• Member Since 2nd Mar, 2016
  • offline last seen Yesterday

efug25g


I usually enjoy MLP because its cute, its funny, and its very adventurous. My favorite MLP characters are Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, and Fluttershy. I enjoy reading stories about Twilight the most.

Comments ( 26 )

For fans of the cover image, and who don't have a DeviantArt account, I say the following:

2823707

I don't read this stuff, just letting you know to get rid of the source link. Can't show NSFW images through links, it goes against site rules.

Feels like Fluttershy won't care about anything.

As much as I like the premise, I just couldn't enjoy this due to the distracting amount of mechanical errors throughout. I feel like you could have made this a lot better if you'd slowed down the pacing a bit and spent a bit more time proofreading.

What's next, it'll inject a tentacle seed for Fluttershy to keep and raised?

An admirable attempt, but peppered with things that aren't physically possible.

Also, many times the word "through" is used when it should have been "across," "over," "onto," "to," or other similar words.

Wait, Fluttershy fell asleep underwater? That's quite an impressive feat considering how loud air bubbles are, especially if you're trying to sleep.

11231588
I've always been imagining something like that for a long time. I always love Fluttershy because of how cute, sexy, and beautiful she really is, hence why I started posting this story in Fimfiction.

Wow, poor Fluttershy. Well, good to know she had a good day regardless.

Here's to hoping that she can safely get back to the resort. And further still, what about the stuff she brought with her in her backpack? I guess they're lost forever, unless that guy realized his mistake and brought it to the Lost and Found.

Whew, good thing to see that everything went fine for Flutty in the end.

I wonder what she comes up with next to top the long swim in the ocean...

Somewhat disappointed Fluttershy didn't strip the thief. Give her a little taste of what she'd been experiencing for the last two days.

11234398
It will just attract unwanted attention anyway. Fluttershy just doesn't want to get caught by any pony nearby while in the water. She only did what she had to do in order to give her a fair warning before leaving thief completely soaked in her own clothes.

That was a neat end to an eventful two days. Good job, mate.

That was pretty cool. What will Flutty come up with next?

Very good job, mate. I guess if Fluttershy could, she'd spend her entire life underwater. :yay:

Can't wait to see how you wrap it up. Maybe something that beats all of that?

I love the idea, but I don't get why you said her breasts and her clit. It's kind of strange to say the clit is a particular body part to label exposed.

And so ends a really neat series. I really liked it.

Fluttershy having her own mud pool back at home is actually a smart idea. That way, she can relive the 5th night again whenever she wants to.

Well done, mate. :yay:

11252792
Thanks. Anyway, I only hope one day there will be others that'll post stories of having the most beautiful and sexiest naked girls in MLP bathing and submerging in mud too, likely those that would fall asleep when the mud consumes them completely.

If I could post links I'd post a link to Itsy Bitsy Teeny Weeny Yellow Polkadot Bikini

Both the original by Hyland & the parody by Homer + Jethro

:fluttershyouch:

....Fluttershy reached out both of her hands and pulled herself out of the water, letting the wet drops fall off her bare back and her long, pink mane again. With her exposed nude body in the sunlight, Fluttershy felt that the sun is less hot than before....relieved that she won't feel too much of the burning sun rays on her naked skin.

She is going to get sunburned in places she will sincerely regret exposing to the sun.

:fluttercry:

Comment posted by DeathRider2021 deleted Aug 19th, 2022

During this trip, she decides to go skinny dipping every night

Until she watched Jaws and realized swimming in the ocean at night is a really bad idea.

11231593
🐟🐟🐠🐠🐟🐠🐠🐳🐬🐬
https://youtu.be/DKsFKPx84mc


aaaaaahhhh😌

Midnight is 12:00 a.m. not 12:00 p.m.

Login or register to comment