!!

[AppleTank]

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Well, I guess that could work. Still takes up space though for other things I could be eating.

[ParkerWIC]

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Welp, there goes Twilight's innocence

[Thorax]

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Sure, next chapter Discord will make it through completely unharmed.
Just for you

[Thorax]

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I think it was a fair trade, seeing as Discord most likely ate all of his other ingredients

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One day I'll work up the courage to do it.

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Remember the previous chapter is the one that's new. The 9 word chapter is Ice being a monster :L

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Thank you :D

[Thorax]

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"Return of His Harmony" but we don't speak about that any more.
It's in the depths of my story list and even I'm afraid to open it.

[Thorax]

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Honestly for about 90% of the time I don't have a pre-reader/Editor.
I'm not trying to be a great writer or anything like that, it's more of a hobby. When I get an idea I sit down and write it as it happens in my head and when I'm done and then I send it out!

[Lorthalis of Crows]

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I personally loved return of his harmony. 'Twas a great story.

[Thorax]

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I don't actually have a proper Editor (Ice volunteered to help me, but I don't like taking her away from her work to fix my mistakes) I have no major background in writing nor do I plan to.

So grammatical and spelling errors run rampant. As well, I do my writing as a hobby more than anything

[Vonglory]

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[Thorax]

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I'm glad to hear you guys are enjoying the story. I don't know when the next chapter will be written, but hopefully it'll be good too.

[xXSheltieXx]

Is that it?

[Thorax]

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For now, I'll get some new chapters at some point.

[xXSheltieXx]

2792318 Oh good! I loved rading this, it was amazing!!

[ZeatGuy]

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[Thorax]

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Honestly, I feel like they've gone downhill.
Before I could write a chapter without jumping from character to character, but now a days it seems if I want to write a full chapter, I'll need more than two characters to be the focus.

[Thorax]

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You've summarized everyone of the problems I have with my own work.
Honestly, when I go back and re-read my own stuff, it feels so wrong. Characters are out of Character left right and center and as you said

and I have no sense of where in the FIM timeline any of this stuff is supposed to be happening.

I myself don't even know when this takes place, and I'm pretty sure I double back at some points meaning some chapter happen before the chapter before it.

I have no actual writing experience and I know that shines through in the horrid grammar and spelling errors the dwell within my stories.

But as you said, people seem to enjoy it so I just kind of keep writing. Usually when a single hits, I just sort of run with it, disregarding the Canon of the show and doing whatever I feel like. Which may be one of my biggest problems with the characters.

Though, I think I'm beginning to get a fixed location on their personalities... and it only took me two years :l

[chlorine]

... Front page of this site

[Thorax]

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Wat

[Thorax]

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I miss the nice Deathclaws and the super smart RadScorpion