Behind the Curtains

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macoman1

macoman1 #1 · Aug 25th, 2012 · · ·

Fantastic story this is amazing
I look forward to see more of these.
Right about now is when the MOAR! comes in lol
So you know I think this is gonna get even better next
time you post a chapter.
Perhaps this could be a regular thing for the stories
Oh! by the way you are one of my fave authors :)
So i guess thats about it good job.
Time to go, later.

Schillok

Schillok #2 · Aug 28th, 2012 · · ·

Funny how the statistics say this story has about double the amount of readers of Destination Darkness which it is based on, and still more readers than Jammin' Gemini which pretty much needs to read to understand what is going on and who that OC is...

Otherwise - Twilight sure is ~~naive~~ curious. Feels strange that she agreed on that offer so easily, but I guess that is why it is an alternate universe. Because we already know what happened in the normal story.
Also, Laotanner is surprisingly "generous". All the things she did ~~for~~ to Twilight without getting much in return. Well, except maybe hearing her reactions and being able to touch her wherever she pleases.

Aragem

Aragem #3 · Aug 28th, 2012 · · ·

1173797 The other stories are getting readers too. LOL.

Laotaner is a bit of a tactician. She doesn't want to frighten off Twilight and she is really drawn to the unicorn and doesn't really realize it. It's pretty much about exploration of a new toy than it is about self-gratification. She does take immense pleasure in domination and manipulation. The "teaching" will become more strict in the second half.

DavidPony