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Shadowflash


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This story takes place a year after the short story; 'The Love of Rainbows'. Carl finds himself a little bored with being in Equestria. Seeing that he hasn't been able to see any of his friends for quite some time. Outside of Equestria, Carl's friends are still at a lost of what exactly happened. And something evil seems to transpire between the two worlds. Find out what happens in this story!

Reader discretion:
contains adult themes that may not be suitable for those under the ages of 16.
Reader discretion is strongly advised.

---Link to the cover photo may be found on my other story.

Special thanks to those who encouraged me to try and write another erotica. I'm only doing this for fun; not for my needs. It's called 'expression'.

Anywho, enjoy the story!

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 31 )

NOPE nothing to do here :twilightoops:
First <-- wow never thought i would ever do that :twilightblush:

how exactly can i see and read it then
:trollestia:

Hey! my name is chandler:pinkiehappy:

yes! my little sister is finally happy:pinkiehappy: i'll make sure to visit

Sorry, some of us sleep. :moustache:
Anyways, thanks for the likes/favourites/comments. :derpytongue2:

Comment posted by Shadowflash deleted Apr 1st, 2015
Comment posted by Shadowflash deleted Apr 1st, 2015

Everybrony

I fixed that part in chapter 8. Enjoy.

well....that was certantly....an intersting....erm....read ...yes....very.....interesting good job very well done :scootangel:

Removed the comment that was before RainbowMissile97's. No spoilers.

To everybrony

I'm looking for someone with a good voice and very well at reading. I'd like to discuss some things if you're interested.

Any mention of the name "ALEX" is changed to "KIERAN". Once I edit it.

Towards the end... who's Alex?
Otherwise, liking the story.

Oh, yeah, sorry, I missed 'Alex' a few times in the story. I forget to press ctrl+f

I love that song. Well played, if a tad bit choppy.:pinkiehappy:

dude you' re awesome

""Twists and turns are my master plan. Then find the Elements; back where you began...", ???????" sequel?

that cheating son of a motherfucking bitch hole :pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2: me very dissapoint

"Twists and turns are my master plan. Then find the Elements; back where you began...",?????
Didn't discord say that?

485510
Why do you need a voice actor my voice sucks I'm just wondering

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