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Rainbow Dash's adventures at flight school are not as awesome as she hoped. Join her in this exciting tale of bullying, friendship, and being with the one you love.

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I thought of rise against the moment I saw the title...

and now i finish the story and it was intentional ^^

ah liked this story !

I had a bully problem similar to this (except I'm not a pony, I'm male, and straight).
Happened weekly. I did more blocking than RD.
But then you break off ONE ball point pen in someone's arm and hold the jagged end to another's throat yelling about killing him, and you're suddenly on the list of Not To Cross. Pfft.. Pansies.. :facehoof:


There was also a bit of school-mandated counseling... :twilightsheepish:

hoh my gawd this was awesome

but what are the songs at the beginning and end?

I don't understand why this isn't the most popular fanfiction out there!!! This is honiatly the best strory I have ever read!!! <3 and to make it even better you crafted rise against into it <3

Rise Against+My Little Pony= SO MUCH WIN:pinkiehappy:

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It's "Make It Stop" by Rise Against. It's a beautiful song.

82706 Thanks, glad you liked it.

it's a nice little minific, good story, characterization, but the flow seems a bit rushed. Not enough sadness in the attempted attempt at attempted suicide.

easily 3.5 stars, nice work.

Took a long time to get over being bullied. After high school life gets better fast.:trollestia:Wait that's trollestia?

My own life has been rather tumultuous lately and I've had to take a stand as well, dealing with the things and people that have been tormenting me. I have struggled with thoughts very similar to the ones Rainbow Dash had in this story and reading this really hit home. Keep up the fantastic writing!

this was good, i was listening to make it stop and the song finished as i read the end, it was creepy as hell but it's not the first time something like that ha happened, anyway nice story i'm glad i read it

I didn't knew the song as I read this. I listened to it afterwards and then it changed my thoughts about this story. It changed it from "Yeah, well written. It's cool and sweet" to "This Story is amazing!"
So, fantastic work here. All that reading makes me wanting to give myself a shot for writing something MLP related!

This story is AMAZING!
My favorite one set when they are fillies. It has also given me an idea on where I want to start my series I am planning for these two.

Wow... all I can say is bravo. :fluttercry:

i love this! i may be in college, but i am getting a bunch of negativity, judgment, and hate for liking ponies... even my own mother thinks im either gay or a pedo because of it. :applecry: even bringing me close to the breaking point... :fluttershysad: but its because of people like you i have been able to hold on, thank you so much! flutterdash and ponies in general are the only thing keeping me going anymore! this story is so good, again thank you so MUCH!! :heart::fluttershyouch::twilightsmile:

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