Pound Cake and Flurry Heart have been friends with benefits for years, and "friends" is exactly what both of them claim they're happy being. They're both lying—and their families are going to drag the truth out of them, one way or another.
Oh wow I love everyone in this story. And that bdsm scene was just... incredible. Sublime. Incredibly hot while also doing so much for the plot and characters. Masterful.
I really liked the sex scene, it was great, but you know what I liked even more? The talk between Pumpkin and her brother, heck even just her internal monologue was awesome to read. There's so many little things to notice and delight in.
This is masterfully written.
That being said, I am curious as to how this will continue for Pumpkin and Cadence as well. She seemed very eager to be introduced to her husband, yet it seems she isn't even into stallions. Will be interesting to see where that leads, hopefully.
Oh wow I love everyone in this story. And that bdsm scene was just... incredible. Sublime. Incredibly hot while also doing so much for the plot and characters. Masterful.
Now, Foxy; you wouldn't be just teasing us with this possible Pumpkin/Shining/Cadance threesome somewhere down the line, would you?
Seriously though, this is aces all the way around. Best romance in ages. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Wait, the plan is a shipname??? Nice touch.
I really liked the sex scene, it was great, but you know what I liked even more? The talk between Pumpkin and her brother, heck even just her internal monologue was awesome to read. There's so many little things to notice and delight in.
This is masterfully written.
That being said, I am curious as to how this will continue for Pumpkin and Cadence as well. She seemed very eager to be introduced to her husband, yet it seems she isn't even into stallions. Will be interesting to see where that leads, hopefully.