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CrAzY FaLcOn


One who likes YouTube, Fanfiction and ponies.

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10279518
The other story you think you can have him fight two gods The fourth God in the six God

10279523
Sorry but could you repeat that? I don't understand what you mean.

10279534
Ultimate Equestria can you have Seth fight against the gods and universe 4 and universe 6

10279541
That's not likely. Sunset's story is completed, to my knowledge.

You now have my attention

10283195
I'm glad. Also, to everycreature, this stories plot will be different.

Nice chapter cant wait for the next one

Una

I kept thinking I'd hear the iconic (FORM BLAZING SWORD!)

Una

I'm assuming they are all ponys in this story?

10304208
Nope. Description says humanised.

10304251
Just wait. Another chapter will come out. In the mean time, check in on UE, I'm switching back over to it.

Well, I don't feel any different. I felt a little tired just now but as of this moment, I feel fine. Well, as fine as I can be, being a walking machine. I say.

If you are a walking machine, don't you have some form of messaging screen/display to show the others? Maybe a mini ipad to sent message to others?

10310371
I was thinking about that. It might come into play, it might not. Depends on how I want to take it.

WOW!
This story is through the roof! Dozens of favourites and 43 likes already? Wow! You guys are awesome!!

"WHAT IS THAT?!" Celestia shouts, baffled at the power of the cannon.

A highly powerful cannon.

"What is he doing?!" Pinkie shouts over the noise. Grogar's barrier begins to ripple in a strange way.

Destoring the barrier though a sound base attack.

"Magic exists by mana being formed into complex formulas. However, some things can disrupt that formula, making it fall apart! Diego must've calibrated those sound waves to destroy Grogar's barrier!" Twilight explains.

bingo we have a winner

Wingdings translation is a b***h to do and I really hate doing it.

" FREEDOM! " A loud voice shouts from the place that exploded. Celestia and Luna go deathly pale.

Hello to you discy

WHAT!?
A story that has a Blueblood who is not dick. What heresy is this? Seriously though, that is a nice change.

10344512
It's not the first. I can think of a story (maybe two) that have a nice Blueblood, not counting my own.

"I'm from Fantasia? Rarity told me about her relationship at my "welcome to Walkerville" party." Twilight answers.

That sounds like an amusing background story here.

1.

"I mean, your world is much more advanced than ours, Diego. Could you perhaps share what you know?" Twilight answers.

He shouldn't tell them anything about how his world technology works
If he knows how something works then he shouldn't explain how but simplify it as much as he can so they won't get anything important form it

For example:
Like plains , he can tell that they are machines that fly but he shouldn't tell them how.
Cars are machines that move on the ground but he won't tell them that they have an engine or how it works, or what is a combustion engine, etc.

They cant invent it themselves?
Too bad for them if they are a race that relies too much on magic
They have chosen magic so they should be stuck with their own choices and not get technology for free

2.
If he has given them information what weapons he has then they should do it in return too
3.

Luna says, switching to a language I don't recognize.

So he understands what they said but doesn't know the name of the language or he didn't understand what they said at all?
If the second then should the armor have some kind of translator?

10344827
Your first and second points I don't agree with but the third might be good…
IDEA!

so many things are different then the show and I love it!!

10347873
I know, What I am saying is that it is highly annoying to translate it.

So far I’m really starting to enjoy the story

I don't think our protagonist can handle this alone.

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It can't be…

…The Galra…

(To be continued…)

AUGH
WHY IS IT ALWAYS WHEN I START GETTING INTO A STORY, I GET HIT WITH A TO BE CONTINUED

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10363242
Random story that I like: To Be Continued...

Me:

10363943
I have just watched that video a hundred times. Thank you and
HAHAHA!!

Not to interrupt the showdown, but how can we certain the space ship arrived with hostile intention? Because from the outside perspective, it felt the ship just defended itself, not doing an invasion.

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Im impressed, originally I thought that Diego would become a lion when the bayard port was used, but instead he became something akin to Voltron, just less segmented. Now im curious to see if the actual Voltron will make an appearance! It would also be interesting to see how Pidge reacts to the complete lack of technology Arcadia has.

10367088
1.
Captain of the ship didn't care about what will happen with the planet, maybe was even supposed to attack, invade it
2.
They were seeking his energy source and would attack him anyway

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