• Published 4th Mar 2022
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Royal Service - Inked Moongleam



A weekend in the Crystal Empire with Flurry Heart is great. A weekend with Flurry Heart and all her servants is even better.

Comments ( 8 )

Nice story.

wow, what a cute and innocent alicorn floe. I wonder what great things she will achieve in here lifetime.

but genuinely that was i great clop fic. Didn't cum, but it's a grate clop fic ether way .

Really hoping there's a sequel in the works for this one.

Excellent 👍🏻

Pumpkin let out a faint giggle. "Heh, yeah. But I'm still taking the potion Flurry gave me, dummy, so don't worry: I'm not gonna give you foals."

jk lol

Really love this story, and I want more! Love how casual and yet intimate everything was, love the concept of Flurry lending her mares and stallions to friends.

Maybe I’ll have to do a similar story sometime… Twilight lending her new staff to her friends? Or perhaps the CMCs? Or maybe the whole brother/sister thing again, with AJ & Big Mac visiting Cadance…

My only complaint, perhaps, is that the final chapter felt a bit short and anticlimactic. More intimate, yes, but the intimacy could have been played up more or something? It’s just that the final chapter ends with a bit more of the same, rather than a climactic bang.

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I'm glad you liked, and I look forward to reading what you'll come up with! You've been one of my biggest inspiration when I first started writing here, so this is really coming full circle haha! :yay:

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^.^ Well, here's what I've come up with so far:

Inspiration from 'Royal Service' by Inked Moongleam: The precocious young mare Twilight Sparkle has started to have *urges*. While her parents have given her *the talk* and all, so she knows what's going on, it's still terribly awkward because she doesn't have any colt friends, and it's starting to really get to her. It's affecting her studies, even -- that's how serious it is. Thankfully, Celestia has a solution. *Several* solutions: choice stallions and mares of her personal staff, whom she's perfectly happy to share with young Twilight to satisfy and relieve her urges. Under Celestia's careful supervision, Twilight takes care of what needs to be done. Repeatedly. Like, a lot. Honestly, the young mare's libido is rather impressive to Celestia. If Twilight wasn't already destined for greater things, Celestia would definitely consider offering her a position in her *personal* staff. Of course, Celestia is very accommodating. Even when Twilight asks about maybe inviting her friends, Celestia gives the nod. (After all, she's happy to hear Twilight actually does have some freinds.) Which begins a whole new chapter that also includes Moondancer, Minuette, Twinkleshine, and Lemon Hearts. (definitely not anthro; the young mares aren't fillies anymore, but they're still teenagers, not adults yet)

Inspiration from 'Royal Service' by Inked Moongleam: Future alicorn Twilight introduces her friends to the benefits of her royal staff (slash harem), with both mares and stallions to sample; one chapter for each of the mane 6. (Maybe anthro)

Inspiration from 'Royal Service' by Inked Moongleam: Princess Twilight learns that the (aged up) Cutie Mark Crusaders are on a quest to lose their virginity. So far, a hilariously awkward and unsuccessful quest. To save Ponyville from any further sexual shenanigans (and also just to be nice), she invites the three fillies to the Castle of Friendship, where they'll be introduced to Twilight's new royal privilege: her personal (*very* personal) staff. (Aged up, possibly anthro.)

Inspiration from 'Royal Service' by Inked Moongleam: AJ finally has a break in the farm work long enough to take Cadance up on that offer for a little vacation to the Crystal Empire. All her other friends have already gone, and they gave it rave reviews (though they were a bit vague about what exactly they did there). AJ, ever busy and a hard worker, is the last to make time for it. The invitation specifies a 'plus one', but she's also too busy all the time to have any special somepony. So who should she bring? Be a shame for the free 'plus one' portion of the trip to go to waste. Aha! Big Mac can go. He's been workin' just as hard, and he deserves a vacation too. ----- Once there, they'll find out just what hospitality the Crystal Palace has to offer, specifically Cadance sharing some of her personal staff/harem with the two siblings. At first individually, then together side by side, and by the end, well, incest is inevitable with these two, isn't it? (Maybe anthro.)

These ideas are up for my supporters' monthly vote now, ready to be voted on for next month. And I'm really hoping they'll pick one or maybe more than one of these!

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