This story is a sequel to Daybreaker steals Twilight
After being abducted by Daybreaker, Twilight's memories of the wedding rehearsal were erased. Now her guilt ridden friends wish to forget about how they abandoned her as well. But they worry that Twilight will eventually remember what they did and not forgive them. Conflict emerges between them as they struggle whether to tell her the truth or not. Meanwhile, Twilight Velvet means to protect her children by any means necessary, and Celestia is having doubts about whether or not she should be ruler anymore.
Chapters (5)
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Its okay.
Mama Bear mode has been activated and edited it.
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No kidding! She's not messing around.
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No, she is not!
nice work
mothers gotta protecc
Wow, this story is off to a good start.
Obviously she will forgive them. But heck with it! I wanna see their guilt consume them, as their minds are consumed by fear and regret! And soon, they will fall into madness....MUHAHAHAHAHA!
To be fair it probably would be better if they element bearers that had actual training for the roles.
Fear definitely makes for irrational action.
10199375 True.
Sad, but true.
Great chapter Sam. Maybe for the next chapter, Velvet tells Twilight and Shining that they're right: they need to keep their positions and Equestria needs them, and that they can make their own decisions. She says that she overreacted and apologizes for it.
I wonder how much lying AJ can handle since she is the element of HONESTY. I think AJ might accidentally blurt about everything that Twilight forgot. That is just my thoughts of what might happen.
Nice work
Ouch. Talk about a low blow. I mean, it's understandable that Velvet is upset about her daughter being hurt, but still!
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It's a lose-lose situation. If Applejack tells Twilight the truth herself, she could re-open old wounds by bringing up painful memories, which would put even more of a strain on their friendship then the wedding. But if she keeps the truth from Twilight and she finds out some other way, it'll also lead to serious trust issues and Twilight will not only be mad about incident, but lying about it as well.
I just realized something, will Shining Armor continue to not mention that he kicked Twilight out of his wedding?
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I think even he knows he can't do that.
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He’ll have to tell Twilight sooner or later. Or Twilight will find out herself.
er.
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No, just Daybreak.
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I know, just kidding.
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Yeah, that was kind of a pun there I thought.
Mama Bear's calmed down I see. Guess next time we'll see more on how the others are feeling, and how well they apologize to Twilight.
Wonder if Twi will tell her friends she knows or wait to see if they intend to own up.
nice work
Time to find out how Twilight will act in front of Celestia and her friends.
Great chapter Sam!
*blinks in confusion*
Bit abrupt there Tia.
nice work
Ah geez, now it’s time for Celestia.
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This spiraled way out of control compared to my original idea for this...
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Good one.
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I accidentally hit the italics button in there while fixing something.
Wow. What is Celestia thinking? Is she going to retire or end her own life?
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I was certain that it was retire, but when I saw that... that is a grim thought.
However, do you see a suicide tag?
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She is distraught right now I guess. I was thinking more on the lines of leave Equestria in self imposed exile.
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Then Twilight and Velvet will go to Celestia as she's about to leave and tell her that she can't just quit being a leader and leave Equestria all together. Twilight reminds her that the subjects still need her and all that stuff. Celestia eventually forgives herself as Twilight had forgiven her and decides to stay.
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No. I just thought it was going in that direction.
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I hope not. I'm sure they'll do something about keeping Celestia around.
Good ending. I liked how you made this trilogy with it's own twists like Celestia turning into Daybreaker, something I don't recall happening much, if at all, in Canterlot wedding fics.
I thought of my own twist on the Canterlot wedding fallout that'll be more comedic than the usual ones, but not yet 100% sure if I'll write it.
nice work
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Yeah she never turned into Daybreaker, aside from Season 9 premiere in Twilights vision from Sombras fear spell.
Kind of hoped someone would slap some sense in to her. Figurative is better than nothing.
You did a great job turning a fanfic about Daybreaker vs. Chysalis into a decent trilogy. You even made a spin-off fanfic about if Twilight died.
I really enjoyed all three of the stories. This was a really good concept and I’m glad Celestia, snapped out of it at the end.
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Thanks. This all started from a what if Twilight had fought Chrysalis first.
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Weird seeing you in the green and not the purple.
Was very good