Midnight in the Gardens

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"You, though? A complete and utter mystery to me, even now. Do you know how infuriating it is to have a pony who is a puzzle I cannot solve?"

A story owed to themoontonite for nearly a year. Thank you for being patient with me.

Thanks to Undome Tinwe and The Red Parade for editing.

Cover art by SkullJooce.

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The Red Parade

The Red Parade #1 · May 27th, 2021 · 5 · ·

This was beautiful and an absolute delight to read. Fantastic stuff! I loved every second of this!

wishcometrue

wishcometrue #2 · May 27th, 2021 · 6 · ·

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Thanks, Red.

themoontonite

themoontonite #3 · May 27th, 2021 · 5 · ·

okay so, as fantastic as this is (and it is; seriously - perfect characterization weaved amongst a story that just oozes atmosphere) i cannot help but notice:

no kissy horse.

i will pay u six hundred dubloons for kissy horse

(but nah this was fuckin,, everything i wanted and more. you continue to amaze me at how effortlessly you transcribe these deeply emotive and complex characters to text. awe inspiring(

wishcometrue

wishcometrue #4 · May 27th, 2021 · 5 · ·

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Thank you so much, Dawn. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

nightshroud96

nightshroud96 #5 · May 28th, 2021 · 4 · ·

If only the show had Chrysalis reform there.

She and Luna click pretty good.
Maybe Spike helping with that.

PaintedPony

PaintedPony #6 · May 28th, 2021 · 6 · ·

There was a lot of hidden gems in this story. I liked it. Chrysalis still prideful, but not unwilling to visit again. Luna an enigma even to someling who can sense emotions. This could be a series. A soap opera if you will. Thanks for the entertainment.

Venerable Ro