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Holy shit another chapter
Just when you think Roran cant get anymore badass!
So much for Roran actually, y'know, improving. He's regressing and getting worse. What's the difference between the bloodthirsty animals he fights and he? As more and more of the story progresses, the answer becomes clear. Not...much. And soon there won't be any difference at all. Thou who liveth by the sword perished by the sword. And he STILL didn't learn a damn thing from it.
2594434 Oh my dear god...my story, my path, if you want to do something about it, than go write your own story about some shit. Oh and also, Old Habits Die Hard.
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By your logic, nobody should ever comment on ANYTHING anybody else does unless it's solely to praise it. And I'm aware "old habits die hard". But this is your second arc and you're 22 chapters into a story that's over 200,000 words long. We have established that our protagonist is used to killing. We have established that he rather LIKES doing it. We have established he's an anti-hero type who's foul-mouthed, kinda brash, very violent and has a troubled and dark past which he likes angsting about. But he hasn't changed. Not even literally DYING...and being sent to the Great Beyond to be outright confronted over how his life turned out...seems to have affected him. He's still the same violent guy. He's not undergoing any kind of character arc. Nothing about him has changed. Worse still, he's now teaching entire societies to be just like him. This is not a good thing. If anything, it's worse.
Neither he, nor you, evidently feel he needs to change. And all criticism aside, I see more than that in your character, and it saddens me that other readers of this story...and you...do not.
2594642 I had to do it, I was busy watching the series again cause I was growing bored in my college class so yea. 2594680 That's because in ever other story on this website has the main person all nice and bunny fru-fru and shit, never going to far off into insanity or going bat shit crazy, I am one of the few that went to that normal boundary and said 'Fuck you', if you do not like the story than stop reading it, how hard is it to do something that simple? I mean sure reading it must be hard but if you don't like it the first time than why the flying hell are you still reading it when you don't like it in the first place? Don't like reading it cause it doesn't please you? Than stop reading it! That simple! SIMPLE!
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Every other story? Are you kidding me? Have you seen "Homonis", or "Chains", or work like Silent Ponyville or "Cupakes" or "Rainbow Factory" or the like? This is 2013. Dark antiheroes, villain protagonists, bittersweet endings and tragedies and darkfics aren't uncommon. They're now the NORM. They're the new standard. It's not even a twist to have an ending be sad just for the sake of making a work more "edgy" or "more adult".
If you actually think that having characters who are wholesome and decent are the commonality...you haven't been reading that much popular fiction since the 90's, because genuinely decent protagonists who DON'T have baggage, DON'T swear a lot, AREN'T angst-filled violent types and who DON'T do morally questionable things are very, VERY rare these days. Look at the Star Wars prequels. The recent Star Trek ones. The Christopher Nolan Batman movies. The rise of torture movies like Hostel or Saw. Things like the stories I mentioned above. Don't pull this "if you don't like it, don't read it" junk. I LIKE your story, it's your CHARACTER I have a problem with because I've seen him done over and over again, and...as I said before...he has yet to undergo any kind of character growth 200,000 words into his story, and not even DYING made him reconsider how he was going to solve his problems and live his life differently. That's a problem. That's not the way you do writing. It makes him a flat character in a story that has so much potential. As I said before, I see MORE than that in your character, more that could be tapped into. But you're not doing that. And it's a shame that neither you nor your readers seem to want anything but a violent anti-hero.
Discord... You will forever hold a place in my heart you comical bastard.
2594856if it makes you feel better i enjoy the story the way it is, not every good guy is loveable.
2595326 Thank you, it is true that every good guy is not as good as they make out to be. Sometimes the good guy must commit heinous acts to ensure the safety of others, even making himself evil to keep those they care about safe and alive.
And I am just wondering people, I have been here for a while and I have yet to understand what the block button does, I am thinking it is like every other block button, it ignore people from sending private messages and the like but I wonder, does it also prevent them from reading your stories?
2595671agreed. that's true Evan today, the "west" tries(?) to do good but it is not viewed that way by most. also i forgot to post this last chapter but my self as a American also believes the queen of England is a classy monarch.
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I have wondered this myself.
I believe that you meant to say "not of this world" If I am correct.
2598892 thank you
2610486 Im not going to say anything, you got on the bandwagon to late. Just read cause I have already one person that is annoying as hell I don't need to, and my headache is killing me even with pain killers. You have something ask one of my followers.