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aegishailstorm


Enjoy aspects of the show, love the fanfics, well... The good ones anyway. And bat ponies, and... Shark ponies oddly enough? And my OC's, and firearms. Especially firearms.

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Meet Nicholas, a doomsday prepper living in northern Colorado, one day on his way home from work he comes across something... strange to say the least.

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Later Nick was found on the local Highway by State Troopers probed by aliens run over by gasoline tankers and sniffing road kill.

Not a good Night for Nic.

But hay , Celestia had one whopper of a story to tell

This needs some work. Your grammar, spelling, and dictation are all over the place. Words are capitalized at random, and you’ve told the audience too much and shown not enough. Still, there’s potential here. Try and get a spell check/grammar check program, run this though that and fix what shows up there, then you can work on the other stuff.

Celestia's gonna have one hell of a story to tell after this

I almost want that Luna and Chrisalis to have been hit by that same ray but to have landed couple of metres away and just be in the bushes enjoying the view of the unfolding events

Military grade is so damn bad it’s not even funny, most definitely not the type of stuff you want for an apocalyptic scenario where the world ends, and it probably would’ve crumbled (the car) as soon as it even touched Celestia

I'm enjoying this story and looking forward to more.

This guy is basically an older me lol. INCLUDING the name. And the state I live in.

Comment posted by Zeebra Monger deleted Nov 3rd, 2021

"I hit Celestia with my pickup truck" but we are still best budd's right!? =D

"Tell me, do you have any... magic proof locks?"

Hmmm, you might want to try Pinkie-proof locks, they should also work against magic ... :pinkiegasp:

This needs 3 hours of editing

"Well lookie here, we got ourselves a Grade A Nutcase!"

They're probably on about the same level of idiocy.

"Well, Not me, I had nothing to do with it, But as for This nations founders? Yes. At least as far as I know. So, about your life in Equestria, tell me more."

Wait what? (This follows a question about if humans use magic)

and that's beginning of conversion bureau lol

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C: so... should we help or...?
L: no no, it looks dangerous. Let's wait and see if it eats her then decide on how we're going to get home.

that was a great story i would like a sequel or side story that explains how the ponies reacted when they learned they were a cartoon in our world and what happened with Nicolas and the ponies during the week that was time skipped. Or a sequel where Nicolas gets to go to Equestria for a visit and how he would react as Celestia and Luna have a good laugh when he ends up learning that Friendship is Magic in the most literal sense

Oh Celestia i just fucking died at the end there when he turned his TV on!:rainbowlaugh: lemme make a Convo of how it could've went right after he went for the Remote.

Nicholas: Please, i want you all to take a seat infront of my TV and enjoy what i am going to show you! You are not prepared for that you will see once the show has started!

Twilight: Time to learn about the Humans!
AppleJack: Might aswell relax abit.
Fluttershy: Ohh, i wonder if there are new animals to see.
Dashie: I hope it's cool or imma tackle you down Nicholas!
Rarity: I hope it's about Fashion.
Pinkie Pie: This is gonna be so much fun!
Celestia: I wonder what it is, that you wanna show us Nicholas.
Luna: That's a interesting Device thou got there. What does it do?
Nicholas: All your questions will be answered shortly.
Nicholas starts to play My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic on his TV.
After 20 Minutes...
Twilight: HOW CAN THIS BE POSSIBLE?! WE'VE BEEN WATCHED OUR ENTIRE LIVES?!
Applejack: Now ah've seen everythin'!
Fluttershy: Was that us? Oh dear we've been watched!*shivers*
Dashie: I can't believe it, we're all Famous! THAT'S SO AWESOME!!!:rainbowwild:
Rarity: Darling now that was absolutely uncalled for, where did you get this from??
Pinkie Pie: I knew there was somepony watching us everytime! That's why i sometimes even talked to them! :pinkiehappy:
Celestia: That was certainly unexpected that we've been watched from your world Nicholas.
Luna: How can this device view our World?! Where did thou get this from?!
Nicholas: I just confirmed to you that you actually are not even supposed to exist, yet you are just meant to be fictional Characters from a TV show meant for little children. Yet you are all here being real! My Research confirmed to me that a Person named "Lauren Faust" has created a show about your everyday life and your adventures to save your homeland and all that. That's also for the fact that Humans from my world were the ones who lend their voices to you so that you speak the way you are right now.
Everypony is having a Existential Crisis :applejackconfused::fluttercry::pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh::raritycry::facehoof:
Nicholas: Sorry but this is the actual Truth. However maybe you just crossed through the Dimensions to get here from where your homeland is actually real while it isn't in my Dimension. That would explain it. Now do you wanna stay any longer or go home then?
Mane 6: Go home!
Luna: I'm shocked about this revelation, but go back home too.
Celestia: My my! I will return Home too, my subjects need to be taken care of! Thanks for your Hospitality Nicholas, although this Experience was quite unsettling.
Nicholas: Then have a nice trip back home to Equestria you all!
I wonder if they come back someday, gotta make sure i get those Doorlocks incase they do!
1 week Later... (you know the rest if you've read the aftermath:scootangel:)

That was my Version of the Conversation between Nicholas going for his TV and the 1 Week Later timestamp:twilightsmile: Btw i wrote this entire message here in 1 go just to make something insanely funny:pinkiecrazy:
I LOVED WRITING THIS JUST NOW AHAHAHA XDDDD:rainbowlaugh:

I spell checked the story and got it up to date. I apologize for the original misspellings and grammar mistakes.

meanwhile
Sunset: ...so You're telling m you went to a DIFFERENT HUMAN WORLD?
twilight: yep!
Sunset: wow

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Actually when you mention faust celestia would go like: oh her? Yeah she's me and luna's mother!
And the rest of the mane 6 just SCREAM:rainbowlaugh:

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