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Just waiting for it to come out that the vitality spell also reversed his vasectomy~
Random thought: parents in general are less common in fiction than they probably should be, so grandparents are even moreso. Like, as far as canon grand-incest we basically just had Flurry Heart and the Apples until literally the last episode.
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I don't think this ship has been done before.EDIT: I stand corrected.
Oh, Shakespearicles uploaded. Is it Father's Day already?
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The time has come and so have I!
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Fun lil’ ship. Happy (grand) daddy day~!
Okay, I... don't like this. Like, at all.
I know Sparklecest is your bread and butter, but this? This is just way too "Paddle faster, I hear banjos" for me. Everyone is cheating, everyone is getting cucked, everyone is their own grandparent, and their entire family dynamic now has this underlying tension of mistrust and quiet anger that kills it all for me. Just reading this I get the feeling that everyone in the Sparkle household only "tolerates" the others, with maybe a bit more fondness than you would see on an episode of COPs. And while I usually giggle at the "Shining Armor Is A Goddamn Moron" trope, this goes to the point of him bordering on emotionally stunted and borderline retarded.
So, yeah. Love ya like a brother, that's gonna be a big no from me, dawg.
i luv u bb nu hayt meh
I friggin’ love this line.
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So if I nixed that whole 'who's fucking who' monologue?
[EDIT] To be clear, it was never my intention to delete it. I just wanted to be very specific about why something is not liked and how it theoretically could be fixed. Your feedback is a lot more useful that the drive-by down-voters who saw the Flurry Heart tag.
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BTW, this one does have a lovey-dovey ending. Even more so than my usual fare.
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Uh, well... y-yeah, that would go a long way towards me specifically enjoying it more. But for God's sake, don't do that. You have yourself a loyal audience who eagerly devours what you put out. They probably dig that kind of stuff, that complex "Game of Thrones meets House of Cards but with more fucking" scenario. They are your target audience, not me.
Let me put it like this: I'm the type of nerd who likes my brutal, hardcore fucking to be bookended by Lovey-Dovey-Smoochy Land romance. This is why whenever I commission a story it ends up being expensive as shit because I want a lot of romantic build up and cool down. Whereas you—and your 2,721 followers, I might add—are more down with the "casual sex because casual sex/if it feels good do it" shtick. And that's great! Just not my cup of
jizztea.TL:DR, write the story however you damn well please. As I have often said, I'm just some random asshole in a brown hat on the internet.
Anticip....
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Ation.
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I see you. I see what you did there....
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It's rare, but it exists.
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Ponies on a train did this ship already.
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uhhhhhhhhhhhhh yeah it has... just a few weeks ago https://www.fimfiction.net/story/466194/ponies-on-a-train
not that i'm complaining or anything like that lol
10,666 words...
Nice.
The last three digits on that word count, tho...
Well, that was hot. Kinda depressing though.
Soon it's gonna be happy great grandfather's day.
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The Number of the Beast!
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Loved it Shake!
I would have preferred for Flurry to be a bit overwhelmed by her grandpop's endowment (you know me), but I realised that actually didn't fit in the canon of your incest-verse, where inevitably all mares are drawn to the irresistible prowess of Shining Armor's gargantuan genetic lottery trophy.
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Yes, that is an inflexible fact.
Although part of the purpose of this fic was meant as a penance piece to deconstruct a lot of the SparkleCest clopfic tropes, (many of which are mine), where in of all the pairings, Night Light is often getting routinely cucked as the odd one out. Hence the chapter title. So the whole "who's fucking who" dialogue is meant to break that down from the point of view of the pony from the outside. And also to serve as moral leverage to justify the ensuing debauchery, so as an audience, we can root for Night Light finally getting one over on his son and wife.
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Well, yeah, but that's kind of the point. Night Light keeps on getting screwed every which way and ends up... not embittered, but I think unhappy. Velvet is a self centered bitch, Twilight moved on, Cadence was raised by Celestia into a state of vapidness so all encompassing that it threatens to manifest itself like a particularly cake scented Silent Hill, and Shining Armor is a himbo.
Night Light has every reason to be miserable here. The only reason he sticks around is because of the off chance a random close relative needs a cock thrown into them thus giving him another petty victory. In short, he is the same shit different direction of an Incel, IE japanese humor at work
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I root for no such thing
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I wanna be there when Flurry is inevitably added to the harem!
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As always, your writing always manages to be enjoyable, even when it isn't entirely my cup of tea. I enjoyed the tender moments and can'take quit giggling to myself because all that's coming to mind after Night Light's recap is "revengincest." Excellent work.
so the next part when both night and shiny are doing flurry comes out when????
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"In like... a year."
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a grand story Sir thank you.
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Surely you saw that comment coming?
Oh, man, I loved this. So much tasty backstory and casual cheating, and the sex was hot. But my favorite part was how rough and dominant Night Light was with Flurry. I don't know how to write dominant. I can do mean, sure. But this was way better.
Certainly something new, but I... suppose I appreciate Fullyry heart trying her best to part of the family's regularities.
Bravo! A fantastic read, good story.
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Yeah, it was a bit… a bit like The Force Awakens. All the interesting parts were done for you before the story started.
I was unprepared for The gentleness of this story.
I could have used a bit more flurry bitching or inquiry into the cluster fuck that is the sparkle household.
But now I must delve into more nightlight stories.
Interesting little chapter. I wonder how Flurry will feel learning her aunt's her half-sister.
Also, there's some typos you may want to fix.
"inside"
"such"
Delete that.
There should probably be a comma after "you".
"anticlimactic".
And lastly, "he".
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Fixed! Thank you.
Great story. I wish we had a extra chapter. Maybe one that was a hard rutting chapter.
And he also probably didn't get a divorce because the courts are most likely the same as our world where even if the mother is a meth addicted crack smoking prostitute she'd still be given full custody of the children, not mention she'd also be given the family home as well as all of Night's bits and possessions.
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... I mean, that was kind of part of the subtext. But damn...
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Considering what a whore his wife is, I don't think she'd have a leg on in getting mad at Night for fucking Flurry.
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Yes, that is true.
Just finished it and, even when you mentioned that it's tropes, I felt it's almost an alternate continuation of B.B.F.F.F. trilogy, probably obvious but I'll still point the elephant in the room, whereas this one isn't a happy ending gang-bang-boom-bam, I kind of love this scenario in which everyone knocked everyone up of sheer spite and create more in the process who, by how things go, repeat the family cycle, or dare I say, tradition.
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What can I say? I can't help but write clop with a plot.
Daaamn... That one interessting familie tree
Damn nice story clop. Well done