Darrell Pantinnu (aka. DJ DArK STAr) is getting bored of his mediocre life. The only things that get him out of bed in the morning are his music and his fiance Tia. He begins to doubt himself more and more as he hides his one true secret from his love. But how will that change when he is hit by a bus and sees his fiance standing over him....in a strange world of pastel technicolor ponies!
Rated Teen for language, alcohol use and crude humor. This is a work of fiction and any reference to persons dead or alive is completely unintentional. My Little Pony, names, and likenesses are trademark of Hasbro Studios.
Chapters (5)
I thought it was fine.
1232933 Why post it if you /know/ it sucks?
D'aww, how I expected a gangster to date Celesty! Very d'awwing, considering I think that this is cute.
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In science class today, we had microscopes and put a larvae in the slide. When close up, we could see it's heart pumping and it's head shaking, and I literally screamed out "D'AWWW!"
1237523 s**ts and giggles
1237529 D'AWWWWW
I like it.
1237541 Thanks...but i was serious about this literally being a take-a-dart-and-throw-it-at-a-wall story....i'll post the pic to prove it soon
1237553 don't care how you chose the idea. It's still good.
1237564 thnks... and i bet it is easy to tell it usually isn't my style to do romance stories...i usually do dark shit like my Saw story or my Marenobyl story... hopefully it continues to go well though
That actually wasn't bad. You say it sucks, but I like it. As a reward, have an Octavia plot: dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png
And some Deadmau5: [youtube=XaZkpyMl20Y]
1237801 Thanks and beautiful plot btw lol and Deadmau5...fuck yeah! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_chair.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
Fuck yes. This here is success my friend. Also, on a side note, I believe ponies live on neptune( reply if you get it)
This is epic.
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Nice job.
i liked it
Here's your criticism, bitch.
Take that thumbs up and get me more.
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1237953 i get it
1237956 fuck yeah
1237962 thank you
1238457 I shall if you shut up and take my writers block
Quite a fascinating concept, play this right and you could make a great fic
1239143 Thanks..more to come and i hope i get better at it
1239243 Damn... take away me thinking this sucks....it's doing alot better than i thought...now here is alittle treat for everyone
Hell yea talk about a awesome turn of events keep it up. Oh almost forgot
Don't hate your own wrighting That would just have you disappointed when you get what you expected, Hate mail, Don't do that, keep positive. Here read my story Sweet Apples, its a romance story, but does have some bad past memories in it. I got the idea to kind of go with some of my life to keep it interesting and entertaining for others. Just keep positive and you will make a wonderful story.
1239312 thanks for the support and i will check Sweet Apples out
Cool job Brony
1232933 Uh....For what my opinion is worth, I don't think it sucks. Moves a bit faster than others I have read, but I sure as hell wouldn't say it sucks... Myself, I'll be fave-tracking, and thumbing-up, looking forward to more. o.o;
The story isn't bad at all. I very much enjoyed the first chapter!
1239736 thanks!
1239828 ill try to slow it down more in later chapters
1240588 thanks!
1238587 hooray, someone who gets mythological comedy!
1241521 of course i do
now....
but they're are saying it wrong....it's Canterlot...not Camelot
Liked and Faved
MOAR.
1244446 thnks
1244891 more to come
Epic fic is epic. Here's a fav and my internetz. Use them wisely and write moar of this.
1245263 thanks alot!
Seriously, this is good.
. Being so super cereal man.
Don't sell yourself short,
1245439 thanks
1245172
Do not forget to write more please
1246342 I shall....
Not a bad start, you show some promise.
I was all set to hate this fic, especially after you wrote the disclaimer, "This is my first fic so please be nice" which is usually the hallmark of somebody writing crap but you surprised me.
It's a little thin, needs some fleshing out but I'm sure with a little effort you could pull it off.
1248277 thanks and it's not my first fic it's just my first romantic comedy human/pony crossover...i usually write dark and twisted stories
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Thank you
1250806 no problem dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Vinyl_Scratch_lolface.png
Great story bro hope to see more
1256114 thanks...should have the next chapter out by thursday or friday
1232933 Here is my hate criticism.......THIS IS TO AWESOME!
1260391 thanks
1232933 Wait you actually had a list of ideas on a wall and you threw a dart at it and picked this? Wow must have been a lucky throw.
1264627 Hehe thanks and yes...i've still got to post the pictures of all the holes in my wall
1264643 I got half of my idea's 'Wheel-of-Fortune' style, I litterally made my own wheel and made it work, posted all my ideas on it, and just spun the damn thing, only one Idea I made was well...lets just say I made it but stopped it since I got caught up it another story.
1264673 hmm...might have to try a WoF style for choosing random stories.... or maybe just use my Three 20 sided die and just make lists up lol
1264684 Challenge accepted! *rolls three twenty sided dice as all land on 20* My luck is at max
! Its a good thing my stories are doin pretty good, Three Main stories and One Alternate Conintuation story.
1265129 sounds good to me lol....will look into them and give feedback