A story about unconventional pairings, misinterpretation, bad decisions, and the general chaos shipping can bring to Equestria.
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Fantastically written, very enjoyable. Bravo
Bah, even in Equestria we British can't get away from silly stereotypes.
Interesting story nonetheless, looking forward to reading more.
MOAR!
MOAR!
"The scene was in no way rife with thinly veiled sexual implications."
:badpokerface:
MOAR!
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Thanks for pointing those out, I must have missed them on the clean-run before I posted it.
As for the description...yeah, I expected it to have that effect. As I said, I'm not good at coming up with descriptions, and it's a little difficult to summarize "crazy" accurately.
Nice change of pace from your other story. I'm looking forward to see where it leads.
Hey, I like your approach - taking crazy ships, and making them feel feasible.
TwiDerp is cute
So when does the Celestia x Applejack part start up?
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Curses! How did you predict it so easily!
Actually, I have a much better one in mind for Celestia. And no, it isn't Spike, either.
Trixie\Dash? That would be first! I WAITED FOR IT SO LONG
GIMME TWO ARROGANT MARES SHIPPED WITH EACH OTHER NAO
92121 CelestiaXOctavia? or an even more unlikely? also I really like how you're doing things here even though they're improbable, you make these ships seem quite natural
Let me guess- Celestial and Chief Thunderhooves.
*Celestia
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It's coming! I can only crazy so fast! ...wait, how do I English again?
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'Tavi is going to get a ship, but it wont be Celestia (or VS for once).
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You talkin crazy homes. All ponies are gay. It's the law of the universe.
Wait, does that count as a spoiler? DAMN IT. Okay so you guys only know Tavi and Gilda are getting a ship. Not all my surprises are ruined.
OH GOD I DID IT AGAIN WHY CAN'T I HOLD ALL THESE SPOILERS FFFFFFFF-
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Tavi and GILDA?! HAPPY SHIPPING FOR GILDA?! THE GUSTA HATH BEEN DOUBLED!!!
92458 it's because your hands are too small
Wait, so we're NOT getting Celestia and Screwball?
I was getting into the story..and then I read the 'cliffhanger' sentence!
I NEED MOAR!
Tavi/Gilda.
I mean ... what ... do you really... YES.
Ooo, Gilda x Octavia. I'm curious, who's Celestia gonna get shipped with, and why is she a filly again?
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THIS. ALL OF THIS.
Celestia / Berry Punch!
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Celestia isn't a filly so much as just de-aged to the point of looking like a regular pony...but still an alicorn. There's method in my madness.
There is. Really.
ehh.... I....... nevermind
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What a bizarre comment. I'm intrigued, what am I neverminding?
"The scene was in no way rife with thinly veiled sexual implications." after rereading that section I realized it is quite sexual out of context
and I never would have considered Trix to have a white mane, i always thought it was silvery or kind of like an icy blue
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I'm a bit colorblind. In the show, it looked white to me, but in fan-art, it tended to look blue. I just assumed it was somewhere in between. I'm glad somepony actually pointed that out now. Thank you
120117 to tell you the truth.... I forgot what it was... had something to do with the third chapter though...
123063 You are quite welcome good sir.
I can see why you would call it white it's hard to tell at a glance, but technically it's two different colors making it up. I feel like Rarity pointing out such small details
Yarg once again I find an awesome fic by chance, catch up with it, and am forced to wait for updates. There are sooooo many fics that I want/need to update. I should probably do something productive like schoolwork. Or the art I'm too lazy to finish. Or the fic I'm too lazy to write. But Ih well I'm going on a tangent. Great story can't wait for it to update. I really like these crazy pairs haha. I actually fond it to see if pinkie/Trixie ship fics exist or if mine would be rare and I found this and got joked immediately. Good job.
Interesting. Not sure who it was that Pinkie saw, thought it might have been Surprise but didn't seem like it. I want to see the awkwardness that would be Twilight meeting Dinky. Well keep up the good work.
NOOOO!!!!!!!! dont leave poor spike out in the cold
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Oh he wont.
But because of his implied age in the series I'm going to be a lot more restrained about what I have planned for him.
Bueno
love twiderp. my fave pony shipped with fave background pony. the age difference between them is kinda a neat aspect that most people don't bring up in these ship fics with derpy. i mean she's a mother after all. i'm diggin it. keep up the good work.
Waiting for more!
It's been so long that I'm confused.
I had to go back and read through the other chapters, still, this should be interesting.
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I apologize, for what it's worth. I know the gap in updates from part 3 to part 4 was rather 'ridiculously' long.
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Sokay, it was a good chapter! Just glad to see the fic's still going.
As long as Trixie and Dash are kissing, this story will
be perfect in my eyes.
Octavia's parents sound like jerks. But you know, that's how it goes.
I liked this chapter, and am eagerly awaiting next chapter!
Was a little confused by the tense sometimes, but I usually get that when it's not past tense, so that might have been just me.
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Thank you.
As for the tense issue...I'm not sure. I'm really more a hobby writer, so it's more than possible there's defects in my writing. Hopefully the story makes up for it.
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I'm nothing more than a hobbyist myself, but whenever I read this tense I get a little confused sometimes, so it might be just my eyes.
Coming out of a dialog using past tense and going back to current tense narrative can jarr you if you forgot. Quickly got used to it though.,
I get the same when I read sleeplessbrony, so yeah.
Again on the story, I hope Trixie gets a happy ending, Dash is nice but she doesn't seem to be ... completely in love?
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Now that would be telling.
Wait. I thought Dash was with Trixie. Or did I get this confused with something else? And who is Fluttershy's crush, and is she that mysterious Pegasus?
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Rainbow Dash will NOT loose.
SHE WILL BE TIGHT.