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When Ra'zaan, a mercenary Khajiit known for taking difficult jobs from the higher ups in Cyrodill, takes a job from the Mage's Guild's Arch-Mage to go investigate a disturbance near Anvil, he gladly excepts. what happens next is something that not even the Mage that sent him on this quest could see coming. Ra'zaan seemingly falls off the face of Nirn! He wakes up in a very unfamiliar place, and sees no way to return home. Where is he? How did he get here? ...How can he get home?....

(Warning! I plan to have quite a few instances of violence and blood-shed in this. If this is not your thing, please, do not read this story.)

(About Image: I had an extremely hard time doing this. I couldn't find any pictures that I thought would work. Instead, I drew the Khajiit in paint (Not too bad is it?) and edited him into a picture of Ponyville from a distance. If anyone wants to try and find/make a better picture, please feel free, because I'm no artist.)

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That is not a Khajjit, that's Tony the Tiger.

And just a heads up, by the time of Skyrim, the mages guild is long gone, so, are you basing this on oblivion or pre-Skyrim?

This is my first story I've ever written, so please comment and critique it so I can get better! :ajsmug:

116167 Also, the mages guild is not gone, it's just gone underground by Skyrim's time, and Tony the Tiger...really?

You used the word feet instead of hoove:rainbowlaugh:

I was thinking about doing a crossover of my character in Skyrim. Him being sent to Equestria by some weird Dwemer Technology in Blackreach. OR Being sent to it after the explosion at the college of winterhold. He's an orc male, werewolf, dark brotherhood, thives guild, companion, and he's in the legion and only lvl 32.

Tracked, and yay! Someone else who likes kahjiit! :yay:

That really has some potential. Cannot wait for the rest.

I can tell this will go "purrrrfectly!":twilightsheepish:

this storys gonna be puurfect:)

I love your story you captured the voices of the ponies amazingly.

i normally don't like Khajiit's because in every "Elder Scrolls" i've played, they are always pissed at me for a strange reason.
Other than that i like this 'un.

116311 O_O Don't freak out the citizens of Equestria as a werewolf!

116476 I think it has to do with your race, or your personality is low?

116211 I'm not sure what you mean be that. Care to elaborate? :applejackunsure:

116362 116453 Thanks, I'm trying my hardest to get everything right. :ajsmug:

116476 Khajiit are usually bandits or thieves, so it makes sense that they'd usually be the ones attacking you. :ajbemused:

116167
yup i agree, now known as Tony

great idea though, can't wait to see more!

This is a story about ponies and when you put feet ponies have hands:pinkiesad2:

117352 Ra'zaan has hands and feet...If you see somewhere where I put hands instead of hooves for the ponies, please tell me where. :applejackunsure:

Oh razaan is human oops but but you also used the term everyone when it supposed to be evrypony now i get it :flutterrage::unsuresweetie:

I like this story so far though "he must be in some other realm, because Cyrodill was the empire's main city." is wrong. Cyrodill is the Empire's main province,not city. Other than that, this story is interesting and I'll be following it.

119734 Thanks, I didn't catch that! I make the change as soon as I can. :ajsmug:

Hmm it was rather good , here is where it gets tricky , what I think you should try is this : meet princess , wait a bit , pop up baddies , and have him save some important pony a Khajiit way [ agility and stuff]

120094

Are you implying Khajjits are all gymnastics proffesors?

if so, you are correct.

Its great bro. Cant wait for the next two parts.:pinkiehappy:

120641 Thanks for the compliment, but the two chapters you're seeing aren't to the end, it's just what I have written. I plan to have it much longer than that.

Oh god... I am pathetic. I just watched that fanfic where pinkie and rainbow torture an OC, twilight and rarity by making them watch cupcakes. I am traumatized now... I keep thinking a psycho killer will pop up from anywhere and spill my guts all over the room. I am fucked! :fluttercry:

I preferred being a breton or a argonian in Oblivion mostly because of magic and use of not contracting deadly deseases.In Skyrim id prefer a nord or a high elve for making a warlock character or being a well experienced weaponsmith and barbarian...but whats the big deal with Khajiit? I mean BOOOORRRRIIIIIINNNNNGGG :pinkiegasp:

I am a khajiit and I jump and I steal and I stab don't mind me just singing my khajiit song.

Let the ass kicking, BEGIN!

GRAB A DAEDRA SWORD, BOW AND DAGGER! GET A MASTER FIREBALL SPELL AND MASTER FLARE SPELL FOR CROWD CONTROL AND TAKING OUT SINGLE ENEMIES! GET GLASS ARMOUR! Sorry, let my Oblivion side get to me... :twilightblush:

Nox

...ok, I have an interesting theory:

Equestria is actually a re-purposed Oblivion Realm that the long-since dethroned Discord, Daedric Prince of Chaos and Disharmony, created long ago. When the mysterious Elements of Harmony somehow made their way into the realm, they set off a chain of events that lead to Celestia and Luna taking over, being being Demi-Daedric-Princesses themselves.

Daedra are not, despite some views, inherently evil. So...all ponies, and all equestrian races are, in fact...Daedric beings mimicking the mortal world without knowing it.

Whoa, deep...

128522 That's a very interesting idea you have there, Nox. You should do a story for it. :ajsmug:

HEY wait a F***ing second , Khajiit can see in the dark with no friggin problem , I mean If I learned anything from the Dark BrotherHood is how is it is to kill when the night and shadows hide you [ *Hint hint * Thieves guild reference ] ! I guess he could blame fatigue but do you know how hard it is to slit a throat in broad daylight ? Its much easier at night but aside from that little annoyance this story is rather good !

128630 ...wait a minute.... whats the problem?!?

By the way, I would like to hear what you all think. I'm trying my hardest to keep my planned schedule, so I'm afraid I might start having more mistakes. :ajsmug:

133059 this is really awesome!!! I don't know why you think this is bad. Spelling errors here and there but it's still good! If Golam was a high elf, Ra'zaan would do great with his flare spell!

Fluttershy haz new pet kitty. Lol jk I dont know yet.. seems very good

Soooo... This is 50 years after Skyrim? Awesome. Also, it seems as though Ra'zaan worships nine deities, not eight. What happened in between Skyrim and the current story? Did the Stormcloaks win? Or did the Empire win? Did the Aldmeri Dominion lose? ANSWER MY QUESTIONS! Pretty please...?

I'm feeling a mix of :twistnerd: and some :yay: and a little :derpytongue2: from thi story. Whatever that means..

134757 Very good point. I was on the side of the Imperials in Skyrim, but not the Aldmeri Dominion. If I had my way, after the war in Skyrim is over the empire would double-cross the Aldmeri, and bring Talos back. That's kinda where I was going with that. I was hoping no one would ask, cause this excuse is kinda bad if I do say so myself...

136568 Lol, what? I'm hoping that means you liked it... :raritywink:

This is my first try at a fight scene, but I hope I did pretty well... Please tell me how I did! :ajsmug:
Also, I'm trying to keep my schedule of ever three days, but it's getting more and more difficult... :applejackunsure:

I REALLY want Nadene and Halius to die... SOON. Nice job, though I think Ra'zaan needs to be quicker on the draw. He is a Warrior after all.

I am getting really pissed at those necromancers! (if that's what they are) I agree with St.Patrick, those two better die soon! :twilightangry2: I cannot wait for all of those morons to die by Ra'zaan. :pinkiecrazy:

BWAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! :rainbowlaugh:
Best reaction to the mane 6 I have read! Ohhhh, you have made my day, sir.

Well, here's chapter six! I hope your all enjoying reading this as much a I enjoy writing it! I'd love to here what you all think of this! :ajsmug:

I may or may not be able to reach the next three day deadline, I'm sorry to say. I've got a lot going on so we'll just have to see how things go. :ajsleepy:

"Heheh. Go. Run, Cat. Lead us right where we need to go. Don't worry, Kynan. We'll be coming for you..." Ysura thought to herself, a malicious grin spreading across her face as she watched to train. "That's it, straight back to that city... full of hundreds of guards... and with the high ground... and fortifications... and two goddesses." Her grin quickly faded.
She looked back at her groups small force of brainwashed ponies. "We're going to need more ponies."

148451Exactly!
I think Twilight should teach Ra'zaan a few spells. Maybe telekinesis first?

For a second there, I thought you were going to kill off AJ! :fluttercry::pinkiesad2::applecry:

157693 Kill off AJ?!? never! Applejack is best pony in my eyes. Now Rarity...

Only kidding! :pinkiehappy:

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