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Twilight is very happy with her girlfriend, and wants their relationship to be as rich and healthy as possible. That means establishing a healthy relationship with her family.
Given their history, maybe Twilight is justified in being a bit nervous.
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Kind of cute that Princess Twilight Sparkle and Sonata are a couple. What's next? Twilight x Aria?
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The plan is Dean Cadance and Vignette Valencia
This was absolutely wonderful. Worth all of the time.
Love the premise! Saved for later and looking forward to reading it.
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Princess version
Can there be a sequel where Sonata meets Twilight's parents but in the human world?
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Probably not
There's rarely any stories that pairs up Twilight with one of the Sirens. Know what I mean?
...Never thought I'd believe Twilight and Sonata as plausible romantic partners. Then today happened.
Love This!
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BOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
As fun and cute as this all was, there is one issue that makes it slightly bitter: if the Dazzlings are right, Sonata and Twilight can't stay together forever. Sooner or later, Twilight will have to go back to Equestria, and since Sonata can't...
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The way I elect to think of the situation is that Twilight treats the human world as sort of a vacation home. She comes back and forth whenever she feels like it, and can stay for basically as long as she wants as long as she pops back to Equestria every now and again to make sure things are going well.
Prior to that dinner, it hadn't occurred to Twilight that the Dazzlings wouldn't be able to make the trip, or that they might not want to. If it's the latter, Twilight may very well move to the human land permanently when her and Nata get to that point in their relationship. If it's more the former, Twilight will work tirelessly until she can find a way of sustaining the Sirens across the mirror in Equestria.
Plus, Aria is salty and dramatic, they probably wouldn't die immediately. Twilight could find a way to get them there, if thats what they want
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Yeah, that's fair
Oh wow! Twilight and Sonata together romantically has never crossed my mind. However, this was such a enjoyable read! Cute, interesting, and funny. Poor Sunset, you just had to bet shaving your head didn't you? Oh well, Sonata's next. I'm going to imagine how that meet-and-greet goes; unless there's a sequel in the works. xD
Loved it! <3
This was an absolutely delightful read. Witty, adorable, and oh so quotable. Thank you so much for sharing!
Not all of this clicked with me as much as I wanted it to, but there were some good moments here! I loved Aria's blunt 'no', and the arsonist line was great. I liked Sunset a fair bit, too, which is nice for me since I usually find she gets insufferable pretty quickly. Sonata and Twilight were adorable, too (Jellyfish
).
Once they got to the sirens' house, I felt Adagio maybe came across too nice and defanged apart from a handful of lines to feel like herself, though. But then finding out that it'd been Sunset's scheme to hook up with Adagio was lovely
A nitpick, too, since I saw this a couple times:
If you have dialogue followed immediately by Twilight's name, it makes me default to assuming that Twilight's speaking. And distinct character voices and context clues corrected me accurately, when I took time to think about each line, but it would've been more streamlined and coherent if there were more of, like, "Aria said" to specify who's speaking when someone else is doing some kind of action.
...I love you, Sunset. She really is the perfect best friend! I mean she got Twilight to meet the other two Dazzlings formerly, she’s offering to SHAVE HER HEAD AND EYEBROWS if Twi goes through with it, and now she’s SITTING OUTSIDE THE FREAKING WINDOW IN CASE SHE NEEDS A PEP TALK! I wish I had a best friend like that. In fact I’m pretty sure she would be the best friend in most of these scenarios:
FRIENDS/BEST FRIENDS
FRIENDS: Will comfort you when he rejects you.
BEST FRIENDS: Will go up and ask him, "It's because you're gay, isn't it?"
FRIENDS: Will be there for you when he breaks up with you.
BEST FRIENDS: Will call him up and whisper, "Seven days..."
FRIENDS: Helps you up when you fall.
BEST FRIENDS: Keeps on walking saying, "Walk much, dumb butt?
FRIENDS: Helps you find your prince.
BEST FRIENDS: Kidnaps him and brings him to you.
FRIENDS: Will ask you if you're okay when you're crying.
BEST FRIENDS: Will laugh at you and make a joke to make you laugh at yourself
FRIENDS: Will offer you a soda.
BEST FRIENDS: Will dump theirs on you then you will dump yours on theirs
FRIENDS: Will sit at the side of the pool with you at that time of the month.
BEST FRIENDS: Will throw you a tampon and push you in.
FRIENDS: Will help you move.
BEST FRIENDS: Will help you move the bodies.
FRIENDS: Will bail you out of jail.
BEST FRIENDS: Would be in the room next to you saying, "That was awesome! Let's do it again!"
FRIENDS: Never ask for anything to eat or drink.
BEST FRIENDS: Helps themselves and are the reason why you have no food.
FRIENDS: Call your parents by Mr. and Mrs. and Grandpa, by Grandpa.
BEST FRIENDS: Call your parents DAD and MOM and Grandpa, GRAMPS!
FRIENDS: Would bail you out of jail.
BEST FRIENDS: Would be sitting next to you sayin "Dang" we messed up!"
FRIENDS: Have never seen you cry.
BEST FRIENDS: Wont tell everyone else you cried...just laugh about it with you in private when your not down anymore.
FRIENDS: Asks you to write down your number.
BEST FRIENDS: Has you on speed dial.
FRIENDS: Only know a few things about you.
BEST FRIENDS: Could write a very embarrassing biography on your life story...
FRIENDS: Will leave you behind if that is what the crowd is doing.
BEST FRIENDS: Will kick the whole crowds butt that left you
FRIENDS: Would knock on your front door.
BEST FRIENDS: Walk right in and say "I'M HOME."
FRIENDS: You have to tell them not to tell anyone.
BEST FRIENDS: Already know not to tell.
FRIENDS: Ask why you're crying
BEST FRIENDS: Already has the shovel ready to bury the loser that made you cry.
FRIENDS: comfort you when you fight with your boyfriend
BEST FRIENDS: go over to his house and kick his butt
FRIENDS: Bail you outta jail
BEST FRIENDS: sit next to you singing the jail song
FRIENDS: Will pick out a cute chick-flick to watch with you on movie night
BEST FRIENDS: Will pick out "The Ring" for movie night then scare you in the process
FRIENDS: Will be embarassed when all goes silent and you start to sing the song that has been stuck in your head for days
BEST FRIENDS: Will be singing along with you
FRIENDS: Tell you to forget it when you say you want to vandalize a guy's house
BEST FRIENDS: best friends are the ones getting fined by the police with you
FRIENDS: Think your insane for jumping off a roof onto a trampoline
BEST FRIENDS: Are jumping with you
FRIENDS: come over every couple of months for a sleepover
BEST FRIENDS: are your weekend boarders
FRIENDS: are offended when you make fun of them
BEST FRIENDS: kick your butt and all's forgiven
FRIENDS: are shy around your boyfriend
BEST FRIENDS: will tease him till he blushes redder than a fire engine
FRIENDS: don't see you if you're sick
BEST FRIENDS: Are there when you're sitting in a bed under a blanket with a thermometer, book, and your phone
FRIENDS:dare you to scream into the street
BEST FRIENDS: dare you to go streaking
FRIENDS: call you retarded for running threw bleachers yelling "IT'S PICKLE TIME!"
BEST FRIENDS: are screaming and running with you
FRIENDS: Meet your boyfriend and say nice to meet you
BEST FRIENDS: Meet your boyfriend and scare the Hell out of him by threatening to break every bone in his body if he hurts you
FRIENDS: Will tell you they know how you feel
BEST FRIENDS: Will sit down and cry with you
FRIENDS: Ask nicely for your stuff
BEST FRIENDS: Just shout "GIMME" it
FRIENDS: Wait to call you at a reasonable hour
BEST FRIENDS: Will call you at two in the freaking morning
FRIENDS: Won't let you do stupid things
BEST FRIENDS: won't let you do stupid things 'alone'.
FRIENDS: Will buy you lunch
BEST FRIENDS: Will eat yours
FRIENDS: will come and ask you to get a drink with her if some strange boy grabs you on the dance floor and you need an 'out'.
BEST FRIENDS: Will push herself in between you and the punk, wrap her arms around you, and say. "I'm sorry she's here with me, find your own date."
FRIENDS: Will not try anything that will embarass you while near your crush.
BEST FRIENDS: Will cackle evily and try to push you 'by accident' into him while standing next to him.
FRIENDS: Would read and ignore this
BEST FRIENDS: Would repost this crap
FRIENDS: Fade
BEST FRIENDS: Are forever
I already knew, but this story really did end up being 10k, huh?
Good job.
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It's crazy what happens when I procrastinate on a 3k fic, ain't it?
So relatable
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I liked it, but I think it would have been better if it was Sunset Shimmer and Sonata instead of Twilight and Sonata
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Then who would be Sunset's best friend/wingwoman? I don't think Twilight would work in that role.
Feel free to write your iteration with your preferred ship, then get back to me
Very nice story. Funny and adorable at the same time.
Good lord this was adorable. And you made the relationship work, too!
Cute story this. Just one thing
But why tho?
I can kind of wave away Twilight taking claases on the human side, but why in the heck is she in a high school Algebra class?
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Since she's not from around here, the school had a hard time figuring out where to place her. They can't work out her credits and the like, so currently she's stuck in basic Algebra for now.
School truancy policies, apparent age, the Bureacy's ability to stuff people into the wrong pigeon hole in No matter how believable the facts presented.
It doesn't help that Sonata is terrible at math.
Sonata & Pri-Twi are the last people I expected to be a couple, but works out so perfectly here & now I want more stories to feature these 2 together! Great job!
Twinata is one of my fave crackships
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I don't really like the term crackship for these two. To me, a crackship needs to be entirely random, with no basis on anything and with no chemistry or believable interactions between the two. Twilight and Sonata have a history, albeit brief, and Sonata's innocent, borderline harmless personally makes it believable to me that she could've stuck around and made some friends, especially with someone like Twilight (who's entire belief system is based around making friends with any and everyone she can).
So, is this a crackship? I'd say no. Unorthodox and a bit unusual? Sure. But not crack.
I really like your more carefree and casual interpretation of Sunset and your more maternal interpretation of Adagio. (And the fact that you're shipping those two). Kudos!!!
id like a sequel of sonata in equestrian after Twilight did research on if the dazzzlings could come back
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> “No sweat! All we gotta do is cut my hair and dress me like a boy, they’ll never know the difference!”
I don't think even that is necessary. They don't know what humans look like. I know it took me a while to figure out that stallions have big noses.
Ouch. I can already feel the memories of comments I've gotten in the past for falling into the 'looks like a lesbian' stereotype.
Anyway, this was pretty fun. Snarky siren sisters made a nice balance to a sweeter Sonata. I like how you took care to show her as that - a sweet girl who can work well with Twilight as her girlfriend. It made the romance more believable and the comedy more fun and character-based than if you had decided to go with a 'Sonata is stupid, Twilight is a galaxy brain compared to her, and they have literally nothing to make it work but they're dating okay' plotline that bumbled everywhere.
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I tend to view Sonata less as stupid and more "dreamy". It's not that she's dumb, she just tends to be in her own little world a lot. Kinda like Pinkie.
Thanks for reading
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This reminded me of the Thousand Yard Stare Sonata meme that was going around for a while.
Wouldn't these descriptions also fit Pinkie Pie?
What, the fourth-wall breaking is a deal-breaker for you, Twilight?
...It's a crystal castle. It can't be set on fire, unlike your old library tree. Unless somepony somehow got their hooves on chlorine trifluoride, which would be an incredibly braindead thing to do.
Except for eyeshadow and false eyelashes, at least judging by Rarity. Makes sense; there is fur between the makeup and skin.
Sequel?
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No
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Aw.....
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Why no sequel!? This needs to be further explored! I would love to see Sonata meets Twilights parents and her telling them that she’s gay
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The story I wish to tell has reached its conclusion
Absolutely love it!
Short and sweet, yeah I like this.
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This story is 10.5k words when it was only supposed to be 3. I wouldn't exactly call this short at all.
Thanks anyway
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Considering how long are stories that I usually read trust me it's short.
She lives in another dimension