No Passion

Fiddlesticks's life had been dull for years, and she always knew what to expect. Then she met Lightning Dust.

Third Place in the FiddleDust Contest.

Thanks to mushroompone, Seer, and Undome Tinwe for editing.

Chapters (4)

When the Album Is Over · 27th Jul 2022 · 1,441 words
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I Will Go to Bed Sober · 27th Jul 2022 · 1,790 words
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I've Got Plenty of Love · 27th Jul 2022 · 3,003 words
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And Something to Show for It · 27th Jul 2022 · 1,573 words
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Hoofprintz

Hoofprintz #1 · Jul 27th, 2022 · 1 · · When the Album Is Over ·

Oh dang. I liked the way that chapter finished. Interesting conflict. Will Read on when I have time.

wishcometrue

wishcometrue #2 · Jul 27th, 2022 · · · When the Album Is Over ·

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Glad you enjoyed it, and I hope the rest of the chapters can live up to expectations!

SigmasonicX

SigmasonicX #3 · Jul 28th, 2022 · 1 · · I Will Go to Bed Sober ·

Great so far, will finish later

Seer

Seer #4 · Jul 28th, 2022 · 2 · · And Something to Show for It ·

Said a lot of this during the editing but wow, what a piece, Wish.
Your lightning Dust here is one of your best pieces of character writing to date, she's so well realised and her interactions with Fiddlesticks are just an absolute joy to read
The central couple of chapters here form some of your best work to date, it almost makes me relieved I wasn't able to enter this contest as I certainly wouldn't fancy having to compete with this!
Great stuff!

Hoofprintz

Hoofprintz #5 · Jul 28th, 2022 · · · I Will Go to Bed Sober ·

Quick resolution to the first chapters conflict makes me think something is there. That's why lightning was testy eyed maybe? I could be wrong. Nice chapter.

SigmasonicX

SigmasonicX #6 · Aug 2nd, 2022 · · · And Something to Show for It ·

Finished! (Actually finished days ago but forgot to write a comment)
This was a nice sweet romance. I could connect with Fiddlestick's frustration and it was nice seeing a more chill Lightning.

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