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A 50k word chapter.
Well for all the souls he is reaping he should get his 9 lifes back lol.
Next chapter is related to long cat for long cat is looooooooooooooooooong lulz.
2633665 I just might for the next one...I am gonna try and go for 25k words.2633714 Not really, he more than likely got a 'Avoid a narrow death card' 2633719 Erm....okay?
Otherwise I have high hopes for the next chapter, btw great story so far. Technically first
forgot to mention. Might be wrong not too sure with fimfictions comment system
yes! glory be to god he is back and doing his job well!
Two consistent problems throughout the story is using "than" rather to "then," in fact I don't remember many cases of it throughout the story, other than that, you need to shorten a couple words down, such as "I am" turning to "I'm" etc, I get that it can be used well in places, and if it does I gotta say "go for it" but the consistent use of both of the above can kill the story flow for me, when I can get into it, which I can, albeit it may take a while, the story is really enjoyable, props for that, the long chapters really help. Keep on writing and I'd recommend looking out for those in the future if you ever get time.
2672328 Well since my Microsoft word doesn't work and this site only picks up on grammar errors, I am just winging it until I get the bloody thing fixed. 2689684 And because, I don't know, my mind wasn't all together at the time who knows.
When did he kill a dragon? Unless the unusually large Gremlin was the father
2746737 in Chapter 22