Big Macintosh becomes the latest bearer of an ancient mission and a mysterious power that comes with some unexpected side-effects.
"I don't understand it, but I will."
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*tilts head* "The desc dont explain much does it?"
I think the backstory should be put into the 2nd chapter instead of having a background cliffhanger like this. Also, I personally think female Mac should have quite a different look (especially color) from his male self. Otherwise, everyone could recall him instantly.
He looks like a mix of the grinch and Peter Pan.
So... The cat there is basically our... discount Kyubey?
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You could say that