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Luminous Comet


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After a night out drinking, Sunset Shimmer wakes up in an unfamiliar bed. It takes some time and help from the woman next to her to reconstruct the events that had led her there.

1st Place Winner of the "Sunset Shimmer x Villains Unseen" Contest

Credit to Cover Art belongs to Maren/Marenlicious

EDIT: My first story to be featured on the front page! 🎶

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Comments ( 27 )

Awww, this was nice.
Good job! :yay:

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Oh, thank you!
I did kind of write this up on a whim, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Ooo Tempest! That's another really good villain

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Took me a bit to think of, though Gilda was als o great choice.
Here's to a good competition.

okay now i kinda wanna read a NSFW version of this, like Sunset goes home with Tempest on tuesday

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I haven't really decided whether I want to write NSFW here, but that certainly is an idea.

What's the "Sunset Shimmer x Villains Unseen" Contest all about?

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To ship Sunset with villains/antagonists that have not appeared in Equestria Girls.

This is a good short story.

I'd love to see an expanded tale of Sunset x Tempest...

If you have the time of course.

nice work:twilightsmile:

Slap slap kiss kiss. Hopefully getting plastered and pummeling each other doesn't become the key to the relationship.

Oh, that's a good pairing!

Now I'm imagining both of their expressions once Sunset finds out Tempest was born Fizzlepop Berrytwist. :rainbowlaugh:

Can’t wait for an explicit sequel of this.

This is a good read! I'd love to see a follow-up to this story!

Surprisingly pleasant conversation given how many freak outs would likely happen under similar circumstances.

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I've gotten quite a few asks for a sequel by now.
I'm not opposed to it, but I'll wait at least until the contest is over.

Twas some good shit sire.

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we do not care much about when(preferably sooner rather than later though), just that we get more :P

Congrats on your first feature. A fun and well written take on a classic scenario. I'm also a big fan of fighting turning to f.... other things. I'd honestly take a follow up of their night at the bar, mature rated or not.

Different, interesting, a cautionary tale of moderation. And the two would be good friends I think.

Congrats on the win!

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Thank you! And congratulations on the second place spot. I'm happy we both came out on top.

Sunset released the breath she hadn't realised she was holding and tried to kick her mind into gear. She had left her apartment at seven and headed down to her usual hangout bar. She had invited Applejack to come with her, but didn't remember seeing her. In fact, she didn't remember anything past the first two drinks. She quickly reached to her neck and was relieved to find her geode still there. If only she could just read her own memories.

Ngl, that would've been cool and interesting to see. :ajsmug:

Hahaha, aw. I really dig Tempest's human look. solid story too. I really enjoy Sunset and Tempest, it works well. Or maybe you just write so well you can sell me on it. n_n

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