Carrie "Carrietta" White is a normal, shy unicorn who is constantly picked on and misunderstood by most of the students at the School of Gifted Unicorns. What's worse is that her mother is a religious fanatic who abuses Carrie after her father abandoned her. After hearing about the latest incident at the School, Princess Celestia turns Carrie over to Princess Twilight Sparkle to help her overcome her fears and her humiliation. What no pony knows, other than Twilight, is that Carrie possesses a secretly powerful magic that may bring utter chaos and destruction if not controlled properly due to her emotions.
Can Princess Twilight successfully give Carrie the self-confidence she needs to overcome her fears from her classmates and to control her newly founded powers or will Carrie succumb to the vengeful madness and fury that is secretly building up from within her very soul?
*Carrie belongs to the Stephen King novels and films*
*MLP belongs to Hasbro*
*All Characters from the Carrie Movie and Film will be described as pony versions of themselves*
Telekinesis is also defined as a type of magic used by unicorn ponies. So, unlike the Stephen King's Carrie franchise, Carrie's tormentors are mostly bad unicorns. Well, you haven't seen anything from them, yet; I'm just getting started with this story.
That Chris mare is a fucking spoiled brat. She makes Sunset Shimmer look and seem tame.
I think it would have been more interesting if she was an earth pony or even a pegasus. Don't all unicorns know telekinesis?
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Yes, but Carrie needs to control her telekinesis and not get too crazy with it, that is by following Twilight's guidance and advice. In the films, no one taught Carrie on how to control her powers wisely. Instead, she did it out of her own free will and due to how powerful her emotions are during that time, it ended horribly for her. Furthermore, in the 2013 Carrie film, she almost took it out on the people that were trying to help her, such as Rita and Sue.
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Hmm, I see...😕
If Carrie survives all this, she could be a seamstress. Also, Margaret can't dig with a sewing needle.
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Well, what do you think of the rest of the story so far?
One thing is for sure, I've got a bad feeling about that the worst is yet to come
This is gonna suck and I know it. Not even Twilight and Celestia are gonna be able to protect Carrie from the pig bucket. If you ask me, Chris' reasons for making Carrie suffer is actually very petty and I'd rather she be severely punished. Also, her father should be fired on the spot and have everything he has be taken away.
I really love those lines Carrie said that nothing was over.
I'm happy that Margret is dead, may she rot in Tartarus forever!
At least Carrie won't die here.
Best happy ending ever
Chris' father got what was comin' to him! If the Hargensens and their family try to escape Saddle Arabia, they won't survive the desert, that's for sure.
Cutie mark are supposed to represent a pony's special talent. Unless her special talent is being deppressive (which is a lame idea) you should have at least try to find her something she's good at or she likes to do.
And if you want to do an mlp version of Carrie, you could at least poified the names too
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But none of them have the strength to telekinetically pull them apart, or just don't want to.
"SOMEDAY YOU WILL ALL REGRET FOR YOUR SINS! THAT ROYAL WHORE WILL REGRET THE DAY SHE CROSSED PATHS WITH ME, ALONG WITH-"
*Someone taps on her shoulder*
*She turns around and see Ghost Rider behind her*
"Surprise!"*grabs her by the throat*"Guilty! Look into my eyes! Your soul is stained with the blood of the innocent! Feel her pain!"
*He uses the Penance Stare on her and she dies*
*Before Chris can head to Ponyville, she hears an unholy sound behind*
"You!"*It's Ghost Rider*"Stay away from the child. Or I'm coming for you and your friends."*Drives off, cackling evilly*
Sorry, Chris, but it looks like you have an even bigger rock in your plan than ever.
Of course you used the 2017 version. Chris better stop while she's at it, because clearly she never saw what Thanos did in Infinity War.
Chris, you should stop while you're at it.
*Thanos snaps his fingers, and Margaret and Chris are erased from existence*
I tried to warn you.
Think about your actions, Chris. You're talking about a pony with extreme telekinetic powers, you ever hear of Phoenix Force. Remember what Jean did Alcatraz?
Chris, what have you done to that poor girl?
I tried to warn you, Margaret. But the best part is she'll be facing all the ponies she ever murdered. That's how Carma works. She always punishes you for your wrongs. Always.
I still would've thrown Thanos in for some reason. Though, he has been my favorite villain. Screw you, Darkseid! You can't even properly hurt Superman! I mean, brainwashing his cousin?! Really?! Thanos would've done something better.
I wish this is how things in the movie could have gone because Carrie White truly was a victim not a villain!
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I made these changes apart from the canon because there are still ways to handle the bullying without resorting to violence, revenge, gruesome death, and suicide. After all, Princess Twilight Sparkle has already dealt with worse than what Carrie did.
To tell you the truth I found the movie way more tragic and sad than scary.
What’s Ponycadero?
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It's mostly mentioned in MLP Without Magic in the DeviantArt comic.
I am very proud of the happy ending
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