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Inked Moongleam


A purveyor of fine horse porn.

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Just reading what this will contain is enough to know I'll love this. I'm always excited to see new stuff from you.

You've got a lot of content in the spoiler tag in the description. Is that already written or is it just planned?

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The entire story is written. The two days in-between chapters is for me to give each one a thorough revision.

You had me interested with the description, you have me hooked with how damn hot just the the first part was!

Comment posted by Clopian26 deleted Mar 5th, 2022

So far really good read, definitely gonna track this.

That's a pretty great start, I'm really looking forward to more.

Holy wow this is one of the best stories I have read on this site in a long time! Eagerly awaiting more!:twilightsmile:

A exquisite chapter. Really well done.

Excellent story so far. Can't wait to see how it comes along. Out of curiosity, how many chapters will it be all together?

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Glad you like it!

There's 8 chapters in total. Chapters #2 and #3 are longer than the others, though.

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The twins might be around 22-23 years old, and Flurry is a year younger.

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Well, I'm not going to spoil the entire story, so you'll have to wait and see. :raritywink:

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I got the impression that any child impregnated in Cadance will be an alicorn. Her pregnancies besides Flurry Heart were embryos transferred from other ponies, if I understood correctly.

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Cadance’s foals are conceived by simple impregnation from her stallions. Personally, I think alicorns are supposed to have regular foals, but Flurry Heart is a magical anomaly.

Damn now I'm rooting for Pound to knock up Flurry. Probably not gonna happen though...

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Oesophagus/esophagus is a British English/American English spelling difference.

And that, fillies and colts, is how the Equestrian Hapsburgs were born

c:

Flashing a grin, Carat came back holding a paddle that had such a long handle it was pretty much an oar. "Little princess, I'm afraid it's time for you to do your duty. These loyal stallions are due for their reward, which your little womb will provide, whenever you want it or not."

"No, please!" Flurry begged. That certainly wasn't the usual safeword, so all it got her was a powerful paddling on the rump. "Gyaaah!"

I would think they would do a little more prep work for the sake of the twins. Like be abnormally slow and deliberate with the typing up and going through the rules they already know. Flurry is a princess so putting on a show would be part of what she does.

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You're absolutely right. But, to be honest, I found out I really dislike writing BDSM, so I wasn't too motivated on going back to rework this chapter. I'm writing strictly for the fun of it, so if it feels like a chore, I'd rather just move on.

Meanwhile, in Spinel's right oviduct, a sperm carrying Pound's genes breached her ovum's membrane, their DNAs merging inside, forming the basis of their foal.

When Twilight Sparkle hijacks your fanfic.

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It was a little over-the-top. I would like you to at least try a rough one again but a little bit more subtle.

i hope in the next few chapters Pound re-impregnates Rose Glade, then impregnates Flurry Heart and a final chapter he impregnates his own sister. Then an epilouge where we see Pound doing fatherly duties with his possible 4 children and loving it

Amethyst gently lifted Pound's tail, exposing his anus and his balls, then mounted the pegasus' rump. Amethyst's glans poked Pound's tailhole, suddenly feeling much bigger than it had been a minute ago. However, it was also wet and slippery, and there was just something extraordinary about the fact it was Flurry Heart's own juices that made Pound immediately eager to feel more of it. Who cared if it was coating another stallion's penis?

He is correct, that's very hot. However, sssimp :P

wow, what a cute and innocent alicorn floe. I wonder what great things she will achieve in here lifetime.

but genuinely that was i great clop fic. Didn't cum, but it's a grate clop fic ether way .

Really hoping there's a sequel in the works for this one.

Excellent 👍🏻

Pumpkin let out a faint giggle. "Heh, yeah. But I'm still taking the potion Flurry gave me, dummy, so don't worry: I'm not gonna give you foals."

jk lol

Spinel snorted, barely containing her laughter. "I'm not a slave, Pound. I have a good salary as an employee of the palace, plus benefits. I could leave anytime I want, same as everypony else, but I won't. I love my Mistress so much… I love to serve her, I love to clean her room, I love to warm her bed, and I love when she uses me for her pleasure. If she wants me to breed, I'll happily raise a foal for her." She pulled close to Pound, sandwiching Rose Gold between them, and planted a kiss on his cheek. "Here... You're her friend, she let you borrow us. Please enjoy our charms."

I'm so glad this part was included. I felt a bit weirded out in the last chapter and was surprised the cake twins didn't seem to share that concern.

So far, my only regret is that I took such a long time to finally get around to reading this. I love how it’s both tender and quite casual! Especially, the casual impregnation! A few typos here and there, but not bad enough to ruin the story.

Really love this story, and I want more! Love how casual and yet intimate everything was, love the concept of Flurry lending her mares and stallions to friends.

Maybe I’ll have to do a similar story sometime… Twilight lending her new staff to her friends? Or perhaps the CMCs? Or maybe the whole brother/sister thing again, with AJ & Big Mac visiting Cadance…

My only complaint, perhaps, is that the final chapter felt a bit short and anticlimactic. More intimate, yes, but the intimacy could have been played up more or something? It’s just that the final chapter ends with a bit more of the same, rather than a climactic bang.

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I'm glad you liked, and I look forward to reading what you'll come up with! You've been one of my biggest inspiration when I first started writing here, so this is really coming full circle haha! :yay:

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^.^ Well, here's what I've come up with so far:

Inspiration from 'Royal Service' by Inked Moongleam: The precocious young mare Twilight Sparkle has started to have *urges*. While her parents have given her *the talk* and all, so she knows what's going on, it's still terribly awkward because she doesn't have any colt friends, and it's starting to really get to her. It's affecting her studies, even -- that's how serious it is. Thankfully, Celestia has a solution. *Several* solutions: choice stallions and mares of her personal staff, whom she's perfectly happy to share with young Twilight to satisfy and relieve her urges. Under Celestia's careful supervision, Twilight takes care of what needs to be done. Repeatedly. Like, a lot. Honestly, the young mare's libido is rather impressive to Celestia. If Twilight wasn't already destined for greater things, Celestia would definitely consider offering her a position in her *personal* staff. Of course, Celestia is very accommodating. Even when Twilight asks about maybe inviting her friends, Celestia gives the nod. (After all, she's happy to hear Twilight actually does have some freinds.) Which begins a whole new chapter that also includes Moondancer, Minuette, Twinkleshine, and Lemon Hearts. (definitely not anthro; the young mares aren't fillies anymore, but they're still teenagers, not adults yet)

Inspiration from 'Royal Service' by Inked Moongleam: Future alicorn Twilight introduces her friends to the benefits of her royal staff (slash harem), with both mares and stallions to sample; one chapter for each of the mane 6. (Maybe anthro)

Inspiration from 'Royal Service' by Inked Moongleam: Princess Twilight learns that the (aged up) Cutie Mark Crusaders are on a quest to lose their virginity. So far, a hilariously awkward and unsuccessful quest. To save Ponyville from any further sexual shenanigans (and also just to be nice), she invites the three fillies to the Castle of Friendship, where they'll be introduced to Twilight's new royal privilege: her personal (*very* personal) staff. (Aged up, possibly anthro.)

Inspiration from 'Royal Service' by Inked Moongleam: AJ finally has a break in the farm work long enough to take Cadance up on that offer for a little vacation to the Crystal Empire. All her other friends have already gone, and they gave it rave reviews (though they were a bit vague about what exactly they did there). AJ, ever busy and a hard worker, is the last to make time for it. The invitation specifies a 'plus one', but she's also too busy all the time to have any special somepony. So who should she bring? Be a shame for the free 'plus one' portion of the trip to go to waste. Aha! Big Mac can go. He's been workin' just as hard, and he deserves a vacation too. ----- Once there, they'll find out just what hospitality the Crystal Palace has to offer, specifically Cadance sharing some of her personal staff/harem with the two siblings. At first individually, then together side by side, and by the end, well, incest is inevitable with these two, isn't it? (Maybe anthro.)

These ideas are up for my supporters' monthly vote now, ready to be voted on for next month. And I'm really hoping they'll pick one or maybe more than one of these!

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