“For centuries I have slept, now I wake. All shall feel the heat of my flames!”
A Smaug displaced fic. How will the ponies react when a true fire breather comes knocking? Probably lots of screaming. Definitely screaming. Will this beast reign destruction, or shall he become the world’s new savior. Or is this a prelude to things to come?
A Hobbit/Lord of the Rings, Mlp crossover fanfic.
Yes another displaced fic, how original. Sue me.
Fair warning to all you hardcore Lotr fans, I’ve only seen the movies and briefly skimmed through the books. (And fan wikis/videos) So my knowledge on the lore is a bit limited. Sorry if that’s an inconvenience. Also my first attempt at a semi-serious fic. Please no hate, but fair criticism is welcome. Don’t expect frequent updates.
Your lack of not having read The Hobbit and The Lord Of the Rings is what kills the story honestly. You should never do a crossover unless you know a fair bit of the lore of the franchise in question.
Wikis and fan videos do not count as knowing the franchise as you should. Skimming through the books and watching the movies doesn't count either.
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Fair enough, but I’ll only be lightly touching on the lotr lore. Mostly focusing on Smaug’s impact on Equestria.
I was gonna type hell yea.. until I notice you've chosen a limit source of Smaug. So for now, I'll count this as an AU.
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Yeah, I like to be honest when it comes to my knowledge of things. Better to be honest up front rather than lie and get called out for it.
Im hoping for smaug to be STRONK
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Fair enough. In the future, I might ask for a cross-over, more or less depending on how well your story goes, any changes that may happen, and if your readers and fans are ok with it or not.
Let their be light
please make more chapters
..I'm rather sadden to not see more updates.
This is good, can’t wait for more
Yay! an update!
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Indeed, it is a time of celebration!
NOOOOO!
Smart
Hah, I like it
Smaug will put this new "dragon lord" in place
She and every other dragon lord were probably only a temporary replacement while Smaug is on a business trip.
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Or taking a nap, you know how that fire drake is with his napes, after all once he took the Lonely Mountain he fell asleep until Bilbo Baggins showed up and stole from him.
Great chapter and can’t wait for the next one.
is this story dead or is the chapter taking a long time?
is it possible if you can tell me the date in which the next chapter is coming out?
nice chapter dude, keep up the good work!!!
The bell shall toll when their time has come, for it shall not unleash it's cry until the abyss's cold hand is ready to take hold of their hearts.
Looking forwards to the next chapter
Very nice chapter, nice to see you're still alive man.
We need more dragon stories, more so HiE/displaced ones. (that get finished)
That's a really nice story so far, can't wait to see what will come next. Maybe Smaug directly attacking the vilains? Maybe he'll take a bit more time to wake up? Who knows? Beside the author of course.
I hope there will be an update soon
Magical 69th like Baby! Ah yeah!
Now then, you have caught my interest, I have smashed that like button, and I am tracking this story. Let’s see what happens with the next update!
another dead fic. Shame. I kinda wanted to see a smaug displaced
Oh hey this is kinda interesting and- *Notices it only gets about 2k words updated per year* Nevermind.
Whaou ! New update! Interesting to see the doubt in Celestia's heart concerning Twilight and the vilains and that short ending with the shadow is great
ah... the mysterious non introduction to the drake f the hour. nice
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As soon as you said that hahahah
I had an idea
I remembered a certain part of LOTR, Lord of the Ring movies
Army of the dead
They are cursed traitors by Isildur
What if Chrysalis cursed her changelings for betraying her?
The same with Isildur he only said the curse but he didn't expect it to happen
Thou shalt be the last king, and if the west prove mightier than thy Black Master, this curse I lay upon thee and thy folk; to rest never until your oath is fulfilled. For this war will last through years uncounted, and you shall be summoned once again ere the end.
It happened thanks to contact with magic
I wonder how the dragons and ponies will react to seeing the first and strongest dragon king in the flesh. Awesome chapter dude, keep up the good work!!!
An attempt that was doomed to fail
But the wisdom and experience of a child
"Security geese"
The castle is now the most secure place in Equestria, there is nothing more dangerous than a pissed off goose.
ah, this came back?
nice, hope you don't take forever getting out the next chapter
will there be another chapter?
Hmmm, an intriguing concept for a creation story
So am are the translators not working on the first two phrases for anyone else, or is it just me?
I find the idea that Ember can't tell apart one brightly colored ponies with rather defining physical differences with another rather amusing. In retrospect, it makes sense though. They are very different species and the first time she saw a pony was probably back during the dragon migration.
Chrysalis's
Really?
was a neat chapter, hope to see Smaug in action soon. Good chap, keep it up.
Great chapter please do more
i have not seen this fanfic in a while and damn is it good to see again!!!
also just asking but is it possible if you could tell me why the chapter took almost a year to post? (i just wanna know since i completely forgot about this story after like april so ya just wanted to know)
Nice update after so long. Also how big is this Smaug? Cause im positive Tolkien dragons never stop growing.
Nice to see an update! Is the draconian speech a form of Black speech?
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Actually, I'm using the dragon language from Skyrim. Here's the website I use for rough translations:
https://www.thuum.org/translate-legacy.php
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one
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Considering he is into the size of canterlot mountain itself he's not as big as the biggest dragon in talking mythology but I bet he's at least 50% bigger than he was at the end of his life in Middle Earth. if you wondering why I'm estimating only 50% indeterminate growth slows with age they still grow it's just they grow so slow that it's hardly noticeable after reaching maturity since Smag is a physical and biological immortal, which was proven when he was killed by The Black arrow he will never age and can't die from disease meaning he will keep growing but it will be slow it still noticeable due to his long life though. The biggest talking dragon was actually the size of a mountain range by the way it was something something the black I don't remember his full name I haven't read the Silmarillion in a while so I forgotten his full name I do remember that he was one of the last great wyrms though