It was just another regular night when Adagio Dazzle comes back from one of her concerts to the hotel. She felt restless and drained entirely as she just wants to flop down on the bed and sleep. Sunset Shimmer comes in their hotel room and decides to give her girlfriend some love and slumbering comfort.
A bit of a short story by yours truly <3
Rated T for reasons only. There is some language but should be fine without profane tag. There’s the sex tag for sexual kisses and innuendo in bed. The make out and sex stuff with the nudity is covered by the bed sheets.
Written for Sunset Shimmer x EG Villains Competition and Pride & Positivity 2021
Happy Pride Month
Chapters (1)
14 points for grammar.
10 points for plot.
10 points for creativity.
17 points for romance.
8 points for writing style (I appreciated your unique and jumpy style).
-3 points for borderline smut.
But overall a great story and a great entry for the competition.
10851927
Not half bad
Thx for the crititque
10851935
Thx <3
Aww ~
10852365
Thx for reading
👍
AWWW THATS SO CUTE!
10855077
Smut and Wholesomeness. Mostly made of the latter mixed with the former. It's an awesome story yo!
10882276
Thx
nice work
10950025
Thank u
Why didn't they just go to the bed?
There's something I'd never do, sleep with the tv still on.
While I didn't enjoy this the first time I read this months ago, after giving it a second chance I like it now.