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Romance takes time and effort and some people tend to overthink all the steps.
Thus we present the key moments that finally lead to Sunset Shimmer and Pinkie Pie getting together.

This piece was written in one go during an afternoon of listening to love songs and contains:
writer self-indulgence, lack of proofreading, pining, friends of varying helpfulness


Credit to Cover Art belongs to LooknamTCN

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 8 )

Nice Work! Sweet and funny with a suitably grand ending, befitting of an afternoon love song binge. I especially like the second and third chapters, some great humour there

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Thank you! Those are the ones I was more confident in.
I'm glad you enjoyed reading it and thanks for your comment.

Love the Scott Pilgrim reference

This is exceedingly adorable, I love it! Also just have to ask: is the title of this story a song reference as well?

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No, it's not really based on anything. It's a hold-over from an earlier version of the idea that was more focused on just the first kiss.

"Lesbians...?" Trixie suggested. Twilight and Rainbow's hands met their foreheads.

:facehoof:

Sunset and Trixie looked at each other before answering in unison. "No thanks."

At least they agreed on something. :ajsmug:

Slowly, Sunset stepped back against the wall and sunk down. She wrapped her arms around her knees and rested her head on them. Twilight comfortingly rubbed her shoulder while Trixie doubled over laughing, not even trying to hide it the way Rainbow was.

That didn't go as planned. :fluttershysad:

"You didn't tell me she'd be wearing a uniform!" Sunset hissed, halfway hiding behind her menu.

Of course she would, 90% of the time restaurants have uniform requirements. :ajbemused:

"Okay. Thank you, girls. I'll... let you know if I think of anything."

:facehoof:

"Alright, go." Applejack pushed her towards the steps that led to the glass door in the dome. Sunset looked around at her friends, seeing nothing but encouraging smiles. She gave herself another push and headed up the steps and pushed through the door.

No turning back now. :fluttershysad:

Pinkie howled loudly, a mix between a laugh and an excited scream. After squeezing Sunset as hard as she could, she pulled back and pressed her hands to her cheeks, leaning in for a firm, superficial smooch on her lips.

Well done Sunset. :twilightsmile:

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