Get rid of the fucking colored text. I hate it, I hate it, oh, and I hate it. Alot. Alot alot.

Stop the color text, it's painful!

1283565 Agreed. Kill the colored text!!!

Death to colored text!

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Jup story line is good but the colour text destroys my brain.

Only the pink one is annoying, the rest are fine :D

Awesome!

YESSSSSSS

-wargod

ALL OF YOU ARE RACIST

1284089>>1283759>>1283626>>1283613>>1283565 Well fine, next chapter no color text, instead it gonna be alot of boring chatting, Discord pranking more ponies, and lastly, Roran using old world quotes to fuck with everyone. "Cake is a lie".

Death to the colored text!

1295608 What?

[quotered] sand and was tripping out to the point where I saw the walls melt and I felt like I was 9,000 feet above the floorYou don't get that kind of description unless you've actually felt it before. You were tripping once?

HA!! "Fuck the police" best part.

There is literally no reason to swear. Your character is a bitter hateful person. I mean you'd go mad after billions of years but you'd be thankful to be able to talk to someone after that right?

OK well finished chapter....wow...

You know you have skill...

Yet its all wasted on cliché's and a bitter OC. Plus plot line is terrible and you're working WAAAAAY too hard to give a little TOO much information every time someone talks. I want to hear more from the ponies. Not a villainus monolog for every day characters.

Oh and for him to know Fluttershy is afraid of her own shadow by just looking at her is just screaming lack of interest.

It's an interesting idea, but poorly executed. I don't know what's worse: the terrible cliché's, the incredibly annoying self-insertOC, the bland and exposition filled dialogue, or how nothing the OC says or does fits with the time period he came from (uh, dude, why are you making references to things from the 21st century when you were born hundreds of years later?).

I'll keep reading to see if it gets better. It has 246 upvotes compared to the small number of downvotes, so surely it gets better in future chapters.

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time to wreak some fucking havoc!

Too many fucking criticizers, that saddens me too a point where it makes me wonder how you guys became bronies in the first place.

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"Hmmm...sounds like somepony is willing to buck anypony...I wonder who is so bold to proclaim such an act...and at this time of day."

MOLESTIA TIME

"TIAAAAAAAAAA!!! The statues are moving again!!!!!"

Poor luna...... Wait..... Again?

During out little mental battle of banter, stupid comebacks, and even dumber remarks we finally agreed to something that even I can say somewhat proudly if I wasn't pissed off that I am the last human alive. I will fuck anything...as long as it is a female that is.

A Roach?

"Hmmm...sounds like somepony is willing to buck anypony...I wonder who is so bold to proclaim such an act...and at this time of day."

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