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Luna's affection for Twilight Sparkle has grown, but what is the Princess of the Moon to do? Perhaps the advice of a random pony will help guide her on her path of love. And with any luck things won't get awkward. Or out of control.
This story was requested by roxas2017 and I finally have something to show for it. My first non Sparity story, hope it goes well.
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Oh. That's really nice start.
Definitely gonna look forward to the next chapters.
Please, have Cadence be Ship-mistress with her OTP chart.
(If you don't have anything planned already that is. If so, then don't worry bout it, tis but a suggestion)
But there is one thing for you to know.
If this story dies before its completion you can be sure as hell that I'll be standing there, in the night, next to your bed, while you sleep, with a knife in my hand, to kindly motivate you to finish this story.
Well your sparity story is good and this also looks promising.
I don't mind seeing a bit of Spike n Rarity in this too, ya konw (hint, hint).
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Wellllllll, I don't like giving spoilers, but I just wouldn't feel right if I wasn't shipping those two together
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Not to worry, the only way I'd leave a story unfinished is if something truly dreadful happened. 😅
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Oohhhhhh, ok, that’s easier than I thought. Thanks a bunch
I can practically hear Tia outside of Luna's door skipping away singing 'Twilight and Luna sitting in a tree'
Luna is trying to woo Twi while public is going to think that Wit is her coltfriend. It will probably be unveiled just as Twilight starts to feel the blooming love for Luna which in turn will cause Twi to feel depressed because she will think she has no chance to be with her.
If this is going to be this way, Discord will fiercely fight to get first row seat to see this chaos. Also be sure to give him a bag of popcorn. My boi needs some snacks while show goes on.
Also. This is really good story. Anxious meets awkward, yep this is good. I need new chapters.
Anyway, stay safe mate. Don't catch Corona or anything. But remember. My promise from last comment still stands.
PS.: MS Office problems? I can hook you up with a solution to this. But only if you are willing to sail under the black flag. Just send me private message. :)
Oh dear... Talk about a big misunderstanding...
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Thanks for the offer and the well wishes, but I got the office issue figured out. Just kinda annoyed that I basically lost a day and a half of work because of it. And not to worry, I'm sure you're of your word, but I assure you, I will continue on and see this story through to the end.
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And it's only the second chapter XD
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Also. If you ever encounter problems with MS Office due to (this absolute shit of a) Microsoft licencing service but want to remain without "software file and code manipulation" give try to LibreOffice. It's like MS Office but it is free and open source.
On another note. Anxiety/depression? You want a friend? Give me a call. I can support you in whatever you are going through. I have my fair share of this type of problems.
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That's awfully kind of you, but I'm ok. Every once in a while I just get down and it's hard for me to make any real progress. It passes after a few days and I'm lucky that my best friend is around. But it's nice to know I have a reader with a sympathetic ear.
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Yes, Featherweight, that's exactly who it was supposed to be. You saw through my ruse perfectly.
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Cadence waking up like that was funny and her sudden arrival was even better.
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I'm glad you liked it!
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And they'll just keep a commin'
A reference to Lyra and Bonbon I assume?
Now where have I seen a setup like this before?
remembers seeing the movie Roxanne
Yeah, here's hoping this doesn't turn out like that fiasco of a movie.
Aaaand there is the plot twist I was expecting.
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Roxanne, huh? Never heard of it, but if it’s as bad as you say it is, I’ll have to look it up to make sure I don’t make the same mistakes.
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Still it is a good movie and while your story is heading in that direction you might not follow the same path, but I still enjoyed it and you might too.
It's one of the few movies done by Steve Martin that I actually like. It's a good movie about...... You know what I'm not going to spoil it.
I wasn't saying that the movie itself was a fiasco, I'm talking about the fiasco the characters got themselves into.
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Oooooooh, that’s what you mean. My bad
This story is SO heartwarming and funny so far. I honestly look forward to reading the next chapter, and to experience the journey as Luna finally gets the nerve to ask Twilight out. This is a well-written story, and a VERY good read
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Oh jeez, I'm glad you like it so much! Thank you for your praise, it really means a lot
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Normally no, but in this case a little fanaticism couldn’t hurt
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oh Boy
Fuck's sake, Cade...
This was positively a fun read. I do not ship twiluna even then I found the story very fun to read because of the way it was presented. Atleast in my opinion the story seems almost full flushed with very interesting conversations between each and every character. Mostly the ones between wit and luna. The celestia choking on a bit of popcorn was funny indeed lol.
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I try my best to make the conversations as fun as possible since these chapters aren't as long as my other stories. Plus I want it to match the campy tone I have.
That was a good chapter.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it
Great chapter. I'm afraid of whether ull be able to keep up your inspiration flow running 2 masterpieces at the same Time.
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But I try my best to keep a good flow going, even if I have a dry spell every now and then.
Masterpieces? Geez, I’m flattered by your words.
Mmm very good so far