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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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“What's that coming over the hill?/Is it a monster? Is it a monster?” – The Automatic, ‘Monster’

Spike is beginning to feel neglected. He tries his best, but he's only one little dragon. As he is pushed more and more, his rage builds up within him....and causes him to change.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 17 )

You sure do love Spike dont you.

1138194
Can you blame him? Spike is best non-pony

1138218 No argument here.

1138194 Spike is fun to write for in character, and his lines can be fun.

1138218 Best non-pony? Please, he is best pony.

1138238
Noooo, I'm pretty sure Spike is best non-pony. Derpy is best pony :derpytongue2::trollestia::moustache:

took a little long but the story is starting to get interesting. wished the chapters were longer

i find it funny how Twilight literally says i feared the worse i don't know why but i laughed when i read that part :rainbowlaugh:

what does this have to do with drown from the name of the chapter i half expected somepony to drown in a lake or something :unsuresweetie:

kinda strange on the sudden growth spurt:unsuresweetie: but i'm not complaining now he looks BADASS :pinkiehappy:

i wasn't expecting Spike to go and destroy the town i just thought he was walking home and the ponies were freaking out:unsuresweetie:

at first i thought it was kind of dumb how he rampaged just cause what Twilight said but then i remembered that the show had him rampage over greed so yeah anger and saddens makes more sense then greed so yeah good story :pinkiehappy:

It's starting to portray how Spiek is slowly drowning in his frustration, I mean the drake works really hard give him a lucky break for once!

Yes. Rage on my little dragon! Grow stronger and bigger!

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