This story takes place a year after the short story; 'The Love of Rainbows'. Carl finds himself a little bored with being in Equestria. Seeing that he hasn't been able to see any of his friends for quite some time. Outside of Equestria, Carl's friends are still at a lost of what exactly happened. And something evil seems to transpire between the two worlds. Find out what happens in this story!
Reader discretion:
contains adult themes that may not be suitable for those under the ages of 16.
Reader discretion is strongly advised.
---Link to the cover photo may be found on my other story.
Special thanks to those who encouraged me to try and write another erotica. I'm only doing this for fun; not for my needs. It's called 'expression'.
Anywho, enjoy the story!
NOPE nothing to do here
First <-- wow never thought i would ever do that
483240 Haven't submitted.
how exactly can i see and read it then
LOL
goood
Hey! my name is chandler
yes! my little sister is finally happy i'll make sure to visit
Sorry, some of us sleep.
Anyways, thanks for the likes/favourites/comments.
Everybrony
I fixed that part in chapter 8. Enjoy.
well....that was certantly....an intersting....erm....read ...yes....very.....interesting good job very well done
Removed the comment that was before RainbowMissile97's. No spoilers.
To everybrony
I'm looking for someone with a good voice and very well at reading. I'd like to discuss some things if you're interested.
Any mention of the name "ALEX" is changed to "KIERAN". Once I edit it.
Towards the end... who's Alex?
Otherwise, liking the story.
Oh, yeah, sorry, I missed 'Alex' a few times in the story. I forget to press ctrl+f
I love that song. Well played, if a tad bit choppy.
Don't do it Carl !!
Ah damn it Carl!!
dude you' re awesome
take this
Awesome.
""Twists and turns are my master plan. Then find the Elements; back where you began...", ???????" sequel?
526054 what is the song's name?
that cheating son of a motherfucking bitch hole me very dissapoint
the fucking feels right now
"Twists and turns are my master plan. Then find the Elements; back where you began...",?????
Didn't discord say that?
485510
Why do you need a voice actor my voice sucks I'm just wondering