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Two girls and one romantic night. Sunset Shimmer and Twilight Sparkle (Sci-Twi) went to a special Sugar Cube Cafe for the evening. The one n only matchmaker Pinkie Pie is their waitress and little did they know is that they may have an cute special moment under a mistletoe. <3
Link to fan art: https://www.pinterest.cl/pin/584131014152583498/
A short story by yours truly.
Featuring a very cute Sci-Twi and Sunset. 
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Why do you always prematurely disable your ratings as soon as you post a new story? There are quite a few good stories written by you on your page, and I would have gladly given this and a few of those a like.
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Awww Thx for the compliment
It’s just that I don’t really care for the ratings really so I just disable them. I just write these stories for fun
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Now that's something I will always respect. Whenever writers tell me that, I usually feel skeptical. Most of them prove it by writing regardless of if their dislike to like ratio is heavily skewed to the negative side, but you've proven to both be a good writer and a writer who just seems to write for fun. Keep up the excellent work, 13SS.
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Thx
This’ll be my last story for 2020 so stay tuned for my 2021 plans soon
I've been I've been nice naughty.
(Sorry, internet law required me to.)
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It’s ok
I see you love the fanart
I want that cover artist
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If I find it I’ll let you know
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Probably should have without needing to be asked, tbh. Just as a curiosity to the artist 😓
If it helps I’m just as harsh on youtubers who don’t do so with dramatic readings
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It’s ok I don’t mind if someone asks about it.
Anyways I’ll try and find it tomorrow and tell you where it’s from.
Aww what a cute story
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Thx for reading
I never knew you could stick a mistletoe on the wall. I guess I learned something new. Happy Holidays, everyone.
despite a few msitakes I loved it!
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Thx sorry for the edit mistakes but I’m glad you enjoyed
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it was still
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This is my last story on here for 2020 so stayed for some 2021 plans mine if you want
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can't wait to see what you got planned. I'm hoping to get 1 more story myself out before 2020 is over and 2 more stories in January,
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Cool can’t wait for some your story ideas
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you can check them if you'd like, I've written several since September and some of them are doing very well.
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Cool I’ll drop by when I’m done with my stuff
Hello, a review of your story has been posted. I hope you find it helpful.
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Thanks for the review and feedback
Next time I create a short story I’ll make sure to make some improvements
Here's stuff that caught my attention while reading that not even Jarvy's review brought up. There's unnecessary details here and there. For example...
We didn't need to know she locks the door to her apartment or that the keys are on the same keychain as her motorcycle keys. It doesn't really add anything to the story and doesn't come up again in any meaningful way. We don't need to know all the mundane details of what's happening. There's several other examples of this throughout the story.
Those are some other examples of stuff that could have been cut without losing anything from the story. It's not much different compared to saying characters wake up and brush their teeth and such. Unless there's a special reason, that mundane stuff is best skipped. Which also means since I noticed it quite heavily in this story, I need to be mindful of doing this myself as well.