Starlight's wedding Day comes, and she is nervous about it.
Part of the Luster Dawn Successor Verse.
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SamSwordsman123
30 year old man from California who likes to fight with swords. Author of Successor, Love Mark, and Daybreaker at Canterlot Wedding Verses.
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Very cute wedding story.
10058932
Thank you.
10058941
You're very welcome.
10058946
Hey I saw you had Goodbye My Child in your library as well? Did you know I made a sequel?
10058951
I'd forgotten you had made a sequel, I'll have to give it a look.
10058951
Will you be making a sequel to this story, as well?
10059036
It's actually part of my Passing on Together universe. I might try a sex scene between Starlight and Sunburst though.
Great story. Those two are perfect together
10059038
I see you’re gonna go through the dark side
10059262
Well, thought I might try new things. A lot people like that.
This was sweet; my absolute favorite pony couple.
10059398
Thanks Jay! This story is doing much better than the one a couple days ago. Guess I need to not be so hateful toward immortality.
10059303
yeah, we gotta try new things every day
a random dude robbed a bank and when he was caught he said he was trying new things
no offense to you haha
i need mental help
Aw this was really cute! Good job!
10059961
Thank you very much!
Feels rushed, but otherwise okay
10060572
Rushed huh? Well, I wasn't particularly aiming for something long. But thanks for the advice. Anything you think could be added?
10060605
Maybe a few more details on the wedding itself, or maybe a bit from Sunburst’s perspective
I like this story. Very good job! 👍🏼
You forgot to put “teacher” between “former” and “Princess”.
10065242
Thanks. Fixed.
Daww. I always was a sucker for weddings. I love this ship.
10132584
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Adorable story.Profact Ending for Starlight.OK，thats enough.
Nice work,could i translate it into Chinese?I promise bronies from China will love this story.
But...I just cant stand this:
She had changed from when she had moved to Canterlot. She was now a larger Alicorn of size comparable to Celestia, the former Ruler. Starlight had not heard from her and Luna in a long time, though she’d heard they were too sick to travel at the moment. Twilight had also somehow acquired the same flowing mane as those two former rulers. She looked so majestic, even without any dress on.
Sorry，I have to say I cant accept about this( If you allow me translate this story into Chinese.I probably do not translate it.Please forgiving me.(if you do not want,I ll translate it for sure.)
I ll leave a link here.
Please~
10143356
Sure. You can do that. But may I ask your problem with the part about Twilight? Im not clear on that. This story is part of my Passing On Together universe.
10143698
Uh...well,Wedding is a good story,good ending,right?But when i imagine Twilight become TURE-PRINCESS.I just cant...accept it.
It is all my fault,I want to read a 100%PERFECT story,
Im so sorry,but please forgiving me this time.
10143736
Pure Princess you mean? Well unfortunately that's what happens in canon and she gets Celestias body shape. Of course in the continuation of this universe she turns back to small if you read the other stories.
10143741
well,i just cant stand this.
10143746
Well if you say so.
OK,translation is done.
Link:https://fimtale.com/t/11749
Thank you.
en...whats the meaning of“Stewardess”？
10145314
A female steward, or person whose job it is to take of something.
10145532
not about word.
Why starlight is "stewardess of the Castle of Friendship"?
10146356
Because Twilight moved to Canterlot. Twilight left her to look after the castle.
10146380
OK,Thank you
This problem made a discussion even quarrel between me and another transtaler.
OK,now i know,but i think "stewardess" has A little inappropriate...
Well,my fault.
What a cute quick read, well done. Thumbs up from me.
10167471
Thank you.
Not bad a wedding story. I quite enjoy it
10213637
Thank you.
Oh, Trix...
You put the stories in the 'I want help with my stories' folder of the 'Please read my stories' group, so I assume you want help. This is gonna be long.
Comma after "darling".
Comma after "do". The fourth sentence should end with a question mark.
There should be an question mark after "Chrysalis" since it's the start of a new sentence.
"Nothing permanently damaging" or "no permanent damage".
Comma after "worried".
"...looked at her out of the corner of their..."
Comma before and after "Firelight".
Comma after "ready".
Comma before "dad". Also, "dad" should start with an uppercase.
"...future husband's side..."
"Gentlecolts" should start with a lowercase.
10232037
Thank you.
10232045
No worries. That's why the 'I want help for my stories' folder was created.
Gotta say, ever since I learned of Starlight's past, I was always fond of this pairing. Call me old-fashioned, but I'm a fan of childhood friend romances. While I know there's a lot of Starlight/Trixie shippers out there, it's nice to know this ship is still getting love, and I like the idea of Trixie supporting the pairing. Furthermore, I'm glad that you didn't mention any other pairings that were hinted to be "canon" in the finale, so I'm free to see it anyway I choose. Congratulations. You get a fave!
10246066
Thanks. At least someone likes a story today. I got quite a few dislikes since I joined a new group today.
Dude. Do you have a thing against happy full time, stories? This one is happy, far more than the rest of your stuff. But being a part of the universe that it is, that kinda goes out the window.
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Well you making Twilight outliving all her friends isnt a happy thing either. In a way we're both villains in some form or another. Your side tortures Twilight with generations of loss and my side kills her. We just make her happy by having her move on to find new happiness or be with her friends in death.
I dont exactly have a lot of happiness. I've pretty much cut myself off from it. Some of us just refuse to let new happiness in. Ever see Ashley Hs rememberance, I'm a bit like Cadence there. I haven't become bitter, but I'm refusing to let new happiness in. Sad thing, but the reality is not everyone moves on and is destroyed from within by their pain.
Somepony commented about this happy ending throwing them in for a loop due to your supposed tragic narrative direction. I congratulate you, there's nothing wrong with making a happy ending! And though I like the depressing idea of Twilight outliving her friends, I'm willing to read your take on how you deal with such topic. Writing is Magic!
10490373
Thank you.
Awww this is the most adorable story of Starlight and Sunburst shipping wedding 😍🥰