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Silver Wit


Writer, aspiring artist and all around nerd boy. Who'd LOVE to write a featured story XD

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Twilight Sparkle and her friends have conquered every challenge sent their way. They've won battles, forged bonds and expanded the lessons of friendship to far beyond Equestria's borders. But when the march of time brings forth some very troubling realizations, Twilight seeks advice from perhaps the only pony in the whole world who could help her.

My submission to the The My Little Pony Renaissance Contest. Originally part of a larger story, I felt that with a little tweeking, I could make a pretty good one-shot. At least, I hope it's a good one-shot. :twilightblush:

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Comments ( 18 )

Why do i read these sad stories!? They get me every damn time!
Lovely and well written story. Wish i didnt read it ehile making dinner though. Very awkward tearing up while cooking xD

:facehoof: Annarchy , Red Ruby where were you?
:facehoof: What do you mean by "At another FinFiction"
:twilightoops: Discord they're taking over Equestria!

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Well I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words :twilightsmile:

"I love you all, class dismissed."

“But, what if we get lost to history?” Twilight said in a hallow tone.

Hmnmm, see G5 ?? Of course, it's not totally lose, just misplaced ...

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Well that's the thing. Twilight is worried and scared over something she can't foresee but then she accepts and has faith in the future generations.

This was a very good one-shot.

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Thank you very much! It was certainly a step out of my comfort zone, that's for sure. :rainbowderp:

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They are words well deserved

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Well I'm glad my story resonated with you :twilightblush:

Sorry its taken me some time to get around to reading this one Silver Wit but I can say without doubt it was a great read. I was gonna say this could of been used as a little prequel for whats to come(G5) since it looks like it set in a future where friendship & magic has gone(I mean the plot to G5). It was a sad story but at the same time a happy one cuz it celebrated there lives & there friendships while passing on hope to the generations to come.(At least that's how I saw it:pinkiehappy:) Though I won't lie it was hard to see them become so old & for them to loose things like bucking apple trees,flying, sight & hearing, not to mention mind. I think this was really well done thanks for the share & sorry for going on so much lol

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No need to apologize, I appreciate your input. I'm glad you liked it.

This was good.

Seeing all of Twilight's friends growing old and losing important parts of who they are.
Seeking advice from her aging mentor. You're right, by the way. The pain is important. It means that those you lost meant something to you.
Then visiting the graves. Remembering them. Crying over them.

This covered a lot and I'm glad I read it. It hit on a lot of things that are so important.

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Geez, I'm so glad my story was able to connect with you on so many levels. Thank you for your kind words :twilightblush:

Wow, I love this. I needed this, thank you

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I’m happy you were able to enjoy it, thank you so much :twilightsmile:

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You’re welcome

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