(Sequel to 'The Lost Mercenary')
Ra'zaan and Nadene are home, or at least they're new home. Ponyville has welcomed the duo of bipeds with open arms after the events that occurred with Golam and the other mages. They've been living life as normally as possible for a while, and things are perfect. That is, until a blast from the ex-warrior's and ex-mage's past shows up uninvited. How will Ra'zaan and Nadene deal with the new developments? Who or what is this problem, and how did it get into Equestria? Can Ra'zaan and Nadene save the town and possibly the entire world from this new threat...?
As this is a Sequel, I'd advise any new readers to read 'The Lost Mercenary' before getting into this story, although it isn't required.
As with 'The Lost Mercenary', I plan to have scenes of violence in this. If this is not what you are wanting to read, then this may not be the story for you. At the present time, I don't see this being as full of fighting as the first, though.
Awesome! A sequel!
Alright! As the description said, this is a sequel of my first fic, 'The Lost Mercenary'. Please feel free to comment and give criticism or just tell me what you liked or didn't like about it. I'll be trying to update this fairly often, so please keep watching!
Sweet this is an good sequel you nailed it all in one hit. Even better was the Nirnroot can't wait to see what happends to it later. Oh yes you got the Guest in Oblivion done....it sure was a pain to get them. lucky the regrow in skyrim after a longer time than other plants and stuff. all that was a pain was the Crismon Nirnroot Quest. Anyways good store :D
Here's chapter 1! I never this to my proofreader, so there may be some mistakes here and there. Tell me if you spot any. I'm trying to update as frequently as I can, but writer's block is a pain in the flank sometimes, ya know? As always, please comment!
Awesome! Some Scamps are never too bad..for targets. Good chapter as usual.
Oh dear god don't tell me Sheogorath's in Equestria!
...I think I know who this mysterious figure is, but I won't spoil it.
Sheogorath ? Great something tells me the douche will reenact that stupid little prophecy you had to make come true so you can get Wabjack !
By Azura, by Azura, by Azura! A worshipper of Sheogorath is all up in Equestria!
This will be interesting.
I once dug a pit and I filled it full of clouds... or was it clowns? Eh, no matter, didn't even slow him down! In fact, all it did was start to smell. Hmm, must have been clowns. Clouds don't smell, they taste of butter... and tears.
I think a certain Prince of Madness is taking a vacation in Equestria. I supose it beats the mind of a deceased, homicidal Emperor.
CHEESE FOR EVERYPONY!
I'm SO sorry this took so long! I've test after test after BUCKING test for two weeks now! I'll try to update more often, but I can't promise anything with how everything is going. I hope you enjoy the chapter, and don't forget to comment please!
CHEESE FOR EVERYONE!!! lol I lost it at the cheese cutie mark, same with the scamps and the hot air balloon.
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Hello everypony! Stain and crew are here, looking at TES/FiM crossover story: Never Truly Retired
Today we have a special guest. All hail Cauterium!
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png So, this day has finally came, eh? Hafta admit, it was hard to get rid of Narcissus for a few hours.
i44.tinypic.com/1440085.png Hey, Cauterium, i have a question for you! Is Narcissus gay?
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png Nope, he is just a narcissist. A very annoying one.
i44.tinypic.com/1440085.png Then why are you with him?
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png I have my reasons.
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Ok, let's dig into Prologue!
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"He had an apple red plain T-shirt"
i44.tinypic.com/1440085.png Neither TES nor FiM has T-shirts.
i42.tinypic.com/16m93ck.png Or maybe our little catball has invented it himself, eh?
i43.tinypic.com/w2kmfo.png So, khadjit is working for AJ and Danmer for Pinkie?... What the hell?
i42.tinypic.com/16m93ck.png I guess catbutt just want to steal everything from this dumb farmer, it's best what his pathetic race can do.
i44.tinypic.com/1440085.png And danmer may be researching Pinkie's special abilities.
"as it was always available through Fluttershy"
i40.tinypic.com/2h6y8eg.png Fish is alive too, you know. Fluttershy would never catch and sell fish!
"I wonder what AJ will have me do today? She's been trying to vary the work she has me do so I don't get bored. Not that I would but..."
i42.tinypic.com/16m93ck.png Go on, catbutt. I bet her work for you today is something like finishing off a dragon that burning her farm
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png It was already happened in other story, Cau. In Long Distance to be exact
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png Ah, that story when pussiest dragon ever was defeated by throwing dirt in his mouth?
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png It was a good story!
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png Hmph.
"How 'bout you and me head back over ta Ponyville an' work mah apple cart fer the day?"
i42.tinypic.com/16m93ck.png Ideal work for a fragile cat dude! Or how about making him move a farm wheel? I am sure he is perfect for it!
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Cauterium, please, stop it.
"strolling"
i44.tinypic.com/e8weuf.png They see me strollin'
They hatin'
i42.tinypic.com/16m93ck.png Get out here, you! I AM the guest reviewer here!
"As Twilight dripped a small amount of Werewolf's blood onto the circle"
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“I guess it's just a habit. I did it for every mission I took back in my world, and I suppose I do it without thinking. Want to hear about one of my missions? I have the few I put in this journal still at the front, after all.”
i42.tinypic.com/16m93ck.png Oh, good idea to show her missions! I bet there are missions like "killing dragon" or "Steal all goods from royal palace"
“~ I've arrived at Water's Edge. The people seem friendly enough, but talk of the fish is widespread. I better talk to the leader of the town for any useful information.”
i41.tinypic.com/spenhf.png Misha would just in nearby pond and start to beating fish up! And then brew their fisheggs, flower and butterfly into an invisibility potion to steal Vodka!
"I had to leave my armor behind and only bring my sword and dagger because I had to swim though."
i41.tinypic.com/spenhf.png Just throw out 20 circles of cheese, ton of unused potions and crappy shield you accidently stole from shop trying to start a conversation with it's owner.
"Another thousand Septims in my pocket"
i41.tinypic.com/spenhf.png THOUSAND? Even for killing hundred of those useless fishes you won't get THOUSAND! HUNDRED IS A MAXIMUM!
"They are currently living in Bruma***"
i44.tinypic.com/1440085.png Heh, old man. Why are you swearing like that? Not fitting you to swear like a kid!
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Ok, that wraps this chapter.
OVERVIEW:
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png First of all, sorry for our guest's behavior
i42.tinypic.com/16m93ck.png Sorry for me again and i'll strike you with Green Hunters
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Shut up! We are here not to troll!
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png I am not trolling, i am helping writer to improve!
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Okay, whatever. Just be a little less nitpicky
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png I promise nothing
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png TES and Mlp... That's why Stalin don't like crossovers. These things are completely diffirent.
i41.tinypic.com/spenhf.png But story seems interesting! And writing style is good!
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png It may be, but i here getting mixed feelings about that. We shall finish stalinview on this story, but it shall be last crossover we shall look at.
i44.tinypic.com/1440085.png Ok, if you say so...
STAY TUNED FOR STALINVIEW OF NEXT CHAPTER!
Sheogorath : i2.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/006/550/feel-like-a-sir-template.jpg
Nice story btw.
378155 Thanks for the review so far Stalin! Oh, and just so you know, this is actually a Sequel to my first fiction, The Lost Mercenary. A few of the things you noted were put through more detail in the first story, including how the two of them got there and a bit of back-story. If you are confused about anything, you might want to read that one. It could clear a lot up.
378364 I know, right?
376675 Had to do the cutie mark thing. And the balloons... let's just say Ra'zaan is getting a kick out of these scamps. heh.
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I figured that out.Unfortunately, i literally have no time to read a huge story like this, so this is perspective of a new reader
380536 No problem, just thought I'd let you know. In that case, just send me a message or leave a question in a comment if you want anything explained.
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Stalin ad crew here, bringing another installation of Stalinview!
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Today, Cauterium is bysy searching new candidates of anti-elements wielders, so we making review without him!
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Let's dig into Chapter 1 - Forces Unknown!
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"He'd grown used to the daily hustle and bustle of the nice little town, and I enjoyed every second of it"
i43.tinypic.com/w2kmfo.png "You" enjoyed every second of it?
""Ouch! What in Talos's name was that?!" Nadene yelled, regaining her sight after the collision. She looked down and saw a familiar gray mare sitting on her chest."
i44.tinypic.com/1440085.png SURPRISE RAPE!
i40.tinypic.com/2h6y8eg.png Oh, shut up, Pioneer Dash...
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"Ha ha ha! I haven't had a good laugh in a while! These ponies should be real fun to mess with... and~... now I'm bored. Hungry, too. I wonder what kind of cheese this world has..." The figure said before vanishing completely."\
i41.tinypic.com/spenhf.png Wild Sheogorath appears!
i44.tinypic.com/1440085.png Don't we have Discord already?
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png DONT MENTION HIS NAME!!!
"it was easy to spot the only other two-legged humanoid in a Equestria"
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Diamond dogs are concidered bipedal humanoids. Plus there are bipedal dragons.
"Sorry, girls. I sometimes forget that you never had to learn things like being about to sense when you are being followed or not." Ra'zaan began.
i41.tinypic.com/spenhf.png Umm, guess no other resident of Cydodyil can sense being followed. Moreover, they have a pretty... bad memory.
For example, after hiding behind the rock after impaling bandit's head with twelve arrows, bandit shall forget about you and keep doing his daily stuff
"scamps"
i41.tinypic.com/spenhf.png Scamp's skin is not red, well at least not in Skyrim. It's gray!
"Wait, does that mean that Mehrunes Dagon*** is here?! That would be really bad!" The Dark Elf seemed to be hyperventilating."
i41.tinypic.com/spenhf.png Yea. "Bad". This weakling won't survive a single hit from the elements of harmony
"Wait... right... killing is bad here"
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"Staff of the Everscamp^"
i44.tinypic.com/1440085.png What "^" for?
OVERVIEW:
i41.tinypic.com/spenhf.png Misha like where this story is going!
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png I agree, this is getting interesting
STAY TUNED FOR THE NEXT STALINVIEW
382572 Thanks for pointing that mistake out, and the ^... check the bottom of the story. I leave little notes for anyone that's never played to game, and depending on how many notes I leave, I put different symbols. For example, the first note is a *, the second is **, the third is ***, and the fourth is ^, and so on and so forth. Hope that helped!
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I noticed stars, but still "***" looks like censored swearing ;)
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png We are here again, bringing another installation of Stalinview!
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png I am here again!
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Yes, you are. Now let's dig into Chapter 2 - Little Problems!
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"she used her magic to forcefully drag the scamps to the middle of the room and hold them there"
i43.tinypic.com/pvww5.png Sounds awfully like "Magnet" spell from Kingdom Hearts franchise!
"Spike, meanwhile, was taunting them and laughing loudly"
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Bad idea...
"Staff of the Everscamp"
i43.tinypic.com/pvww5.png By the way guys, you are lucky that it was Scamp's staff, not that rose which summons Dremoras...
"The staff was created by Sheogorath"
i43.tinypic.com/pvww5.png Only staff he created is Wabbajack, which is far more dangerous than scamps.
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png Ah, i remember this weapon! What can be much pleasant than turning your enemy into pile of dust?
i43.tinypic.com/pvww5.png Seem's like you have never transformed enemy in dremora with Wabbajack, Cau
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png Oh, i did a lot! But another hit is enough to turn them into rabbits! Mwa-ha-ha!
i43.tinypic.com/pvww5.png Let me guess your playstyle. Running around and killing people?
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png Why, yes! And picking flowers and butterflies in process
"Only... he's quite a bit more dangerous."
i43.tinypic.com/pvww5.png He's not. He was never been agressive and never wreaked havoc around the world or even single town. He just likes to "play" with people, usually ONE.
"with six different, colored, different flavored jellies"
i44.tinypic.com/1440085.png Too much "different"
"Suddenly, the four scamps appeared right next to Ra'zaan, and a scream could be heard several thousand feet away."
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png Nice try, catass
OVERVIEW:
i44.tinypic.com/14b8d9c.png Story is interesting indeed, but there is something wrong with Sheogorath here
i43.tinypic.com/pvww5.png Sheogorath is out of character! In TES he is FRIGGING INSANE! Completely insane!
i42.tinypic.com/axb81i.png Yeah, always telling random things, always trolling. I can't imagine what is happening in his head, but defenetely not thoughts you've put in.
i43.tinypic.com/pvww5.png Try to make Sheo more crazy in the next chapters.
385390 Trust me: He's like this for now, but I'm going to make him QUITE A BIT more insane later on. He is only like this for the time being as he tries to figure out what to do. Which won't take more than about halfway through the next chapter!
Also, he can be dangerous actually. Sheogorath is neither Good nor Bad. He plays no side, and will either help or deter a person from what they need. There are some situations where this turns to more malevolent things.
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But still he isnt more dangeros than discord. Discord is playing with tons of ponies and even with a fabric of reality, wlike sheo picking single victims
One trait of Sheogorath I remember is his tendancey to switch between moods mid sentence. One moment he'll be spouting somthing crazy in a cheerful tone, and the next he'll lower his voice and sound like he's going to kill everyone. Maybe include a bit more of that?
449943 Like I said, I'll be trying to work with his personality a bit more down the road. Thanks for the tip, though!
Sheogorath and Discord teaming up in Equestria? This is the best thing since pancakes!
-Glassed
Asking the Daedra Prince of Madness if he is mad ? Seriously -.- ? Anyone who played Shivering Isles knows who Sheogorath truly is ! A being that is ancient and powerful blah blah blah Discord blah blah blah , Daedra Princes cannot be killed , considering his state however , while unkillable Sheo might help just whenever he feels like it. All in all , its good so far, what most should not forget tho is that immortality and longevity are 2 different things.
I still think Sheogorath is out of character.
550811 I don't really think he has a character... he's just too damn random. Now that I think about it I wonder if him and Pinkie are ever going to have a random-off *shudders*
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Everyone has character, even Sheogorath. Even his actions can be predicted, too a certain degree.
639114 If you've ever played Elder Scrolls he is even more unpredictable than Discord.
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I own Skyrim and Shivering Isles, so I've been around him long enough to get a decent idea of his character.
He generally has two sides to him, thus why the Shivering Isles is split into Mania and Dementia. His manic side tends to be a little more joking, as he speaks cheerfully and talks about a whole range of things, from cheese, to Haskil, to skipping rope with intestines. This is his 'random madness' side. His demented side is a very darker kind of madness, where he tends to make a lot more threats and speaks in a low, threatening tone. This is his 'evil/sadistic madness' side.
He switches between these two sides sporatically, once sentence can be manic, and the next demented.
Look at that! I lied, I read it now!
*Sits down* Fine...Im done.
but shergorath isnt evil
i liked himm in oblivion he was friendly
831703 Never said he was evil... just mildly over the top. Evil, and Mad, are two VERY different things. You'll see where I'm going with it... if I ever get my ass in gear and get it written... sorry about that BTW everyone...
Alright. I have no excuse this time, or at least one that count, anymore. Two months... wow... I... I don't even... Sorry everyone. I had testing prep, tests, and all sorts of other destractions... I honestly forgot to write. This monday I start a job, so I'll be even more destracted... I'll try hardest to write more often though. I know it's kind of short, but thanks to those of you that were patient!
OMG THIS SUCKS I WATATIED TEW MOTNHS FRO TIHS?! U IS NOB AUFOR AND I UNFOLLOW YUO. STOPUID NAB!
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Oh yes. I wholeheartedly agree.
Sheogorath: the most dangerous of all things, except when he's not.
I can guess there off to the isles
639145 Finally someone understands my dad!...oops!
I think you should start this story back up you left it at a really bad time hun you got everyone's heart going and then nothing hehe but I understand why so many other things goin on, it's really good so far