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A Mass Effect Crossover without Commander Shepard?! And it's N7?!
Cannot compute...
Failure...
Error...
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YYYESS
YYYYYYYEEEEESSSSS
New ME FIC!
Insta favourite and thumbs up, from now on I am your loyal...pet...thing
1224118 I don't know where you found that picture but that is awesome!
Against one badly damaged Banshee the Ponies barely survived! And who knows how long it's has been since Mass effect 3, Perhaps around fifty thousand years?!
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good thing the reapers only go for the threatening species, as long as they´re earthbound the ponies are perfectly safe.
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1225500 Oh my god that is priceless.
At least we know the ponies can handle a decrepit/old/wounded Banshee........ I wonder how screwed they would be against one that wasn't billions of years old/fully whole?
And Lunas respons to the statues moving? "TIAAAAAAAAAA!!! The statues are moving again....!!!!!"
1225994 She will say that in the next chapter, but its more like the weeping angels style of moving
1226037 Which type of movement, the move inch by inch when you blink... movement?
1226122 The 'slower-than-a-snails-pace' movement.
he's gonna be soooo pissed when they get him out
You need an editor. But I can see the potential in this; good luck.
I liked it, interesting and I'm quite amazed that he didn't go insane from the billions of years in stone...that's some fucking amazing will power
but I really don't like the use of the coloured text, it isn't really needed and it strains the eyes, can you change that please
1229075 Well he have been watching things on Space Youtube while in stone, and since humanity bit the bullet he basically ran out of things to watch, until he met Discord, than he basically said 'Fuck It' to everything that is making sense.
1224739 The story said it has been about a billion years.
1227018 Im still trying to think on what he should say when he gets out. Im stick with 'I need to shit' or 'FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-'
1230778 in truth, he is a statue and like discord said, he no longer needs to do his buisness or take care of his personal needs so long as he stays that way so
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1230937 Roran: "Oh thank god I am finally free....wait...all my loved ones and family are dead.....I am all that is left.........fuck my life."
Achievement Unlocked: Sole Survivor
Achievement Unlocked: Oldest Thing Alive
Achievement Unlocked: Longest Time Stoned
1231009 I think that Roran would have bigger things to be concerned about, Omega is a freaking PLANET now, everything in there is swarming with husks. BTW I think you should have them meet an abomination or Scion for Shits and giggles
1231050 Omega is not a planet, still a space station somewhere, that was just a memory sequence, their be plenty more coming.
1234056 then what is the massive cavern then? you said it yourself that it is a massive cave underground, either Omega became part of it or Omega is on it
1235255 Omega was memory sequence, large ass cavern is near Everfree Forest, basically where London once was, but that part of London sank down, aka underground.
1238042 soo, big ben should still be around
1238812 Yes it is and damn it I just gave you a spoiler for the second chapter.
1238826 OH HELLZ YEAH, second time this month I guessed right on future stuff
1238832 Stop ruining the future! This is not 'Back to the Future'! Alright let me give you one more spoiler. He one-ups Shining Armor.
1238847 might want to stop and delete these comments b4 someone sees
1238852 Nah, cause its gonna be funny to see them type and guess on how these things are gonna happen. Big Ben, gonna be fucken funny as hell to write, One-upping Shining? Even more funny.
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All I have to say is that you need to work on your grammar a bit.
Other than that, I like it.
Have this !
Please make him fuck shit up when he gets out pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeee!
1247411 I second this motion! Let there be asswooping!
holy shit, this is great. like, favorite, bookmark, EVERYTHING POSITIVE
i give this chapter 5/7 asses.
I like it, but... "and Applejack seeling apples" I assume you meant "selling" there?
1255259 Finally someone points out an error! TIME TO FIX IT!
1255330 No problem! How far are you with the next chapter? This seems great so far
1255375 I am halfway done with next chapter.
1265535 Sweet. There aren't many great ME crossover fics in my opinion, but this is one of them.
1265542 Thanks! This is my first crossover story ever, the other ones are just things I thought of while having the best sleep ever! Oh and when Roran wakes up you gonna love the first two things he does.
1265570 Chapter and another chapter?
1265598 Maybe...but first thing is shouting something absurd, than jumping off of a tall spire.
1225500 what the spike and chrysalis **** did I just look at LMAO
"I swear to the gods above and below Discord that if you keep fucking me with like that I am going to rip that snaggletooth out of your head, shape it into a guitar pick and play you the song of my people. And also why the hell are you making it rain chocolate milk inside my head! I hate chocolate milk almost as much as I hate you so get the fuck out of here before I decide to shove this large chunk of coal so far up your ass you will be coughing up diamonds." I said in pure anger and rage at the spirit of chaos and disharmony.
Me thinks you might want to edit this. Personally I prefer to read it as, "I swear to the gods above and below Discord that if you keep fucking me like that..." because that mental image is fucking hilarious.
OK there is just...so much that I want to go in and delete. This chapter was drawn out and the dialog was WAY too long. Hell every character had a monolog. I can tell that you never go back to check your work. This is kind of atrocious.
Also statues aren't supposed to move. NEVER say otherwise. I mean this implies he can move without being free from a statue. Even if this means he just moves his whole physical body. He's still moving.
EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS FULL OF NO!
But continuing to read cuz nothing better to do. Later of course.
No reason to read this now. Got something I have to do. Maybe I'll come back to leave a dislike and remove from read later some other time. or continue on.
Ok first things first, you need to seriously go over this chapter. Every other sentence from the start had either been a run on or had serious issues with pasr and present tense. There were even occasions that I was skipping over text because of the unnecessary details that were slowing it down, only to find out that within the block of text was a tiny bit of information needed to understand the next paragraph.
By the the number of up votes that I saw I can only assume that it gets better so with that in mind, I will continue to ready. However until I see any changes I will down vote this story. I shouldn't be cringing after each sentence and be hoping for better sentence grammar. On another note, I really hope I'm not the only one who has noticed this and has taken the time to comment on this. If someone hasn't sgame on them and if they have but you have neglected to take the time to make the changes, then shame on you.
I can only let bad grammar go for so long.
*Edit*
I tried but after making it almost three-quarters of the way through, I could go no further. What you have done to the English language in this chapter hurt my eyes and brain. My down vote will stay until you can make this readable and if so let me know, I might come and try again.
Less infodump on Equestria please. People here generally know about the show. Writing it down just eats space and seriously annoys me.
Being a Grammar Nazi at heart I can safely say this is atrocious. Being the fan of sci-fi I am I can overlook it but dear god man find a proofreader!
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To build on these points, explain more about the Mass Effect world not equestria. We know who the mane six are. The monologues were hair pullingly awful and too long but I like the premise and shall continue.
WEEEPING ANGELS!!!!
BEGONE DEMONS!!
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Mind raped by Luna's magic? She sounds like she wants to do it.