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Jamie Wolf


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Spike has been a friendship ambassador to a faraway land for the last 5 years. He hasn't seen his Equestrian friends for that long either. The new world was not at all what he expected. The memories still haunt him as he embarks on a cruise liner bound for Equestria. What changed about him? Why is it so hard to face the ponies he once called friends? Perhaps the long ride would give him some clarity about what he really remembers, and who he remembers it by.

Story set long after the end of the show (but not the final episode). Just wanted to write a story based off A Pleasant Cruise , but I felt like it could use some more. Emotional sappy stuff is the main focus, so I hope you enjoy your heartstrings being played. Make sure you check out the other story to support the original work! Very good read :)

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Just wanted to write a story based off another I read on here that was good, but I felt like it could use some more.

Which story would that be?

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Wish I knew. I have been searching for it forever. All I remember is that it is very short and is about Spike and Rarity meeting on a cruise after a long time. It wasn't super flushed out and very clopfic, but I really liked the idea. I'll link if I can find it

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Is this the one you're talking about?
A Pleasant Cruise

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Yes! How in the world did you find it so quickly haha!

Hillbe #5 · Jul 13th, 2022 · · 2 · Pools ·

:twilightsheepish: Welcome back Spike!
:moustache: Thanks, Don't tell anypony I got married
:twilightblush: What'll Rarity say if she hears you got married...How will she feel?
:moustache: I'll bet you a thousand bits she couldn't be happier
:twilightsmile: Deal, A suckers bet
:twilightsheepish: Hi Rarity , Hear the news Spike got married ?
:raritystarry: My Spikey Wikey? I couldn't be happier, I got married in secret too
:twilightoops: Wut?
:moustache: See
:twilightoops: When?
:duck: We had a whirl wind romance
:twilightoops: Who?
:duck: You know who... Mr. Thee Dragon
:moustache: That's my name too! Without the perfume
:twilightoops: Really?
:moustache::duck: You owe us a thousand bitts! Silly
:facehoof:
:trollestia: So you lost the bet twice
:derpytongue2: Try all of Equestria
:twilightangry2: Who's got the red thumb?
:moustache: Probably a 30 year old virgin :duck: Who hates boats :flutterrage: Get him, Discord!

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I had just finished reading it when I came across yours.

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Haha! That definitely feels like a conversation they would have

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I appreciate you finding it! I'll be sure to link it and credit :)

This is the best Sparity fic I've read in quite some time. Really hope it gets more attention than it has so far.

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Awwwwe thank you so much that genuinely warms my heart :) I am so glad you enjoyed! Thank you for the feedback <3

It has been bugging me since the first chapter but I really believe that the author confused minotaurs with centaurs. Minotaurs are a known creature and Tirek was a centaur.

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My bad! I had always understood him to be a Minotaur despite having the four legs. I can go back and change the references!

It is great, but you really might want to go back and CTRL+F on minotaur and replace it with centaur on every chapter if the site will let you.

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I will! Just slowly making my way through. Thanks for the read and feedback!

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