Sparks Fly

by TheTechspert19

The Rivalry Begins...

I made it to her cottage, suit, flower, and all. I knocked at her door and she was in the exact same dress she was in when she was at the Gala. I could not contain my excitement for what was going to happen! I was about to go on a date with somepony I had a crush on!

[Me]: um...hi Fluttershy. I brought you some flowers.

[Fluttershy]: Thanks. Those are real beautiful.

[Me]: Glad you approve.

[Fluttershy]: Come on in! Please have a seat in my living room.

[Me]: Ok. I'll be glad to!

[Fluttershy]: I had sent all the animals back to bed. So we shouldn't have any interruptions during our date.

[Me]: Great. That helps a lot.

[Fluttershy]: Go ahead and make yourself at home. I'll cook us up something delicious...I mean if that's ok with you.

[Me]: Yeah That's great!

After a while she made a wonderful dinner consisting of some fine ingredients she had picked out of her cottage. I'll be honest I really enjoyed her food more than the desserts at Sugarcube Corner...maybe it was because she made it with love...I don't know. Anyway after the dinner we sat down on her couch and began to talk about our interests, what she liked, what I liked, how I knew Twilight and Spike, it was amazing...but things heated up after that.

[Fluttershy]: So I understand you don't have a fillyfriend and a little birdie told me you had a crush on me...

[Me bowing my head in shame]: Guilty as charged. I can't help it...You're beautiful!

[Fluttershy looking at me while blushing]: Thanks...That really means a lot...

[Me looking at her while blushing]: No problem...you really are beautiful.

We started to lean into each other for a kiss when all of a sudden Pokeblox slammed the door wide open...

[Pokeblox]: Hey baby I think one of your animals got....what the hell? Hackalot?!

[Me]: Dude It's not what you think!

[Pokeblox]: Dude! After all these years you're stooping this low?! Stealing my filly?!

[Me with a shocked face]: Fluttershy...is....your....fillyfriend?! Dude I seriously didn't know!

[Fluttershy]: Um...he really didn't.

[Pokeblox]: Not now baby... I got a old friend to take care of...

He looked at me with a death stare like look...and that's when I knew...I had not only lost a friend...but made a new enemy....

To be continued in Sparks Fly: The Rivalry

Comments

[TheTechspert19]

1294427
Oh just wait my friend...The Story shall get better in Book 2! "Sparks Fly: The Rivalry"

[StormkingArcana]

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In all seriousness, this looks good. I'll take a look later on, and leave a more detailed review then.

-Gaul from iBrony

[Joy Stick]

1294582
So... Fluttershy... and adultery...
...
No. Absolutely not.

[TheTechspert19]

1294643
Thanks! It's my first fanfic and I'm glad to see it's getting reviews like this.

[TheTechspert19]

1294649
That's just how the story goes....believe me this will get more as the story progresses

[Joy Stick]

1294662
Looking forward to it.

[TheTechspert19]

1294694
Get yourself Ready for Book 2! It's going to be a wild ride!

[Joy Stick]

1294705
Just don't mess up Fluttershy to much.
Can anybrony here even think of Fluttershy cheating?!
Its like TwiLuna. It makes no sense.

[TheTechspert19]

1294736
What are you talking about? My head doesn't even make any sense! I'm crazy that way!

[Joy Stick]

1294747
Just be caerful with Fluttershy.
Thats my OC's cousin, and he's letting you date her.
Don't dissapoint Joy Stick.

[TheTechspert19]

1294763
No promises. jk

[Joy Stick]

1294811
Joy Stick is watching you. Forever.
BTW have you read my first fic yet?

[TheTechspert19]

1294827
Not yet...Been busy with college, and brainstorming for "The Rivalry" But I will soon...I just need FimFictions.net to go mobile...It be a lot easier to read fanfics!

[Joy Stick]

1294845
My friend (Rainbow Dashz) usually reads fics on his phone...

[TheTechspert19]

1294859
...HOW?!?!?! I couldn't!

[Joy Stick]

1294863
IDK. But he did read my first fic on his phone. He sat on the stairs leading to my home while reading it because magic.

[TheTechspert19]

1294883
hmm...does he have a iPhone or Droid or what? Because I got a iPod Touch...4G...Jailbroken....

[Joy Stick]

1294888
Pretty sure its an android.

[TheTechspert19]

1294900
Dang..

[Joy Stick]

1294910
Dang indeed. This also means you can't read my awesome (or so the commenters say) fic on a phone

[TheTechspert19]

1294918
CURSE YOU APPLE!!! >:( I'm hoping to change that however... Google actually did come out with their answer to the iPod touch...It's called the Samsung Galaxy Player...and with my birthday being next month...it should be as good as mine.

[Joy Stick]

1294928
Google makes their own phones? dabuq?

[TheTechspert19]

1294958
Well Technically it's Samsung that comes out with their own phones...Google just provides the operating system with the crazy names...like 4.0 Ice Cream Sandwich, and 4.1 Jelly Bean!

[Joy Stick]

1294965
Again: dabuq?!

[TheTechspert19]

1294979
Sorry...My Techspeak must go right over your head...

[Joy Stick]

1294992
No thats not what happened. Ice cream? Jelly bean? were you serious?

[TheTechspert19]

1295005
As a heart attack...Go on youtube and look up Google I/O 2011 and 2012. You'll understand more there.

[Joy Stick]

1295019
I think i'll stay here...
lol the majority of the comments are you and I replying to eachother.

[TheTechspert19]

1295027
I know right?

[Joy Stick]

1295036
Like, OMG, right?

[TheTechspert19]

1295058
Sparks Fly: The Rivalry awaiting submission
and coming soon... Sparks Fly: Awakening

[Joy Stick]

1297118
*Arm Pump*

[TheTechspert19]

1298176
Just wait till "The Rivalry"

[TheTechspert19]

1298948
It's almost time...

[Joy Stick]

1298964
*Grabs Popcorn and waits even though hates popcorn *

[TheTechspert19]

1298978
Keep your eyes on my page...

[TheTechspert19]

1300686
Thank you! The story's cool too!

[TheTechspert19]

1300699
Just wait my friend...until Book 2...."The Rivalry" And this book...will be INTERACTIVE

[TheTechspert19]

1300795
Wasn't going for that...

[LittleBoyBlue]

Oh Gawd.
Unexpected cliffhanger!
Ok, not trying to be a grammar Nazi here, but dude, use quotation marks. They're your friends.
Can't wait till sequel.
Good job ma friend.
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[TheTechspert19]

1300842
Thank you thank you. I'll keep that in mind when writing "The Rivalry". And Quick heads up...It's INTERACTIVE...With 4TH WALL BREAKING!

[LittleBoyBlue]

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GREAT ODIN'S RAVEN!

[CrimsonQuake]

Too tired to read right now but you were recommended to me by another user so I'll read this when I have the time and energy.

[TheTechspert19]

1554313
Not a problem!

[batran]

I found this is the Pewdiepie group folder

[TheTechspert19]

2352478
That you did