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Hiver


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This story is a sequel to Welcome to the jungle


This year Page managed to get back to Canterlot for Hearth's Warming and this is the story about that.

This will be a three part mini-story posted from the 23-26th of December.

Happy Hearth's Warming everyone!:twilightsmile:


Image made by: Closetbrony2

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Heck yeah christmas special.

I grinned at her, “Hi Sunshine, Happy Hearth’s Warming! I’m going to go say hi to my wife now, see you later!”

Princess Celestia of Equestria, Alicorn of the Sun squeaked and jerked to the side, the sun jerked back up above the horizon in an S curve, moving almost to the zenith where it did a little circle dance before she got it back under control again.

Yes, success :trollestia:

The mixed lights were playing through her mane and she was… so beautiful. I slowly moved up next to her and she glanced at me, smiling as she kept raising her moon as her warm wing settled softly across my back against the cold, “I suspect that the… astronomical anomaly just now was you and my sister?” she asked with a small smile.

:trollestia:

Luna smirked, “I saw it… and I may have done the same to her in the past,” she said and let go of her moon as she turned her head to press her nose against mine, “Did you not learn your lesson on sneaking up on my sister?”

Apparently he did, he was successful this time after all :trollestia:

I raised my hoof and tapped her nose, “Boop.”

Excellent :moustache:

Missing the OC tag?

Ok, that went way better than the first time, at least until sunshine caught up with him.
Paperwork for Christmas. 😂

And Page describing Celestia…. Totally how I would describe a completely platonic friend. :rainbowlaugh:

Awesome. I can just imagine the response letter page will write to all the concerned ponies.

Dear Concerned Citizen,
Thank you for your concern, but the anomaly with yesterday's sunset was no sign of ill intent, bad tidings, or some prephetic horror of what's to come. No, the reason is quite simple and, if anything, a sign of good things to come.
I, Prince Page of Noctournis, gave the Royal Wingpit of the Goddess of the Sun, A Raspberry!

I 𝓕𝓾𝓬𝓴𝓲𝓷𝓰 LOVE these characters!!

Hilarious, I love the description of Celestia's reaction. Good grief though, it's a good thing this isn't the Triptych Continuum, or the Merdocks newspapers would have had a field day. That said, the reaction of a certain trio of conspiracy theory obsessed earthers would have been priceless. :rainbowlaugh:

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To be fair, the last time couldn't have gone much worse, short of permanent maiming or death. And yeah, definitely 100% platonic with no suppressed tension. :trollestia:

No major grammar jackboot moments to report.

Well at least this time Page didn't get smacked with a sun, but his horn will be hurting from all the letters he'll have to write.

from the title was thinking this was a spin off of the "Batty' series with Nightingale

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I wonder how Celestia would react if this actually somehow ends up in the newspaper. Front page, of course.

...IN THE ROYAL OFFICE...

Celestia: Page. :ajbemused: You want the official reason for the sun jitter to be "Princess Celestia wrestled the sun away from a tropical baboon dog with a monkey-hand tail"????

Page: It worked for Daring Do!:scootangel:

Celestia: :facehoof:

Excellent! Chrysalis had me in stitches! :rainbowlaugh:

Grammar jackboot:

Chrysalis finally nodded, “Agreed,” she finally said, “It would be… nice to be away from the cold of the surface,” she then added much quieter.

Chrysalis finally nodded, “Agreed,” she finally said before adding, in sotto tone, “it would be… nice to be away from the cold of the surface.”

Chrysalis blinked at me with wide eyes as Skitter walked up next to us,

Hah, completely blindsided good ol'Chryssie with that one :trollestia:

Chrysalis paused and glanced back at me, “...Happy Hearth’s Warming,” she said and glanced at Skitter before looking at me again, “Page.”

:trollestia:

I wonder what Chrysalis will gift Page with...? :trixieshiftright:

Cozy Hearthswarming fic is cozy

...PAGE LEAVES THE HIVE THRONE ROOM...

Chrysalis: ...do we really have to go?? Just YOU is not enough for the pony alliance?

Skitter: Mother. You said it yourself long ago: "For the good of the Hive, a bit of our dignity must die"

Chrysalis: Yes but I was never expected it in the form of pony winter gear!

Skitter: This scarf is nice tho...look! The black on it is patterned like tiny changelings!

Chrysalis: *glares at the scarf* ...curses that's cute...stupid predator!

“Well, unless you decide to be the alicorn of storms. What do you say, little one?” I asked her with a smile.

Page, you are inviting disaster! :raritydespair:

Chrysalis has absolutely stolen the show with this miniseries, as with all your other characterisations, she's superb. This has been a nice little interlude and I eagerly anticipate the next book. Merry Christmas Hiver! :pinkiehappy:

Grammar jackboots:

and Twilight Velvet, Twilight Velvet were currently

Should be: 'and Twilight Velvet, who was currently'

tapping hooved with

tapping hooves with

should just head and get some sleep?

There's a missing word and I'm not sure what its should be.

Merry Christmas to everyone waking up to this chapter!

“You’re welcome, Sunshine,” I said, smiling back as I looked back at her, meeting her eyes for a moment before I looked to the side as I caught Chrysalis looking at us, “What?” I then asked her.

Oh nothing, she just saw the same thing that pretty much everyone around has been seeing for a while :trollestia:

Author's Note:

And with that we're done for now. Thank you all for reading and a Happy Hearth's Warming to you all!

And a Happy Hearth’s Warming to you too :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by FanaticLunarist deleted Dec 25th, 2021

I glanced back at everypony else gathered. Luna, Skitter, Sunset, Tempest and Midnight were gathered around one of the tables, a boardgame laid out between them. Midnight looked particularly smug right now as Luna glared at her. Tempest was already out of the game, but seemed content in just watching and providing morale boosts for her marefriend. Spike and Talon were by the fireplace, reading their brand new pile of comics.

Closer to the fireplace Celestia and Chrysalis were facing each other across the battlefield of a chessboard. Neither has made a move the last ten minutes that I had seen, both studying the board but I think it was Chrysalis’ turn.

Further on on a pair of couches Silver Leaf, Swift Spear, Thunder Cloud, Rising High, Minuette and Ocean Breeze were relaxing, a gramophone playing in the background as they talked.

Somebody PLEASE make art of these scenes I beg you

I nodded and sighed, “It’s… difficult to get everyponies schedules to work together. You know we kind of brute forced it this year.”

They need to do it every two years just smash like 3 days out of the schedule 2 years in advance

“You’re welcome, Sunshine,” I said, smiling back as I looked back at her, meeting her eyes for a moment before I looked to the side as I caught Chrysalis looking at us, “What?” I then asked her.

...LATER ON...CHRYSALIS STARES DISAPPOINTINGLY AT THE PRINCESS OF FOOD...

Cadance: :rainbowderp:...what?

Chrysalis: :ajbemused: As much as I loathe extra competition, I know what I taste. HOW is it so difficult for you get the Fire and the Predator together?!

Cadance: I'm been trying!:raritycry:

Chrysalis: :facehoof: Well you been failing miserably! That potential love energy between those two alone would be enough to feed my Hive for a season!

Cadance: At this point, those two are MOCKING me with their stubbornness...

Chrysalis: Perhaps a different approach is needed.

Cadance: Hmm?

Chrysalis: I'm not wasting the possibility of a future food source. Good old changeling manipulation is required for this task.

Cadance: :trixieshiftright:......keep talking. I'm listening.

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Put them in a cocoon together until they fess up!

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Aye I know where this one is goin, lemme grab some snacks

oh snap, missed the update, time 2 read

Worth it!

TOTALLY! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

ANOTHER train delayed!? This time involving the line to the Crystal Empire. :twilightoops:

*Suspicious Kevin is supicious* :trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft:

Cadance and Shining better set up patrols to keep a look out for avalanches, ursa majors/minors sleeping on the tracks, yetis--oh, yeah, Storm King is dead, so definitely keep up the alert for any revenge acts from them--, mysterious snowdrifts & mountains of snow suddenly appearing on the tracks in the middle of nowhere, and other snow-related hazards. :rainbowdetermined2:

Otherwise, good times to be celebrated by Page and all the friends he's made over the years! :rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Closer to the fireplace Celestia and Chrysalis were facing each other across the battlefield of a chessboard. Neither has made a move the last ten minutes that I had seen, both studying the board but I think it was Chrysalis’ turn.

they're doing the thing where they move one piece then the other declares checkmate in 25 moves aren't they

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The Storm King isn't dead in the Blank Page storyline, he was forced to surrender after he attacked during Page and Luna's wedding through Page giving him nightmares everytime he fell asleep. The nightmares were set on a spell that was cast upon him entering the unconscious world during the book Complications.

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The 'get em, boys' always makes me laugh.

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Now that I think about it, the Storm King still being alive means the Hippogryphs are still trapped underwater.
They should probably do something about that.

Worth it!

No regrets. :D

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Wait, The Storm King is dead? Whe did that happen? Last I heard, he'd basically given up...

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Dammit! :twilightangry2:
I keep mixing up Hiver's story arc with Goldfur's in trying to remember which one is the one where he's dead and which one is still alive.:facehoof:

Pinkie Pie: "Oh, I guess we can think of the Storm King as in kind of a quatum state? :pinkiecrazy:"
Kevin Lee: "Shut up, Pinkie! You're NOT helping!! :flutterrage:"

Good story, I can't wait for the continuation

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Essentially what Deadpool was so confused about.
"McAvoy or Stewart? These timelines are so confusing "
https://www.getyarn.io/yarn-clip/345c4603-3c40-488f-96c9-c3816e723bbf#Oc9Q6U4U.copy

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There's also "Twilight gets a Puppy" where he was imprisoned in stone :pinkiecrazy:

I missed that story start... :fluttercry:
But now i enjoy it anyway :yay:

What a glorious chapter :pinkiehappy::coolphoto:

Page snuggels his place into the Changelings hearts with kindness and cute presents :yay:

So short yet so cute.... ♡

Time to read the sequel now :yay:

This was really good. I'm sorry I missed it until now. I'm glad Page made it back to Equestria for Hearthswarming. This story was as warm and sweet as hot chocolate on a winter's eve. Thanks for this.

(“Do you have any idea how many letters I’m going to get about that sun jitter?”)

None because newspapers in the morning will be a formal announcement quoting 'sorry I sneezed'

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Don't forget greasing the hooves of the commoners with chocolate :moustache:

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Wasn't in this story line mentioned that was one of the few things they enjoy tasting physically was Chocolat ? Nice detail :pinkiehappy:

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