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Foxy Henhouse
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Oh, this is fantastic. I adore the dialog between these two, and the actual writing technique for the sex scene was incredible. Like, on a technical level, that was a masterclass in how to do a sex scene, and I loved every moment of it.
You know, I was originally just going to skim the sex scenes and just read the character interactions, but man, this was captivating. The descriptions involved in those scenes are just so good, and I can't wait to read more.
Oh, ouch. Well, there's the classic character work I've seen from you before. I've not been so enraptured by an internal monologue like this in so long, and the way it's woven into the sex scene is definitely something I've not seen in a very long time, and maybe never so well before. This is how erotica should be written, something that transcends porn while still respecting its roots, as it were.
Oh wow I love everyone in this story. And that bdsm scene was just... incredible. Sublime. Incredibly hot while also doing so much for the plot and characters. Masterful.
Lmao
Now, Foxy; you wouldn't be just teasing us with this possible Pumpkin/Shining/Cadance threesome somewhere down the line, would you?
Seriously though, this is aces all the way around. Best romance in ages. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Awesome story
I loved this story so much! Are you sure this is your first clopfic? XD
I loved the light romance and the sex scenes, I hope you will expand on some concepts that were discussed about in this story (perhaps some of Pound's and Flurry's past experiences with other ponies, or Cadance returning the favor to Pumpkin)!
In any case looking forward to more stories from you, great job!
I read so many trashy, horny romance novels before I got into the fandom. Part of me is really pissed that they weren't as good as this, or else I'd be a much better writer right now. I loved every moment of this, and loved how you wove the plot into the porn. 10/10 would read another clopfic by you.
A great beginning, love the dynamic between these two.
She's awesome.
Wait, the plan is a shipname??? Nice touch.
I really liked the sex scene, it was great, but you know what I liked even more? The talk between Pumpkin and her brother, heck even just her internal monologue was awesome to read. There's so many little things to notice and delight in.
This is masterfully written.
That being said, I am curious as to how this will continue for Pumpkin and Cadence as well. She seemed very eager to be introduced to her husband, yet it seems she isn't even into stallions. Will be interesting to see where that leads, hopefully.
This was awesome. The best romance Stories I've read in a very long while, and that's despite teo thirds of it being porn. Simply masterful.
Absolutely exceptional, I can't think of a single complaint
That was so adorable!! And a pairing I never even thought about. well done
There’s something about these two that feels unequivocally real. I feel like I’m in pound’s hooves, feeling the same emotions he is. It’s like I’m falling in love with Flurry Heart along side Pound Cake. The character interaction are impeccable. The personality that Flurry has is something to die for. This is incredible good romantic writing in a clopfic. Honestly half of the romance novels on this site aren’t as good as this one. You’re doing a really good job and I genuinely mean it.
Really good. Not a ship I'd thought about before but really nicely done and I really liked the emphasis on the feelings throughout.